Talk:National symbols of Bhutan

Copy editing and prep for GA review
Hello! I am responding to the copy edit request left on the Guild of Copy Editors request page. The text of the article is good, I only made a few changes. If you are preparing this for GA review, then I think there are several more things you should add to this article before then.
 * The primary need is for a strong lead. Things that I think should be mentioned in the lead are: the Druk tradition, the constitution, the monarchy, and more about the mythology if possible.
 * In general, I feel like there is a lot more history and background needed for this to be a good article. You should probably try to find additional sources to help complete the story.
 * The sections on the flag and the emblem also need to be expanded to include more than just a quote. The main flag article has a good depth, so I think you can bring out more information from that article into this one.

The article is off to a good start, but it stills needs a little more content before it should be nominated for GA. Good luck and happy editing! -- Tea with toast  (talk)  04:30, 12 January 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the feedback! I re-wrote the intro to be a little longer. I'm not very inclined to expand on the flag, emblem, or history, though I think the above suggestions are excellent. If anyone out there is interested in expanding the rest of the article, please have at it! JFHJr (㊟) 08:47, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

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