Talk:Natarajasana/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Onegreatjoke (talk · contribs) 05:11, 11 December 2022 (UTC)

Hello! I have come to review this nomination to see if it's worthy of being a GA. This is going to be my third review so if I do something wrong then please notify me. Other than that, I do hope to see this article pass. Onegreatjoke (talk) 05:11, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:04, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Alright I have finished my review. I will put this on hold for 1 week for you to respond to my comments. Onegreatjoke (talk) 16:32, 11 December 2022 (UTC)

Prose
The Lead Etymology and mythology
 * The asana was most likely introduced into modern yoga by Krishnamacharya in the early 20th century, and taken up by his pupils such as B. K. S. Iyengar, who made the pose his signature." should probably be "The asana was most likely introduced into modern yoga by Krishnamacharya in the early 20th century and taken up by his pupils, such as B. K. S. Iyengar, who made the pose his signature."
 * Done.


 * "The significance of dancing Shiva is indicated by his gestures:" sentence seems weird in a way.
 * Edited.

That's all for prose!

Referenced

 * Citation 4 needs a page number.
 * Added.


 * "This aesthetic, stretching and balancing asana develops concentration and grace" Source doesn't explcitly say it develops concentration. It instead states that it requires concentration which I feel are two different things.
 * Fixed.

That's all!

Copyvio
Earwig does not seem to find a copyvio so this section is a pass.

Broad
Article seems to be broad so this section is a pass.

Neutral
"This aesthetic, stretching and balancing asana develops concentration and grace" Is it best to say that in wikivoice?
 * Reworded.

Stable
No edits since November so this section is a pass.

Media
All the images are ok to use so this section is a pass.

– all done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:55, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Alright then. I can now proudly approve this nomination! Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:16, 11 December 2022 (UTC)