Talk:Neil Druckmann/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Anarchyte (talk · contribs) 10:27, 26 June 2015 (UTC)

I'll review this now. -- Anar  chyte   10:27, 26 June 2015 (UTC)

Comments and Feedback

 * Copyvio rating: 42.5% chance of violation.
 * This shouldn't be a worry as most of the 'violations' are the words "The Last of Us: Left Behind" and "The Last of Us".

Lead

 * Everything is fine here, covers all the points said in the article (as far as I can see) Face-smile.svg

Early life

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Career

 * Druckmann met Naughty Dog co-founder Jason Rubin at the Game Developers Conference, when they began talking. In 2004, Druckmann joined Naughty Dog as a programming intern, before being promoted to a full-time position as a gameplay programmer a few months later.
 * Hmm... Maybe this could be reworded in a way? Something like:
 * "At the Game Developers Conference, Druckmann met Naughty Dog co-founder Jason Rubin. After Druckmann "bugged" Rubin, Rubin gave him his business card. In 2004, Druckmann joined Naughty Dog as a programming intern, before being promoted to a full-time position as a gameplay programmer a few months later. "
 * EDIT: Page has since been edited.

Personal life

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Works

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Awards and nominations

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GA Criteria
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * Reviewer Comment: A few good faith edits and test edits were done but they soon ended.
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: (Pass)
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * Reviewer Comment: A few good faith edits and test edits were done but they soon ended.
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: (Pass)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: (Pass)

Another good article on subjects of The Last of Us, good job. :) Anyway, all the files used in the article are under the creative commons so they're fine to use, there's no violation of WP:BLP and everything seems to be in order. The only issue I found has been stated above and it's really not that big of a deal. Promoted to GA. --  Anar  chyte   11:06, 26 June 2015 (UTC)