Talk:Neenach, California

Resources
The following was originally part of the Resources section of the articles:


 * "Submitted by Lisa Wright 2005 with references from the Antelope Valley, Ridge Route, and Santa Clarita community historical societies – as well as information provided by private citizens of the area." &mdash;The preceding unsigned comment was added by 68.125.21.36 (talk &bull; contribs).

Wikipedia editors don't take ownership or credit for various Wikipedia articles, but I still thought that Lisa Wright should get some acknowledgment here on the Talk page. Blank Verse  &empty;  05:45, 19 September 2005 (UTC)


 * I quite concur with my fellow editor above. Your work is very much appreciated, Lisa!  --avnative 06:46, 19 September 2005 (UTC)

Population
Where did that 850 figure come from? Questioningly, GeorgeLouis (talk) 04:37, 20 October 2008 (UTC)

Suggestions
Hey, GeorgeLouis. I apologize for not getting to the article in due time; it's looking pretty good thus far.

Here's what I have to suggest:


 * Well, there is definitely enough material to formulate a good lead. Per the lead guideline, you could expand the lead to briefly touch on every part of the article in maybe two paragraphs.


 * Is Neenach connected to neighboring communities in any way, shape or form? If so, a Transportation section is in order.


 * Could the "Centennial Project" section be incorporated into the History section?

That's all I got for now; I need to go right now, but will get back as soon as I can.

Best, --Starstriker7(Dime algoor see my works) 19:48, 1 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Hey, I'm back. I just got one more thing.


 * I know that you dislike putting infoboxes into articles, but an infobox is more of a place to put ZIP Code info than in a seperate communications section. I'd suggest that Neenach have one too, although it really is entirely up to you.


 * That's all for now. --Starstriker7(Dime algoor see my works) 20:17, 1 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks for looking. The Centennial project is more in the future and is not part of the history (yet), so I have adjusted the headers accordingly. There is dial-a-ride bus service, and I will add that. I will add an infobox, too. Sincerely, GeorgeLouis (talk) 20:30, 1 November 2008 (UTC)