Talk:Nemesis Inferno/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 08:08, 18 September 2013 (UTC)

Comments Just a quick run through, so put it on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:17, 24 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Is it Nemesis Inferno or Nemesis Inferno?
 * "It stands 29 metres" -> "The ride... (the last thing you mentioned was the volcano).
 * Link inversion the first time appropriately.
 * " just after" remain encyclopaedic, so say either "after" or quantify it.
 * "was installed to help transform Thorpe Park into a thrill park" wow, this really doesn't sound like an encyclopedic article now, is this a quote? if so quote it and attribute it.  If not, neutralise the tone and language.
 * Some confusion. Is it Nemesis or Nemesis at Alton Towers, or something else?


 * I think I have fixed these issues. Not quite sure what you mean on the last one. The ride at Thorpe Park, which this article is about is "Nemesis Inferno", while the ride at Alton Towers is simply "Nemesis". Was there a particular point you found confusing? I have done a slight reword of that paragraph in the reception section to hopefully remove any confusion. Themeparkgc   Talk  02:22, 25 September 2013 (UTC)