Talk:Nature of a Sista'/GA2

Review
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Reviewer: DAP388 (talk · contribs) 18:08, 4 January 2018 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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This article is in good shape barring some typos and minor error in syntax in some places. Once these are addressed, then we’re good to go!

Lead

 * "It was Latifah's final album on the record label", "on" should be "with" in this instance.
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 01:02, 5 January 2018 (UTC)

Background and recording

 * The opening sentence is a bit sloppy. The New York Times article said Latifah became a spokesperson for young black woman as well as the media, and that sentence does not match the source material. Perhaps something like "[...], Peter Watrous of The New York Times believed the rapper had become a representative for young black women and a media "hungry for someone articulate, political and savvy about feminism but not confrontational" would suffice.
 * "Watrous attributed the production and release of Nature of a Sista' as receiving a significant amount of hype and anticipation due to this reputation", phrasing is a bit clunky. Maybe "Because of her heightened profile, Nature of a Sista’ was considered among the most anticipated hip hop releases of the year" instead.
 * Revised this one and the above one as well. Thank you for the suggestions as I had difficulty with phrasing these two parts for some reason. Aoba47 (talk) 01:06, 5 January 2018 (UTC)

Composition and sound

 * "The rapper said that she decided to sing more on the songs was inspired by her interests and not financial gains", assuming this is a typo, yes?
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 01:08, 5 January 2018 (UTC)

Release and promotion

 * "Latifah held an album release part in Nirvana", typo.
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 01:08, 5 January 2018 (UTC)

That’s it. On hold for seven days. DAP 💅 18:08, 4 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review. I will try to get to it in the next couple days. I am unfortunately experiencing some computer issues at the moment, and I will hopefully resolves them soon. Thank you again for your help! Aoba47 (talk) 19:20, 4 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review again! I believe that I have addressed everything. I hope you have a wonderful rest of your day or night. Aoba47 (talk) 01:08, 5 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Happy to pass it, cheers! DAP  💅 01:34, 5 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 01:55, 5 January 2018 (UTC)