Talk:Neil Armstrong/GA1

==GA Reassessment== :''This discussion is transcluded from Talk:Neil Armstrong/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the reassessment.''


 * Notified: Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Biography, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Human spaceflight, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Spaceflight, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Space, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Cincinnati, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Aviation/Aerospace biography task force, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Aviation, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Scouting, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Ohio, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Military history,,, , , ,--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 04:04, 5 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Delisted--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 03:00, 14 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I am reviewing this article as part of GA Sweeps. In order for this article to retain its WP:GA designation, it will need some attention.  It needs to be brought up to current standards enumerated at WP:WIAGA.  I find the following issues to be problematic:
 * There are citation needed tags within the article.
 * In addition, there are several entire paragraphs of uncited material. Please include at least on inline citation for each paragraph.
 * Please fix the disambiguation link
 * Titan II GLV link disambiguated. — V = I * R  (talk) 04:44, 5 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Please fix all the deadlinks
 * Many images have templates, which seems to be a template available at commons.  However, the following do not and I do not know why: File:Pilot Neil Armstrong and X-15 -1 - GPN-2000-000121.jpg, File:Armstrong and Scott with Hatches Open - GPN-2000-001413.jpg, File:Apollo 11 crew in quarantine.jpg, File:Quincy Jones, John Glenn, and Neil Armstrong during NASA's 50th anniversary gala.jpg, File:Apollo 11 - Crew at the White House.jpg, File:Neil Armstrong 2004.jpg
 * Done. Colds7ream (talk) 17:39, 6 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Please make all images compliant with WP:ALT.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 00:55, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

As these concerns are addressed, I may add more. I will complete my review after a week.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 03:50, 5 July 2009 (UTC)