Talk:Nazgûl/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 22:07, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

I've gone through all of the redirects for this article, might as well review it, too. Hog Farm (talk) 22:07, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose

2. Verifiability

3. Depth of Coverage

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
1.
 * Minas Morgul is a circular link
 * Removed.


 * Like with Merry Brandybuck, Tolkien character is italicized in the infobox, which probably isn't the best stylization
 * Removed.


 * Link Eowyn
 * Linked.


 * "breaking off a piece of it in the Hobbit's flesh" - Two things. Hobbit is a duplink, and it's lowercase in other usages.
 * Removed.


 * Cracks of Doom redirects to the top of the Mount Doom page, so it's essentially a duplink
 * Removed.


 * "In The Lord of the Rings movie trilogy (2001–2003)" - I'm not sure that the links to 2001 in film and 2003 in film are really relevant
 * Removed.


 * The Shire is a duplink
 * Removed.

2.
 * For the in-popular-culture material, it's generally considered best not to only cite it to the primary source for the reference - the game, movie, etc. Since popular culture references should only be mentioned if they're significant, citing those to secondary sources helps weed out the insignificant ones.  There's a number of these.  If you object to this, I can ask for a second opinion.
 * Fixed.


 * What's ref 17 (secondary)? It says it's a file you can't access
 * Replaced ref.


 * Ref 6 (secondary) has formatting issues, it's formatting as a "see this" instead of as a citation
 * Fixed.

3.
 * You describe how their sight is different. If I recall correctly, Aragorn says something in FOTR about their sense of smell.  If I'm remembering right, maybe that should be mentioned.
 * Added.

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