Talk:Nao Hibino/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 19:14, 19 August 2021 (UTC)

I'll review this article. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 19:14, 19 August 2021 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Above the infobox, her native name 日比野 菜緒 can be moved into the infobox itself under the native_name parameter (see Aryna Sabalenka for instance)
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:16, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Japan doesn't need to be linked twice in the infobox.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:16, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Lead

 * professional tennis player from Japan ===>>> Japanese professional tennis player
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 10:48, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * as high as singles No. 56 and doubles No. 43 in the world ===>>> as high as No. 56 in the world in singles and No. 43 in doubles
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 10:48, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * split the sentence with the WTA and ITF titles into two separate sentences
 * Hibino has won two singles and two doubles titles on the WTA Tour. Along with that, she has won eight singles and eight doubles on the International Tennis Federation Women's Circuit (ITF). JamesAndersoon (talk) 10:49, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * The lead should be longer, and have a second paragraph. Some things you might want to add are
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 19:14, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

Personal life

 * She came from a family of tennis lovers. She is named ===>>> Coming from a tennis-loving family, she is named
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 10:48, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * The citations to are a bit too close to copying or plagiarism.
 * At the age of 10, her mother introduced her and her older brother to tennis to shift their attention from playing video games to sports. ===>>> At the age of 10, her mother introduced her and her older brother to tennis to get her brother to switch his focus from video games to sports. (Lessen copying; and the source only mentions it was only her brother who played video games)
 * How about: At the age of 10, she and her brother were introduced to tennis by their mother. JamesAndersoon (talk) 10:49, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she moved to Kobe ===>>> Hibino moved to Kobe (The first mention of Hibino in each paragraph should always be "Hibino", and never "she")
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 10:48, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she does not usually live with them ===>>> she rarely gets the chance to live with them (Lessen copying)
 * Agree. Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 10:48, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * often reads when she has time ===>>> often reads in her spare time (Lessen copying)
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 10:48, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Travelling has given Hibino the chance to eat local foods and visit famous places. ====>>> Hibino enjoys eating local foods and sightseeing at famous places while travelling on tour. (Lessen copying)
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 10:48, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Junior

 * I know YoungDylan/188.105.3.119 was the one who did this, but the Grade 1 tournaments, etc. shouldn't have a hyphen between in the name.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Grade-1 Dunlop Japan Open ===>>> Grade 1 Japan Open (remove Dunlop because it is a sponsor)
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * in both singles and doubles ===>>> in both the singles and doubles
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * first singles junior title ===>>> first junior singles title
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Grade-A Osaka Mayor's Cup ===>>> the Grade A Osaka Mayor's Cup
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she was advanced ===>>> she advanced
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Things got better in doubles, ===>>> She had a better result in doubles,
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she failed in the first round ===>>> she lost in the first round
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * reached her most significant result ===>>> ("had" or "achieved") her most significant result
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * as well in doubles ===>>> in doubles as well
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Her singles performances then started to weaken, falling in the early rounds ===>>> Her singles performance then started to decline, as she lost in the early rounds
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * such as French Open, Wimbledon, Canadian Open, US Open, Osaka Mayor's Cup, or Dunlop Japan Open ===>>> such as the French Open, Wimbledon, the Canadian Open, the US Open, the Osaka Mayor's Cup, and the Japan Open
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * doubles were an exceptions ===>>> doubles were an exception
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * singles quarter-finals and title ===>>> a singles quarter-final and a doubles title
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * passed with no success ===>>> had little success
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * the second round in singles and first round in doubles. ===>>> a second round appearance in singles and a first round appearance in doubles.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Grade-1 Mitsubishi-Lancer International Juniors Championships ===>>> the Grade-1 Mitsubishi-Lancer International Juniors Championships
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she has won four singles ===>>>, she won four singles
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * at the ITF Junior Circuit ===>>> on the ITF Junior Circuit
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

2012–14

 * qualification ===>>> qualifying draw
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * $25K Karuizawa ===>>> $25K tournament in Karuizawa
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * main-draw ===>>> the main draw
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * handed ===>>> given
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * It turned out to be the right decision as she won the title ===>>> It turned out to be the right decision as she won the title
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * led her on WTA Rankings ===>>> put her on the WTA Rankings
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * getting to place No. 974 ===>>> getting to No. 974
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * getting to the place of 1066 ===>>> getting to No. 1066
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * the first four months (add "of 2013")
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * After three weeks ===>>> Three weeks later
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Things got better ===>>> Her results improved
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * fellow Japanese (add "player")
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * at the WTA Tour ===>>> on the WTA Tour
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * qualifications ===>>> qualifying draw
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Nearly after that ===>>> Not long after that
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * passed the first round of qualifications ===>>> made it through the first round of the qualifying draw
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * stopped ===>>> beaten
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * was advanced to the ===>>> advanced to a
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * qualifications ===>>> qualifying
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * in the singles ranking ===>>> in the singles rankings
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * the place of 204 ===>>> No. 204
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * as her highest singles ranking until then ===>>> her highest singles ranking at the time.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

