Talk:Nestlé Purina PetCare/Archives/2014

Draft
I have a COI/financial connection/affiliation with Nestle Purina Petcare. I've prepared a proposed draft of a substantially improved version of this article at User:CorporateM/Nestle Purina Petcare that I think would make the page GAN-ready. It includes a headquarters image we were able to get from an employee under a free license, some corrections (Menu Food was a fellow victim of the pet food contamination, not the source), as well as more information about the company's history, missing recalls, its legal dispute with Blue Buffalo and its reputation as a responsible/efficient manufacturer.

Per WP:COI, I'd like to share the draft here for review and consideration by a disinterested editor to avoid any remote appearance of impropriety. CorporateM (Talk) 01:48, 26 November 2014 (UTC)


 * This volunteer editor determined that your version, with revisions over the past days, far exceeded the earlier article content, in terms of style, balance, and references. So, I have replaced the article with User:CorporateM's COI version. Prelude after noon (talk) 13:10, 8 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks! As I typically do with articles where I have a COI, I have nominated it for GA review, to attract further review, ensure the content is up to impeccable standards and re-assure the community the page was done properly. CorporateM (Talk) 13:57, 8 December 2014 (UTC)