Talk:NFL Europe/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 13:27, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the ✅ tag to state when something is addressed.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Lede

 * Per WP:GEOLAND major landmasses don't need a link, so no need to linke North America and Europe in lede.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:58, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Same for the individual countries.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:58, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * association football (soccer) - no need to say soccer. Considering this is an article about a European league it's a bit surprising to hear an American expression like this.  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 15:58, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Punter pipes to a redirect.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:08, 19 January 2023 (UTC)

General

 * Same deal with linking to countries not being necessary.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Might be wise to translate the money to today's standards.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Fox became - probably best to say "television company Fox", to stop someone thinking an actual fox had done so (or someone else with that name).  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * NFL Europe League (NFLEL)- no need to use the acronym if it's never used again in the text,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * US$30 no need to say US.  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * when eight of the 32 NFL - be a bit careful with MOS:NUM. We expect numbers in the same paragraph to be either spelt or in number form. Consistency  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Andrei S. Markovits and Lars Rensmann - who are these people?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * annually in London[33] and has also hosted regular-season games in Mexico City and Toronto - just say annually in London, Mexico and Toronto.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Do we need flags in the table per MOS:ICON?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Otherwise everything is grand.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:18, 19 January 2023 (UTC)

Review meta comments

 * I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 13:27, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Be sure to tag me when you do start, . Toa Nidhiki05 03:45, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi! You'll likely get a message when I close this. I've dropped a few comments above for things I've seen, however, it's not enough to distract from a well written article. There's no reason for me not to pass, but if you get time, please check over the above. Passing.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:19, 19 January 2023 (UTC)