Talk:National Smokers Alliance

POV
I don't know anything about the NSA, and I'm not American so I care less. But ... in Wikipedia terms, this is a terrible article. It consists of three sentences, one of which is an allegation by a pressure group and referenced to that pressure group. The article has NO reliable sources at all. I've added a WP:POV tag because the article feels as if it was written by someone who hated them and knew nothing but that one web page slanging them. Box2112 (talk) 21:48, 22 April 2011 (UTC)


 * I've revised the page, removed the allegations and unreliable sources and added whatever I could find. What is stunning, tho, is the lack of almost *anything* reliable online.  The hate directed at the NSA is extraordinary, and almost all astroturf as far as I can see (and I detest smoking myself). Box2112 (talk) 22:09, 22 April 2011 (UTC)


 * I restored some of the verbiage (with references) and added some additional text as well. In all, I added five additional references to more reliable sources -- journals, a book, and ABC News. Mojoworker (talk) 23:09, 23 April 2011 (UTC)