Talk:Namárië/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 02:26, 26 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Hello once again! :) Hoping to get to this within a few hours.  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 02:26, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
 * On hold, pls ping me—go get 'em!  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 04:28, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Many thanks! I think that's all done now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:00, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Nice work! I am satisfied with these changes and can now confidently pass this article for GA status. As always, congrats on another fantastic Middle-earth article!  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 16:50, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check
No concerns from me. Quotations are used in-line with WP:COPYQUOTE.
 * Noted.

Files
All images are relevant, high quality and copyright-free:
 * : valid public domain rationale;
 * : CC-BY-SA 4.0;
 * : valid fair use rationale;
 * : CC-BY-SA 4.0.
 * Noted.

Prose

 * The caption of the first image should end with a full stop for consistency with the other captions.
 * Full stops at the end of captions only for complete sentences...
 * I did not initially realise that caption four was a complete sentence.


 * Could you mention in the lead that Quenya was constructed by Tolkien?
 * Done.


 * "songs from Middle-earth" – wikilink Middle-earth.
 * Added.


 * "From 1997 to 2005 the" – needs a comma.
 * Done.


 * Wikilink mezzosoprano.
 * Done.


 * "who played Saruman in the movies" – recommend "who plays Saruman in the movies".
 * Past tense for deceased actor.
 * Oh, I see!


 * "his Music of The Lord of the Rings film series," – uncapitalise.
 * Done.


 * Is there a secondary source for the Narsilion album? Otherwise it may not be entirely noteworthy.
 * Added.
 * Nice!

Refs
All sources are RS. Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 1, 4, 5, 9, 15 or 18.
 * Noted.


 * Is there a parameter available for ref 4 that does not italicise University of North Texas?
 * Done.


 * Ref 19 needs a page number.
 * Don't have the book to hand, but there's another source, so dropping the ref for now.
 * Noted.

Other
Short description, efn note, navs, other templates and cats good.
 * Noted.


 * Recommend adding WP:ALT text to images where possible.
 * Done.


 * The word-by-word analysis external link is redundant as it is cited in the lead.
 * Removed.


 * The external links for the song rendition by Aijin Hidelias should be removed as promotional material. If it cannot be mentioned in the article itself I doubt this needs an external link either.
 * Removed.