Talk:Naoshi Kanno

Almost the entire background portion of this page goes entirely unsourced. It's also written in quite poor English. This article should either be cut down in size a lot or be sourced. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 94.234.99.201 (talk) 07:17, 23 March 2022 (UTC)


 * This is still the case.
 * This article is worded almost like a story is being told, and rather awkwardly. "However, such a bully, ..." doesn't make much sense, and "However, such a bully, Kanno, continued studying until late at night and always had the top grade in the class, so people around him wondered when and where that bully was studying." reads like a novel.
 * Punctuation in the second paragraph of Life and Career, sentence 2, is extremely messy and confusing. The word Tanka is not English and doesn't link to what it might refer to. I'm hesitant to add Tanka as a link because it's not even clear that's what it is here.
 * This article needs a lot of work and isn't currently fit for purpose. Sparkane (talk) 21:02, 18 August 2022 (UTC)