2015

 * In general, when naming ITF tournaments, use the format "$__K Name of City tournament" (in other words, include the word "tournament" at the end)
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * In general, the "qualifying draw" can be shortened to "qualifying" (see examples below), but not "qualifications"
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * still forced to play ===>>> still limited to playing
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * doing well ===>>> to excel
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * $15K Bangkok ===>>> $15K Bangkok tournament
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * was advanced ===>>> advanced
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * $50K Fukuoka ===>>> $50K Fukuoka tournament
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * failed to Kristýna Plíšková in order to get the title ===>>> failed to win the title against Kristýna Plíšková
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * $50K Kurume ===>>> $50K Kurume tournament
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Wimbledon qualifications ===>>> Wimbledon qualifying
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * followed up ===>>> but followed up
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * $50K Lexington ===>>> $50K Lexington tournament
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * final stage of qualifications ===>>> final stage of qualifying
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * enter qualification ===>>> enter qualifying
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * helped her debuting ===>>> helped her debut
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * up to the place of 76 ===>>> up to No. 76
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she was advanced ===>>> she advanced
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * WTA 125K Hua Hin ===>>> WTA 125K Hua Hin tournament
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * $100K Tokyo ===>>> $100K Tokyo tournament
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * to the place of 66 ===>>> to No. 66
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * singles ranking ===>>> singles rankings
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:34, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

2016–17

 * Having made it to the top-100 and relatively few WTA main draws in previous years, Hibino mostly played tour-level events in 2016. ===>>> Having made it to relatively few WTA main draws in previous years, Hibino mostly played tour-level events in 2016 as a result of being in the top 100.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * She entered the year ===>>> She began the year
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * the quarter-final of the ===>>> a quarter-final at the
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * top-50 player ===>>> top 50 player
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Next week ===>>> The next week
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she was advanced ===>>> she advanced
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * the first week following the Australian Open <<<=== isn't it the week before the Australian Open?
 * She made her highest singles ranking the following week, when Australian Open started. How about: Right after that, she reached her highest-singles ranking in the first week of the following Australian Open. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * improvement with ranking ===>>> improvement in ranking
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she was not forced to play Grand Slam qualification ===>>> she did not have to play in Grand Slam qualifying
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , so she ===>>> and
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * There she faced former world No. 1, Maria Sharapova, in the first round and failed to reach the following one. ===>>> In her debut, she lost to former world No. 1 Maria Sharapova in the first round.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Her improvement journey
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * cruised ===>>> defeated
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * of the WTA 1000 Indian Wells and Miami Open ===>>> at the WTA 1000 Indian Wells and Miami Open tournaments
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * some tour-level event ===>>> a tour-level event
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she was advanced
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * made her revenge on Begu ===>>> this time she was able to defeat Begu
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * At the US Open, she made her debut to complete at least the first round at all four Grand Slams ===>>> With her debut at the US Open, she played the main draw at all four Grand Slam tournaments, but again lost in the first round.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * the final of the ===>>> a final at the
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * the title at the $100K Poitiers ===>>> the title at the $100K Poitiers tournament
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * inside there
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * forced playing in some qualifications ===>>> forced to play some qualifying draws
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * being knocked out in either the first round of qualifications at the Australian Open or WTA 1000 Dubai. Indian Wells and Miami Open ===>>> after being knocked out in the first round at the Australian Open, she lost in qualifying at several WTA 1000 tournaments, including the Dubai Tennis Championships, the Indian Wells Open, and the Miami Open.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * gets a walkover victory due to withdrew of Elina Svitolina ===>>> got a walkover victory due to withdrawal of Elina Svitolina.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Then, the following victories ===>>> Subsequent victories
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * defeated Dalila Jakupović and Nadiia Kichenok (add "in the final")
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Her crashing out in qualifications continued at the WTA 1000 Madrid and Rome ===>>> Her losing in qualifying at WTA 1000 tournaments continued in Madrid and Rome.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * first-round losses of the ===>>> first-round losses at the
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * since March of the same year ===>>> for the first time since March
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * She has done it at the ===>>> She did so at the
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * the three-sets match ===>>> a three-set match
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * that is so far her highest doubles ranking ===>>>, her highest doubles ranking
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * spends ===>>> spent
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * being inside the top 110 for ===>>> being outside for
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

