Talk:Nach dir, Herr, verlanget mich, BWV 150/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yash! (talk · contribs) 10:39, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

I will do this. Thanks,  Ya  sh  !   10:39, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * "possibly already" -> "possibly".
 * Link "Arnstadt".

History and text

 * Please mention who Jonathan Green was.
 * Also, W. G. Whittaker. We can probably link him as well.
 * Unlink "Mühlhausen" the second time.
 * References for the first two bullets?
 * Why is "DOKTOR CONRAD MECKBACH" in all caps? Wouldn't that inside "" without the capitalisation be better?
 * "which occurred in April 1707" -> "in April 1707".
 * Use the full name of Meckbach if possible.
 * Source for the last sentence?

Music

 * Can we have individual sub-sections?
 * "There are no recitatives, no da capo repeats, and there is no chorale tune." - why is it important to state that? If Bach uses them in his later or earlier or other works or if it is relevant in any manner, do mention that or else remove that statement.
 * "The musicologist" -> "Musicologist".
 * Are we missing the third movement?