Talk:Neuro-linguistic programming/Archive 17

Bogus OED definition
The current lead sentence falsely quotes a NLP definition from the Oxford English Dictionary (non-existent "2003"). The OED (CD v. 3, 2007) doesn't mention "neuro-linguistic programming". Its entry for the combining form neuro- lists: "neuroliguistic a., of or connected with the application of neurology to linguistic research; so neurlinguist, an expert or specialist in neurolinguistics; neurolinguistics n. pl. (const. as sing.), neurological linguistics". The only reference to programming is a 1970 usage example by John Laver: "The healthy adult brain is not itself accessible to neurolinguistic experiment. There is thus no possibility of directly observing the neural mechanisms involved in constructing a neurolinguistic program."

We could use one of these definitions. Any suggestions? Keahapana (talk) 23:45, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
 * "a field of study that attempts to build a set of transferable skills by programming the unconscious mind" (Wiktionary)
 * "relationship between communication and behavior: a theory and model of human behavior and communication based on linguistic insights into how people avoid change and how to assist them in changing" (Encarta)
 * I left the quote as a "claim" and 86'ed the reference, based on what you just said about the 2007 OED. __ Just plain Bill (talk) 03:38, 11 December 2009 (UTC)


 * You "86"ed (way to use bar slang, btw) a reference because of something some knucklehead posted on a Wikipedia discussion page, rather than actually checking into it? How encyclopedic of you.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.171.176.132 (talk) 20:02, 27 February 2010 (UTC)


 * The quote from the OED has been verified by multiple editors including me. The link can be verified by anyone with a subscription to Oxford online reference which is subscribed to by many universities. Action potential discuss contribs 22:35, 14 December 2009 (UTC)

Hi Action Potential, since you've "verified this definition in hard copy version of OED too" would you please provide that reference? I can't find it. Thanks. Keahapana (talk) 23:06, 14 December 2009 (UTC)


 * Hi, I'm at the uni library now and can confirm that definition is in the OED, 2009 draft revision which has not changed since the 2003 edition. The Oxford English Dictionary of Psychology has a shorter version which focused on NLP as a form of therapy; this reflects the focus on therapy in psychology. Outside of psychology, NLP is defined more generally as a communication approach. There are also a few other dictionaries in the university book shop which define NLP in slightly different ways. Action potential discuss contribs 01:56, 15 December 2009 (UTC)

Conflict of interest?
Hi All,

Just by way of introduction, I helped out with this article about 3 years ago and just pop in time to time to see how things are going. I see the article seems to have improved a lot, and that there are 3 or 4 dedicated editors who are working on this so I decided to have a browse around on user pages. Now, this may have been covered before - and, if so, apologies - but I wonder if Snowded has a conflict of interests. See the following link from the site he advertises on his user page

Does this not mean that you are in competition with many of the NLP providers for business and therefore have a vested interest that you should declare? As I say, if this has been covered before and is archived somewhere then apologies in advance. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Datatook (talk • contribs) 19:11, 20 December 2009 (UTC)


 * No I don't, or if I do then all Biologists should be banned from editing Intelligent Design and all Management Consultants from editing any article to do with management. If you did edit the article three years ago then under what user name?  The one given above has only one edit in its history namely the above.  -- Snowded  TALK  21:24, 20 December 2009 (UTC)


 * Hmmm, I think I disagree. Biologists do not have a direct material commercial interest as you do. You are effectively editing an article on a competitive 'product', and I dont see how this can lead to a balanced perspective. Re my user name, I had to create a new account as I could not remember my old one - I will see if I can dig it out from the archives today Datatook (talk) 08:15, 21 December 2009 (UTC)


