Talk:Natalya Neidhart/GA1


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GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 05:36, 19 January 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:36, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Take your time. I probably won't be able to respond to your comments until Saturday at the earliest. Nici  Vampire  Heart  21:49, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Ok; It'll be another day or two before I get this reviewed, so it works on my end. Had to wrap up a bunch of abandoned reviews, just about done with that. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 05:56, 23 January 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * "to form The Hart Dynasty. and moved to the SmackDown brand." first period's wrong.
 * Fixed. Nici  Vampire  Heart  18:29, 26 January 2011 (UTC)
 * "In late 2000 through to 2001," through or to could be removed.
 * Removed "to". Nici  Vampire  Heart  18:29, 26 January 2011 (UTC)
 * "making her the first third generation female wrestler in the history of WWE." it's a bit redundant, since you mention she was the first one period several sections up.
 * Removed. Nici  Vampire  Heart  18:29, 26 January 2011 (UTC)
 * "she was also involved a feud" in a feud
 * Fixed. Nici  Vampire  Heart  18:29, 26 January 2011 (UTC)
 * "she is cousin " a cousin
 * Fixed. Nici  Vampire  Heart  18:29, 26 January 2011 (UTC)

Everything else looks fine, so I'll put the article on hold and pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:14, 24 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Everything taken care of. Thanks again for the review. Nici  Vampire  Heart  18:29, 26 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good now, so the GA passes. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 03:34, 27 January 2011 (UTC)


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