Talk:Nettie Wild

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Your page is overall very good and informative, from what I understand from looking at the references, you were adding to an already existing page. The opening paragraph is good, but the only think I suggest you change about it is that you should get rid of the ‘etc’ either you list what she did or end the sentence at ‘camera person’ so the reader can fully know what she was part if during her career, overall the opening paragraph every catching. In addition, when I looked at her IMDb page I noticed that she was a winner and was nominated for more than the awards mentioned in the awards and nominations page on the Wikipedia page. I have added a few links in the external links section so the readers can have other websites to look at. I noticed a few sentences that did not have references and I suggest that you do, it is better to reference every sentence than to not and get in trouble for it. Overall, your article is very good. I understand that it can be difficult to find information on female’s part if the film industry, no matter how well known their work is. I tried to find other helpful articles or books that I could add into the external links section or find an article or book to recommend that you take a look at but it was very difficult. I hope what I suggested makes sense, good luck on your project!Harpeet Jessica (talk) 19:18, 31 October 2018 (UTC)

Your page has lots of sources which is great because it makes it more reliable. My first suggestion is to maybe re word your filmmaker's name from Nettie Wild and putting the full name in brackets, to mentioning their full name and include something like also know as Nettie wild. it seems redundant to start off with their stage name when the article starts off with their stage name as the header. also under filmography maybe just uniformly include all the films listed instead of including what the films were about. That part can be under the career header like you've already included. Also with that note, maybe you can clarify under each film which were produced films and which were directed to help the reader understand the role the filmmaker had in the film. I think your article is very good overall. Great job expanding. Tbcbab (talk) 20:23, 31 October 2018 (UTC)Tbcbab

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