2018–21

 * In the title, put "Inconsistency" or "Up and downs", but not both (and no parentheses)
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * starts to struggle ===>>> started to struggle
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * The poor results dragged on ranking as well, falling outside the top 100 ===>>> She fell outside the top 100
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * not returning ===>>> did not return
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * In doubles, she did not shine as well but reached the final ===>>> In doubles, she fared better, reaching the final
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * However, she was forced to return ===>>> With a lower singles ranking, she dropped back to the ITF Circuit.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * but her first final came in July at the $60K Honolulu in the singles event[9] and later first doubles title of the year at the $100K Suzhou in October ===>>> . Her first final came in July at the $60K Honolulu singles event. She later won first doubles title of the year at the $100K Suzhou event in October.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * midtime ===>>> meantime
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she did not get further than the first round, or qualifications of Australian Open, French Open or US Open ===>>> she lost in the first round at the Australian Open did not get past qualifying at the French Open or US Open.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * She was crushed out in the qualifications of all four Grand Slams ===>>> She lost in qualifying at all four Grand Slam tournaments
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * on WTA 1000 tournaments ===>>> in WTA 1000 tournaments
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * at least quarter-final ===>>> at least a quarter-final
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * on the tour-level events since the begging ===>>> in any tour-level events since the beginning
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * two top 100 (add "players")
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * on the same WTA events in the same year ===>>> in the same WTA tournament
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * On her next three ===>>> In her next three
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * other great results ===>>> more great results
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she was advanced
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * then with the final of the ===>>> by a final at the
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * , and a month later ===>>> . A month later
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * $100K Shenzhen (add "tournament").
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * losing in qualifications of ===>>> losing in qualifying at
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * in the opening week (add "of 2020")
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * three wins in qualifications ===>>> three wins in qualifying
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she cruised Peng Shuai ===>>> she defeated Peng Shuai
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Victory over Shuai was her first Grand Slam win ===>>> The victory over Peng was her second Grand Slam singles match win.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * to the top-100 ===>>> to the top 100
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * she was advanced
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * the second semi-final ===>>> her second semi-final
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * to reach the final ===>>> to miss the final
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * defeat over ===>>> victory over
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * knocked her out ===>>> knocked Hibino out
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Leave this section as 2018–20 and start a new section for 2021? (Also, fill in that section.)
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 17:53, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

National representation

 * Cite this section. The BJK Cup website will definitely help.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * played per one match
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * potential win could secure a win ===>>> a win from her would secure a team win
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * her team made lost
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * managing to make a turnover. ===>>> managed to make a comeback.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * in World Group II Play-offs next year ===>>> in the World Group II Play-offs the next year
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * but this time ===>>>, which
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * the win and loss for Japan, ===>>> a win and loss for Japan,
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * spot ===>>> a spot
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Things got better in ===>>> Japan's situation improved in
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * letting her win only three games. Hibino was set to play against Richèl Hogenkamp but since it was obvious that Japan won, the match was canceled. ===>>> letting her win only three games to help Japan win the tie. (You don't need to mention the dead rubber.)
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

Playing style

 * a powerful strike from the same player ===>>> powerful groundstrokes (What does "the same player" refer to?)
 * Done. Removing of "same". JamesAndersoon (talk) 17:59, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Coach

 * former male Japanese player ===>>> male Japanese former player (He is a former player, not a former male.)
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 17:56, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Apparel

 * Capitalize Le Coq Sportif.
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

Tables

 * The Dubai/Qatar note should end with something like "The Premier 5 tournaments were reclassified as WTA 1000 tournaments in 2021."
 * Done. JamesAndersoon (talk) 17:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
 * You can put her year-end doubles rankings in the table.
 * Updated. JamesAndersoon (talk) 17:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Overall

 * Expand
 * (1) The lead, and
 * (2) The 2021 section, probably separating it from 2018–20


 * Common mistakes (all pointed out above)
 * "was advanced" should just be "advanced"
 * If you refer to an ITF event as "$00K City Name", it should be followed by "tournament" (as in "$00K City Name tournament")
 * I don't think "qualification" or "qualifications" are correct terms. I more commonly see "qualifying draw" or just "qualifying" (for example, "Hibino lost in the qualifying draw at the Antarctic Open" or "Hibino lost in qualifying at the Antarctic Open".)

Overall, the structure looks pretty good. Mainly just the minor grammatical issues (and expanding two sections). Let me know if you have any questions. Placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 02:04, 19 September 2021 (UTC)


 * , alright, looks good! I did the last few tweaks myself. Passing, good work! Apologies for taking so long with the review. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 14:55, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you! My apology also for late respond after your first review. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:25, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

Status query
Sportsfan77777, JamesAndersoon, where does this nomination stand? I see that the review was completed and put on hold over four weeks ago. I posted a ping on JamesAndersoon's page back on October 9, but there has been no attempt by them to return to this review or the article and address the issues raised above, despite them having made over 250 edits on Wikipedia in the past week. Sportsfan77777, you might wish to set a deadline on addressing the issues you've raised—normal time on hold is seven days, which is long past. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:04, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
 * I'll see if I can get their attention. They had to wait a pretty long while to get this article reviewed, so I wouldn't be surprised if it takes longer than usual to respond to the review. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 22:24, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Sportsfan77777, it looks like you did get their attention. How does it look now? BlueMoonset (talk) 01:50, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
 * BlueMoonset, you could call it failed. Sportsfan77777 is not interested in further review. JamesAndersoon (talk) 11:25, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
 * No, I just forgot about it. I'll get to it. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 15:22, 4 November 2021 (UTC)