 * Please do (Your ID that is), And I am very sorry but I do not compete with NLP not does my company.  Aside from the general "You run courses" you have not provided any evidence of competition based on the course material (which is all about sense-making).  Under your definition anyone one on wikipedia who sells consultancy or runs training programmes should not edit any articles in this area.  I also hold three visiting Chairs at Universities in management science which gives me another academic perspective on this particular pseudo-science.  Sorry, I suspect an attempt to remove an editor who is critical of NLP.  Incidentally, the only reason you can even make this particular accusation is my willingness to be open about my real identity.  You might want to consider a similar position.  -- Snowded  TALK  08:54, 21 December 2009 (UTC)


 * Yes yes, sensemaking - Karl Weick - I'm well aware of it. I'm also not interested in how many university chairs you have - good for you though, well done. You are a management consultant selling courses in giving people a 'cognitive edge', which sounds remarkably like NLP claims around performance / excellence etc. You're in the market for the same customers - all else is irrelevant. By the way, I'm not trying to remove you from the article, just to clear up that you may not be exactly be coming from a neutral position on this. Datatook (talk) 09:12, 21 December 2009 (UTC)


 * You brought my background into this so I expanded it a bit - the balance of my work is teaching and research with some consultancy. And, while Weick is associated with sensemaking, there are several people involved in sense-making myself, Dervin and others.  My position on NLP is clear and public - its a pseudo-science and also has unresolved ethical issues.  That has nothing to do with any commercial interest.  I would not consider anyone who seriously considers booking on an NLP course a potential client, they operate in a very different field from our work as some basic study would show.  I suggest you "remember" that prior user name, its just a bit too much of a coincidence that a new editor suddenly appears on wikipedia when a related debate is going on elsewhere in a KM listserv.  Establish your own pedigree then we have an even playing field, for the moment you are dropping in accusations based on superficial readings. Single purpose IDs will always arouse suspicion and rightly so on controversial articles.  -- Snowded  TALK  11:06, 21 December 2009 (UTC)


 * I too occasionally follow this article and it is quite obvious to me the overall tone of the article has been for some time, and currently still is, biased against NLP. If a particular major contributor is responsible for most of the article, then the responsibility must rest with them and any obvious bias (ironically by use of language, etc.) does not serve well the intent. This article does require a substantial rewrite to present an unbiased neutral viewpoint. It needs to properly discuss competing views and observations without slant and weighting towards one overarching opinion, which it currently does not do.Erikcata (talk) 17:05, 10 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Ah well, fortunately for me I wrote very little of it. I have defended the NPOV of the last major rewrite however and will continue to do so.  There have been far too many attempts to make this article a propaganda piece.  Lets keep it to reliable sources and stop making silly accusations or using innuendo shall we.  -- Snowded  TALK  17:06, 10 March 2010 (UTC)

Timing inconsistencies in the Scientific Criticism section
Hello. The final line of the scientific criticisms section states "However, the conclusions of Sharpley's review have been contested[22][58][62] on the grounds that the studies carried out were not sufficient tests of the specific models and techniques tested, and that the studies contained numerous methodological errors"

Those contests were made in 1985 and before. Sharpley's following paper (1987) gave a rebuttal, and more research to show an overwhelming failure of neurolinguistic programming. Tosey and Matthison did not contest Sharpley, they just reported the people who contested Sharpley in 1985.

Tosey and Matthison have also been answered with this latest published research:

http://jarhe.research.glam.ac.uk/media/files/documents/2009-07-17/JARHE_V1.2_Jul09_Web_pp57-63.pdf

LK Lam Kin Keung (talk) 01:53, 22 December 2009 (UTC)


 * I made two changes, one to add the "cargo-cult" label of the University of Glamorgan paper. I also removed the paragraph saying on the rebuttal of Sharpley's review.  It just didn't make sense to say this was contentested, then reference the rebuttal, or to qualify Y&M with reported.  This is after all the section on criticism.  -- Snowded  TALK  07:11, 22 December 2009 (UTC)


 * Yes, thats a lot more consistent and updated. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:05, 23 December 2009 (UTC)


