Talk:Neal W. Pollock

Notability of published works
Some of the published works listed are of dubious notability. For example the articles in Alert Diver "Diving Dry - Thermal protection for extreme conditions" and "http://www.alertdiver.com/What_is_Rebreather_Forum_3_All_About"  and the Wilderness medicine magazine article "Flying after diving" are close to trivial. &bull; &bull; &bull; Peter (Southwood) (talk): 12:45, 1 December 2013 (UTC)

Why is Neal Pollock notable?
The lead paragraph makes no mention of why the subject is notable. The world has many divers, academics and Canadians, None of these characteristics make a person particularly notable, even in combination. The lead should establish notability in some way.

&bull; &bull; &bull; Peter (Southwood) (talk): 13:11, 20 June 2014 (UTC)

In-line external links not permitted on Wikipedia
Please refer to the Manual of Style and External links and clean up the in-line links. If they are important as external links, put them in the section External links. If they are references, format them as references, otherwise they may be deleted. &bull; &bull; &bull; Peter (Southwood) (talk): 05:52, 23 November 2016 (UTC)