Talk:Nami Iguchi

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Crazy rich asian. Peer reviewers: Bloopsmoop, Lesbianimages.

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1. Hello

This was a really interesting choice for a director! I think it would be good if you included information on her work as a MV director in the body of the Wiki article, as I was surprised to see music videos listed under her directorial credits. The section on style and themes should be edited, as it does not really tell the reader anything about the themes in her work. I also think the section on her career needs some clarification, like explaining if there are two versions of Inuneko, as your artcle suggests. I added in links to some of the other people with Wiki articles who you mention in your article, like Matsuyama Kenichi, and made some grammatical edits. Lesbianimages (talk) 16:00, 31 October 2018 (UTC)

Thank you!Crazy rich asian (talk) 00:37, 6 November 2018 (UTC)

2. Great article! I like that you included a section on the styles and themes that are present in your filmmakers work, but to agree with the previous editor, it doesn't really list any themes. The idea is great though and some more work on that would be a bonus. Another thing I would suggest would be to incorporate the dates of the movies right after you list them, instead of saying "which was released in ____." Also, for quotes, you should italicize them so that the readers know what it is. Bloopsmoop (talk) 20:49, 31 October 2018 (UTC)

Thanks!Crazy rich asian (talk) 00:37, 6 November 2018 (UTC)