Talk:Nepheloid layer

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All of the information in the article is relevant to the topic of the Nepheloid Layer, and the only distractions were the relatively frequent use of more specific, complicated terms that were not already defined (such as “lidar” and “bathymetry”), meaning that in order to read and fully understand the article, one has to navigate to other pages multiple times. None of the content provided is out of date, however more information could be added about the Porcupine Bight, as that section is especially brief and uninformative compared to the section covering the Gulf of Mexico. I believe that the amount and level of detail in the article as a whole could also be improved. The scientific information that is presented is accurate and clearly presented, but as previously mentioned, it does include linked jargon that could be confusing to the average reader.

In sum, the content, general tone, and sources are informative, reliable, and unbiased, although the distribution of amount of information within the article's sections could be expanded upon. This talk page also provides some appreciated background as to the purpose of the article.

Aaslam30 (talk) 22:27, 11 September 2019 (UTC)

Additional Sources Found:

Biscaye, Pierre; Eittreim, Stephen (1977). “Suspended particulate loads and transports in the nepheloid layer of the abyssal Atlantic Ocean”. Marine Geology. 23 (1-2): 155-172. https://doi.org/10.1016/0025-3227(77)90087-1

Diercks, Arne-R; et al. (2018). “Scales of seafloor sediment resuspension in the northern Gulf of Mexico”. Elem Sci Anth. 6 (1): 32. http://doi.org/10.1525/elementa.285

Hays, James D. (1970). Geological Investigations of the North Pacific. Geological Society of America. ISBN 9780813711263. https://pubs.geoscienceworld.org/books/book/130/

Hunkins, Kenneth; et al. (1969). “Nepheloid layers and bottom currents in the Arctic Ocean”. Journal of Geophysical Research. 74 (28): 6995-7008. https://doi.org/10.1029/JC074i028p06995

Madron, X. Durrieu De; et al. (2017). “Deep sediment resuspension and thick nepheloid layer generation by open-ocean convection”. Journal of Geophysical Research: Oceans. 122 (3): 2291-2318. https://doi.org/10.1002/2016JC012062

McCave, Nick I. (1986). “Local and global aspects of the bottom of the nepheloid layers in the world ocean”. Netherlands Journal of Sea Research. 20 (2-3): 167-191. https://doi.org/10.1016/0077-7579(86)90040-2

McCave, Nicholas I. (1978). Sedimentology. Dowden, Hutchinson & Ross, Inc. ISBN 9780879331528. https://link.springer.com/referenceworkentry/10.1007%2F3-540-31079-7_144

Mcgrail, David; Carnes, Michael (1983). “Shelfedge Dynamics and the Nepheloid Layer in the Northwestern Gulf of Mexico”. The Shelfbreak. 33 (1): 251-264. https://doi.org/10.2110/pec.83.06.0251

Thorpe, Steve; White, Martin (1988). “A deep intermediate nepheloid layer”. Deep Sea Research Part A. Oceanographic Research Papers. 35 (9): 1665-1671. https://doi.org/10.1016/0198-0149(88)90109-4

Aaslam30 (talk) 21:10, 17 September 2019 (UTC)

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 20 August 2019 and 3 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Aaslam30. Peer reviewers: Manlin Xu.

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