Talk:Nasreen Paracha/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Non-free use rationale on the image is in great condition.
 * Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk)
 * "awarded awarded" "awarded"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Add parts from every section to the lead to summarize the article.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The storylines section looks good.
 * Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
 * As with other articles, recite references after every quote per WP:REF.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 13:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Try to reduce the use of quotes in #Development.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 13:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I couldn't find any actual issues at #Reception, but adding reviews from critics of her character would be nice.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 13:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Overall, remove quotes and expand the entire article, as it only has 8 references at the moment.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 13:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Archive all sources (either manually or with this tool).
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The reference after "2020 RTS Yorkshire Awards" should not be linking to highlighted text.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)