 * "Journal of Applied Research in Higher Education" is not exactly a high impact journal. We need to have a discussion about how much weight we should give the various points of view on this article. How do we decide how much space each point of view is assigned? Action potential discuss contribs 14:41, 25 December 2009 (UTC)
 * It is peer reviewed and its a lot better than many of the sources used in the other sections. -- Snowded  TALK  15:39, 25 December 2009 (UTC)


 * There is no reason to remove Grinder & Bostic St Clair's response to Sharpley's reviews as cited by Mathison and Tosey. They maintain that the research did not adequately test the techniques tested and that the studies contain methodological errors which were not picked up by Sharpley. I think this is important to balance the criticism and put it in perspective. Mathison and Tosey have published several papers in peer-reviewed journals and conferences (see publications listed on nlpresearch.org). Mathison and Tosey propose that NLP be investigated further using multiple methodologies, not just within the experimental/empirical framework. It seems overly cynical of Gareth Roderique-Davies to say that this call to work alongside researchers in other fields is simply a vain attempt to bolster its credibility. Action potential discuss contribs 16:41, 26 December 2009 (UTC)
 * If we put that back in then we also have to put in the response to that criticism and it all gets lengthy. The note above says that Mathison and Tosey only reported on a criticism of Sharpley which is very different from saying they criticised it, as was implied.  Grinder is hardly a neutral party and this is the section on criticism after all.  There is a general problem with pages with strong adherents, that every time there is a criticism it is immediately qualified.  This is generally frowned on and I don't see the need to allow it here.  -- Snowded  TALK  16:46, 26 December 2009 (UTC)
 * I agree that we should not follow every critical point with a response. However, this is a major disagreement and it helps to provide both sides. The skeptics argue that the experimental was sufficient test and NLP failed to demonstrate its claimed high level of efficacy and effectiveness. The proponents (including Mathison and Tosey 2007, and Grinder 2003) maintain that the experimental literature was not sufficient test of NLP and propose that further investigation (using multiple methdologies) is warranted. Both positions can be found in peer-review literature and it is necessary to show the whole picture. So, it seems the jury is still out. ---Action potential discuss contribs 02:57, 27 December 2009 (UTC)
 * Mathison and Tosey are an interesting source. For a start they have been "extensively trained in NLP" and use it in their professional work so they have a clear interest in supporting NLP.  Their discipline is in management science not psychotherapy or any of the cognitive sciences.  They accurately record Bateson's concern about the transformation of his ideas into specific strategies (something we should have here somewhere) along with the absence of any consideration of gender issues, including the "american dream" aspect which again we don't cover in the article.  There are some appalling howlers in the paper; for example the reference to Fauconnnier & Turner supporting aspects of NLP's views on languages which is absurd (I wonder if they have even read Conceptual Blending.   They seize on mirror neurons as do other people in this field without really understanding the original research.  A good example of pop science.  They make the valid point that NLP's coherence is based on acceptance of cybernetic principles (and therein lies another potential criticism).  Their use of the Bumble Bee metaphor is truly terrible.  So as you can see I am not impressed, but then I have never been impressed with the Surrey group from when I had a visiting fellowship there.  That said, even if we accept their article then they really do not support the original claims.  Towards the end of the article they report Heap and Sharpley, and then cite Beck and Beck's 1984 paper and Eins[ruch & Foremans 1985 paper as contra's but both of these papers PRECEED the Heap and Sharpley papers.  The third is a 2001 paper by Grinder which we can dismiss as he has an obvious interest ands its not a paper, its another popular book on NLP by one of the founders.  So the original claim that this reference counters the criticism is simply not correct.  Its not so much that the Jury is still out, but that the Jury has delivered a verdict and the guilty party is asking for more time and a different legal system to be used.  I am begining to wonder what I would find if I checked out some of the other references used here. -- Snowded  TALK  07:05, 27 December 2009 (UTC)


