Talk:Natmura Pukuria High School

Needs more cleanup
I've done some cleanup of the article. More is needed.

Some of the references are to the front pages of websites rather than leading to specific information that supports the claim in the text. A fair amount of puffery and peacock language remains. There is altogether too much reliance on the school's and school department's own websites. The use of "at present" is something we try to avoid in Wikipedia articles. Be specific about the date - you could say "as of 2019" instead of "at present", but that's still not ideal. Is someone going to commit to keeping the list of results up-to-date? If not, it's better to leave them out with, possibly, a pointer to where the latest results can be found. As it is, the reference used does not point directly to the results.

Most of the time, we presume the notability of secondary schools like this. Still, it would be good to have more third-party coverage about the school rather than to rely on what the school has to say about itself.  — jmcgnh (talk) (contribs) 16:18, 25 September 2019 (UTC)

i am officially ordered to create an article about it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shakawat024 (talk • contribs) 02:55, 26 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Based on what you've just written,, it is evident that you have a conflict of interest with this article and should make a declaration here or on your user page (something that should go on your userpage!) about your connection with the school. I'm afraid that your orders to create the page hold no sway over Wikipedia. You must comply with our policies and the article must meet our standards or it will be deleted.  — jmcgnh (talk) (contribs) 14:17, 26 September 2019 (UTC)

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for this new article, but note that other editors have raised concerns about the sources. More reliable and independent sources are needed. For pointers, follow the links in the notice at the top of the page..

---  DOOMSDAYER 520 (Talk&#124;Contribs) 02:06, 15 December 2019 (UTC)

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