Talk:Neither Here nor There (Fringe)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 04:56, 18 March 2013 (UTC)

Hi Ruby, I'd be glad to take this one. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-5 days. Thanks as always for your work on these! -- Khazar2 (talk) 04:56, 18 March 2013 (UTC)

Initial comments
This is quite strong and clearly ripe for promotion--thanks for your work on it! I've noted two small suggestions about the prose below.


 * "They are then informed of the suspect's location" -- who is "they" here?
 * "COTW-er, complete with Freak-Meet" -- this gets a bit jargony for the casual reader. I'm not sure if the best solution here is to overwrite part of the quotation with bracketed text, add parenthetical text, add an explanatory footnote maybe? -- Khazar2 (talk) 02:45, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Both comments addressed. Let me know if there's anything else!  Ruby  2010/  2013  02:05, 21 March 2013 (UTC)