 * The consistency issue will need some work. I made some changes to fix that, though there are a lot of consistency problems outside of the scientific criticisms section. Thx. LK Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:28, 28 December 2009 (UTC)
 * Hi, I'll respond to Snowded properly when I get a chance. I have a quick question about how to end the article. Should it end on a positive note? At the moment the article ends with a conclusion from a critic's article. Should it end with a neutral statement summing up the various perspectives per WP:NPOV and WP:FRINGE? Action potential discuss contribs 04:42, 1 January 2010 (UTC)

Moving away from an Encyclopedia entry
Many of the recent changes while referenced are starting to get far too detailed for the article. The whole section on a typical interaction for example reads likes a NLP book. I suggest we get rid of that and also try and keep this at a higher, less detailed level. -- Snowded TALK  07:27, 9 January 2010 (UTC)

If we're keeping it at a higher, less detailed I think we need to balance with some carefully selected examples as with meta model example in the history section. Encyclopedic articles need to be self-contained and accessible to an educated person reading about NLP for the first time. That was the point of the section titled "a typical interaction". Perhaps it could be reduced to one paragraph. Action potential discuss contribs 10:33, 9 January 2010 (UTC)


 * The intention should not be a how to guide surely. It should allow someone to understand enough to answer the odd question or determine if they want to investigate further.  Reducing to one paragraph would improve, but the material is covered elsewhere in the article so my inclination would be a sentence at most  -- Snowded  TALK  11:36, 9 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I thought it was a good idea to give an overview of a typical interaction without going into the details. I'll be guided by you here. Should it be completely cut or merged elsewhere? Action potential discuss contribs 02:22, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm happy with your recent changes - think they improve things. -- Snowded TALK  11:15, 12 January 2010 (UTC)

This material appeared in the scientific criticism section:

More recently, the Association for Neuro Linguistic Programming has published a new programme of research into NLP coordinated by the University of Surrey.

It appears to be a self published source. The scientifically oriented view seems to be abscent and it is likely promotional material. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:41, 17 February 2010 (UTC)


 * It's a peer-reviewed scientific journal. http://www.nlpresearchconference.com/PDF-copy-of-Current-Research-in-NLP--Volume-One/3.htm  I've put it back. AJRG (talk) 19:47, 20 February 2010 (UTC)


 * It adds nothing to the scientific criticism section. It appears to be self-published. The papers contained within may be from multiple authors, but they pre-date and have been answered by Rodrique Davis, who does come from a scientific criticism perspective. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:31, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * This is factually incorrect, as you'd know if you'd actually read the article. The papers are new and Davis has not answered them.  His most recent reference is from 2008. AJRG (talk) 16:28, 22 February 2010 (UTC)


