Talk:National Alliance for Immigrants' Rights

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Article Peer Review
I had never heard of the National Alliance for Immigrants' Rights before, so this was very exciting and informative to read. I particularly like how the National Alliance for Immigrants' Rights is addressed as both an organization and a series of local actions, as I feel this adds depth to the article. As I was reading I noticed the following: Overall I liked the composition of the article - the overlying chronological layout with emphasis on organizations and important actor Nativo Lopez-Vigil. I think with a little elaboration and refinement this will informative and lovely to read! Good Luck! Abigailbarnes (talk) 17:52, 4 May 2017 (UTC)
 * I think it would be helpful to give a brief explanation of how immigrants gained the capacity to regulate their immigration status.
 * There are some areas where the grammar could be tightened up to make the writing more clear.
 * The sources are formatted a little strangely, but I'm not sure how you would address this.