Talk:Narrative structure of The Lord of the Rings/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:40, 18 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:31, 18 July 2023 (UTC)


 * I have done a minor copyedit; feel free to discuss any changes you might disagree with.
 * Thank you.


 * "balanced pair...threads of story" I think semicolons would be better than commas here. Also for the body.
 * Done.


 * "the "Nation's best-loved book." You should mention where the survey was conducted.
 * Added.


 * "and the two supported each other" would be better as "and that the two support each other"
 * Done.


 * "inevitability of loss...fade" this is confusing, it needs a colon somewhere in there
 * Edited ("like" to "as").


 * The images are all licensed and used correctly.
 * Noted.


 * The references are all reliable and formatted correctly.
 * Noted.


 * Spotchecks:
 * Seiler, Andy (16 December 2003). "'Rings' comes full circle". USA Today. Verifies all claims made.
 * Diver, Krysia (5 October 2004). "A lord for Germany". The Sydney Morning Herald. Verifies all claims made.
 * Nepveu, Kate (16 December 2008). "LotR re-read: Fellowship I.2, 'The Shadow of the Past'". Tor.com. Verifies all claims made.
 * Drout, Michael D. C. (2004). "Tolkien's Prose Style and its Literary and Rhetorical Effects". Tolkien Studies. Verifies all claims made.
 * Noted.


 * That's all I have. AryKun (talk) 10:30, 27 July 2023 (UTC)
 * All done to date. Many thanks for the review! Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:34, 27 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Okay, will be passing. AryKun (talk) 14:54, 28 July 2023 (UTC)