 * I'm dubious as to the source. It comes from the Surrey Group most of whom have NLP consultancy practices.  Its not clear from a quick web search if there was ever anything other than the inaugural edition and no indication that it is peer reviewed -- Snowded  TALK  06:17, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * How is someone having a NLP consultancy practice any different from a CBT practitioner publishing research on it? Researchers uninterested in application are rare. But I agree, if we want to discuss the NLP research program and the new journal here it should first be discussed in some reputable and reliable third party sources. But that rule would also exclude the paper by Rodrique Davis which has not (yet) been cited in a scientific journal. Action potential discuss contribs 10:09, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * The paper by Davis has apparently been cited because of its colourful language. Either leave it out (my preference) or balance it to maintain NPOV. AJRG (talk) 16:36, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Its no different, but where there is commercial interest one places a question over the source and really want some more third party material. I ask the question - did the journal continue?  The above reference is an old one and seems to relate to conference papers rather than a reviewed journal.  -- Snowded  TALK  10:39, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Volume 1 has just been published. The papers were originally presented at the 2008 conference.  There's another conference this year which will result in Volume 2, and so on.  If you'd checked the web you'd have found this: http://www.eee.bham.ac.uk/woolleysi/bio/publications.htm which confirms that it's peer-reviewed.  As this is the first peer-reviewed scientific journal on NLP, you can't pretend it isn't relevant to a section on Scientific Criticism. I've put it back (again).AJRG (talk) 16:28, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * So it is one volume only then? Its description also makes it clear that not all papers within it are peer reviewed.  That aside, how does it establish that a new programme has been created?  Is it in one of the papers?  If so which one?   Even then, why is it in the criticism section?   I suggest you allow a discussion to take place before putting it back again.  -- Snowded  TALK  16:45, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Every journal has to start at Volume 1... It belongs in the scientific criticism section because it includes papers such as "A Critical Review of Past Research into the Neuro-Linguistic Programming Eye-Accessing Cues Model".  All of the papers are peer-reviewed. Why do you think otherwise?  And why do you think that deleting a reference while discussion continues is acceptable?AJRG (talk) 17:11, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Of course they start at volume one, and it takes some time for them to get authority in consequence. The advert said that it was academic and practitioner material and the reference you give above established that the conference was peer reviewed (and guess who organised the conference,  the Surrey group).  A conference review process is very different from full peer review in most cases.  In any event, even if established I don't see how the citation supports the words.  It only shows that some academics have reviewed the field in an article, anything else is OR.   So we  have two issues (i) the status of the journal/article and (ii) what it would support by way of text.-- Snowded  TALK  17:19, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * The 2008 conference (which produced Volume 1) was hosted by the University of Surrey. http://www.som.surrey.ac.uk/research/Conferences/NLPprogramme.pdf The 2010 conference (which will produce Volume 2) is being hosted by Cardiff University. http://www.cardiff.ac.uk/sohcs/degreeprogrammes/continuingeducation/2010courses/the-second-international-neurolinguistic-programming-research-conference.html Your personal opinion of the Group at Surrey University is apparent from your remarks above.  It represents a clear conflict of interest. AJRG (talk) 18:27, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * No conflict of interest that I know of. Now how about answering the questions above? -- Snowded  TALK  20:28, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Above you said "I have never been impressed with the Surrey group from when I had a visiting fellowship there". That basically disqualifies you as an impartial editor in respect of their work.  To answer your questions (again) did the journal continue? It's only just started.  The first volume is the proceedings of the first research conference.  The second research conference is being held this year, so its proceedings will in all likelihood form the second volume. "So it is one volume only then?" So far... "how does it establish that a new programme has been created?" The papers in the journal constitute a new programme of research. "why is it in the criticism section?" because it includes papers such as "A Critical Review of Past Research into the Neuro-Linguistic Programming Eye-Accessing Cues Model" AJRG (talk) 21:25, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Ah, having some knowledge of something makes you partial does it? Now to the substance, this is clearly OR.  You are saying that a collection of papers from a conference has been published, therefore a new programme of research has been initiated and co-ordinated by the University of Surrey.  Sorry but that is not supported, all we have is a published collection of papers.   There are many academic conferences every year, all publish their papers in books, special editions of established journals or a unique publication (in that order of significance by the way). There is no implication that a programme has been started unless you have specific third party material that states this is the case.  In addition this is the section criticising NLP, so it doesn't follow that anything with any word starting with "crit.." belongs in it. -- Snowded  TALK  21:35, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Prejudging the work of other people based on a previous personal acquaintance makes you partial. I've reworded the entry to reflect your concerns.  If you propose to use the word "criticism" only in its negative (non-scientific) sense then a balancing section is required to achieve a neutral point of view.AJRG (talk) 23:22, 22 February 2010 (UTC)


