Talk:National Convention/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 00:32, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

RRD13 (talk) 11:19, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Why was aristocrats and antirepublicans absent?
 * Majorities begin revolutions; minorities carry them on- whats this sentence doing?
 * The rest part of the section has no citation
 * from all classes of society - but there was the society of estates
 * «The abolition of the royalty... How is it directly related to the text?
 * There is no link of Girondin Convention in its section
 * Jacobin club was an important part of the French Revolution and you have just written "name of a club."
 * Again a similar statement by Robespiere comes
 * Who were the Girondins is not clear
 * Put reference in the short two line paragraphs in The Trial of the King
 * The crisis and fall of the Gironde - Put reference in the necessary part
 * It's been two months nearly and nothing's been updated; as such this fails GA status. Wizardman  16:51, 29 November 2014 (UTC)