Talk:Nayak: The Real Hero/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:00, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Non-free use rationale looks good.
 * Add a serial comma after Paresh Rawal.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "between a police" "between the police"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "100 location" "100 locations"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "some of whom applauding" "some of whom applauded"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

 * Plot is 688 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * "Because of his action" "Because of his actions"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "redirects the question talking" "redirects the question by talking"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "how difficult his occupation" - reword.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "for a day and experience" "for a day to experience"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "Assited by Bansal" "Assisted by Bansal"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "Chauhan sends assassins after him although they only destroy his house" "Chauhan sends assassins after him, who only destroy his house"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "it will makes" "it will make"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "In the final attempt" "In a final attempt"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "few men was planning" "few men are planning"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "blaming the him" "blaming him"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "Shivaji takes up a gun, but pointing it to his arm, shoots himself, and then hands over the gun to Chauhan." - clarify. Does Shivaji shoot himself in the arm on purpose or by accident? Does he just simply hand the gun to Chauhan after doing so?
 * Done. Shivaji does it on purpose. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "with the state develops" "with the state developing"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

Production and soundtrack

 * Remove the comma after "its subject".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "interview to Filmfare" "interview with Filmfare"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "was originally to be" "was originally going to be"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * didn't match mine ..." didn't match mine".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "Next actor suggested" "The next actor suggested"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "Shah Rukh Khan, however" "Shah Rukh Khan. However"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "he initially reluctant" "he was initially reluctant"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "physical trainings" "physical training"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "part as Manjari" "part of Manjari"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "portray the role in her own way and not copying Koirala had done" "portray the role in her own way, not copying what Koirala had done"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "The principal photography" "Principal photography"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "states Maharashtra" "states of Maharashtra"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "After the filming ended" "After filming ended"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "who bought the rights" "which bought the rights"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * was "a quite a letdown" was "quite a letdown"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

Release and reception

 * "After scheduled for release" "Originally scheduled for release"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "the film was opened in 280 screens" "the film opened on 280 screens"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Rename #Critical reception to #Reception.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Then make a subsection titled #Critical response.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Finally, make #Accolades a subsection as well.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

References and external links

 * Sources are archived.
 * Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subscription".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:49, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Is the link to Rotten Tomatoes necessary if it has 0 reviews?
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:49, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Sort categories in alphabetical order.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:49, 3 July 2021 (UTC)