Talk:Nakam/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 17:32, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

Opening statement
I am reviewing this article as the WikiProject Germany Coordinator, and am on good terms with the article nominator, Buidhe (previously Catrìona).

In reviews I conduct, I may make small copyedits. These will only be limited to spelling and punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. For replying to Reviewer comment, please use ✅,, , ❌, , or , followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. — Vami ♜  _IV♠  17:32, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

Prose
Having read the whole article over, the only prose issue I was able to find is An attack on nearby The bread for Langwasser came from a single bakery in Nuremberg.
 * Fixed. Thanks for the review! buidhe (formerly Catrìona) 21:01, 4 January 2019 (UTC)