Talk:National Association of Student Personnel Administrators

Article Evaluation
This article’s lead section does a great job of showing who they are and where they are founded, however, I think they could go more in depth to the mission of Student Affairs Administrators in Higher Education. The mission part of the article could be more in depth, or explained more. As well, the vision section of the article could be focused on more, with maybe elaborating on what this vision has accomplished. Possibly, on the core values explaining how each of those values correlate to their mission. I feel that this will allow the article to be more balanced by elaborating on those few sections at the beginning, and allow the structure to be more clear. Also, they can focus on what they have achieved at certain universities through this program, by giving concrete examples.

Abtrahan (talk) 16:50, 18 September 2015 (UTC)

Would it be a good idea to go more in-depth about the awards?
I think it would be easier to be neutral about a list of awards, maybe just mentioning their name and nothing else. RPI2026F1 (talk) 21:16, 3 October 2022 (UTC)