Talk:Nagi Yanagi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zzzoom (talk · contribs) 14:41, 6 April 2018 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * It be helpful if some of the tables in Discography were sortable. Also, there are some tables with useless rows in that section.
 * Not sure how to do that, maybe can help here. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * The discography table doesn't need to be sortable but I would recommend title be listed in the first column as with Koda Kumi discography. AngusWOOF  ( bark  •  sniff ) 11:07, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * This whole section looks like it could work as a list.
 * That's how artist biographies are usually written though, right? A summary of their releases? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * I suppose so, after looking back. Zoom  ( talk page ) 02:47, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * Not sure that this is a source relating to the topic.
 * I've replaced it with an archive link; it seems the site got squatted since the time of publication. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * It would be helpful in the future to archive all of your references. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zzzoom (talk • contribs) 22:31, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Is this a requirement or just a recommendation? Just for clarification. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Just a recommendation! My bad. Zoom  ( talk page ) 02:47, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * As I've mentioned to you on Discord, no free images of Yanagi are known to exist, so not much I can do on that end. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Just make sure to follow through with the previously mentioned recommendations. Otherwise, good job!
 * Pass/Fail:
 * As I've mentioned to you on Discord, no free images of Yanagi are known to exist, so not much I can do on that end. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Just make sure to follow through with the previously mentioned recommendations. Otherwise, good job!
 * Pass/Fail: