Talk:Nasodigitoacoustic syndrome/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Regards, MacMedtalk stalk 02:46, 20 April 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

I will get started on this in depth tomorrow. Regards, MacMedtalk stalk 02:46, 20 April 2011 (UTC)

Looks pretty good so far, no major issues. Now combing for image problems or issues with MoS compliance. Regards, MacMedtalk stalk 22:35, 20 April 2011 (UTC)

On hold for now. Regards, MacMedtalk stalk 22:59, 20 April 2011 (UTC)

Comments

 * No period at the end of the X-chromosome caption. Doesn't form a complete sentence.


 * The reference "Hereditary hearing loss and its symptoms" needs an accessdate.


 * The in "Cause and Genetics" needs to be at the top.


 * "Cited Literature" should be renamed to "Works or Publications" and moved above the references section.


 * The "et. al" and the dates when you refer to studies need to go. That information is available in the references and just clutters up the article.

Regards, <b style="color:green;">MacMed</b><sup style="color:red;">talk <sub style="color:black;">stalk 22:59, 20 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you for reviewing! Much appreciated :) Rcej (Robert) - talk 04:24, 21 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Congrats! Regards, <b style="color:green;">MacMed</b><sup style="color:red;">talk <sub style="color:black;">stalk 12:19, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Image
Is there an image available of the finger changes? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 03:55, 1 September 2011 (UTC)