Talk:National Defense Education Act

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Looks like text was taken from http://www.bartleby.com/65/na/NatlDefe.html 69.47.185.144 19:29, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Why does this article link at the top to nitrosamine? What has that got to do with this US Congressional legislation? HuronKing, September 2008 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 207.233.86.217 (talk) 00:14, 18 September 2008 (UTC)

major edits 5-10-09
I edited this page based on a 1982 dissertation written on the subject. For those with subscriptions, it is available through Proquest dissertations.--Schwegles (talk) 01:08, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

This article gives too much weight to "affidavit disclaiming belief in the overthrow of the U.S. government." That is important, but I would like to see more on success measurements, any implications of long -term impacts, if any evaluations were attempted. dladwigj 16 Jan 2010.

wording style
I feel that the article's subject matter should be explained more simply. The wording is a bit unnatural sounding. The sentences seem to be unnecessarily long. I'll take a stab at simplifying the article, while still capturing the original content. Michael Powerhouse (talk) 21:26, 30 November 2015 (UTC)