 * Its a simple matter of clear issues and responses. I put them in proper order. The assertion that the journal is scientific is clearly unsupported. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 01:59, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
 * This is simply false. The paper by Roderique Davis predates the conference and has nothing to say about it, so a proper order places earlier in the text.AJRG (talk) 10:51, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Actually it makes me skeptical of the school (which is all I commented on not the individuals) and therefore prone to check things carefully. Your revised wording is an attempt to paint NLP in a better light than the references support.  Two conferences over two years is hardly impressive and there is a huge difference between the review process for a conference and that for an established peer review journal.  We are required to reflect the state of scientific opinion as to NLP, a NPOV does mot mean taking a half way house between a substantial body of work on one hand and the odd conference on another.  -- Snowded  TALK  05:15, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
 * As the editor of a competing journal, you have a clear conflict of interest.AJRG (talk) 10:51, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
 * What on earth are you talking about? I am on the editorial board of five journals, and editor in Chief of one.  None of them operate in the same space as NLP, and as established journals they do not compete with a set of conference proceedings.  Please try and address content issues rather than this nonsensical sniping.  -- Snowded  TALK  12:27, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Your latest change is plain wrong, and not supported by the text. It takes time for a paper to be peer-reviewed and Roderique Davies' only 2009 reference is to a paper in the same journal.  His most recent reference to Surrey is 2006, and nowhere in his paper does he have anything to say about experimental or non-experimental research.  So he isn't responding to the the research presented at the conference at all, and the work in his paper predates the publication of the conference proceedings.AJRG (talk) 13:04, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Well I'm open to a degree, but his paper is a response to the attempt to move to non-empirical research (a dubious approach to my mind by the way given NLPs claims) and the Surrey text is introduced there. It may be better to craft a paragraph which notes the switch and incorporates both.  Lets see what other editors think.  And please stop the personal attacks, I reverted to a position supported by another editor.  -- Snowded  TALK  13:23, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
 * The citation you give doesn't support your text. If you have a better one, fine, but just deleting a  tag is poor practice.AJRG (talk) 13:49, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Its mostly a direct quote so I don't see how it cannot support it. I also note that you are happy to revert constantly, but accuse other people of edit warring.  If I look at the material above, in general every comment you make is an attack on another editor, and only a small number of them actually deal with issues.  Try and read WP:AGF and pay attention to what people write.  Please explain how the citation does not support the phrase - if you tag something you have an obligation to do that you know.-- Snowded  TALK  18:04, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Further to the above, having just read the paper again. After repeating the Surrey University statement on research cited in the article, the author goes on to say "Phenomenological research is free from hypotheses, pre-con- ceptions and assumptions, and seeks to describe rather than explain. Given the claims made by proponents of NLP, this adds little to the credibility debate and would produce reports concerning the experience from the perspective of the indi- vidual rather than confirmation of the claimed efficacy."  Based on that I don't see what possible justification you have for the citation needed tag other than the fact you don't like the statement,  -- Snowded  TALK  18:11, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
 * "Recent attempts to create a non-experimental approach to research in NLP have been criticised by Dr. Roderique Davis" is not supported by the citation, which is why the tag is where it is. You may know this from other sources, but without a citation it's original research.AJRG (talk) 20:00, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry to have to ask yu this - but do you know the meaning of phenomenological? -- Snowded  TALK  21:18, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Phenomenology is a rather bigger subject than Roderique-Davies implies, but that's not the point. Use his own words.  Trying to interpret what he says just twists the meaning.AJRG (talk) 23:33, 23 February 2010 (UTC)


 * I see what you mean AJRG. Roderique Davis did say some specific things about the issue. Good suggestion, thanks. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:07, 24 February 2010 (UTC)


 * Actually, I had a look at how conference papers are cited. Listing the venues of conferences is not relevant to the issues, and if it were done with all the conference proceedings, articles would get out of hand. Lots of conferences are planned. Its the research findings that count.  Upcoming conferences, venues, timing, lists of contributors etc may be better mentioned on the respective Wikipedia article that describes that conference.  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:41, 25 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I've taken up your suggestionAJRG (talk) 21:33, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

Eye-Accessing Cues Model
I've added a new section to help restore a neutral point of view. Diamantopoulos et al, from the University of Birmingham's Digital Systems and Vision Processing group, are published academics from outside NLP whose research includes video surveillance. The existence of an Eye Accessing Cues Model (not necessarily as described by NLP) is supported by Ehrlichman et al (2007), by Christman et al (2003) who found that retrieval of memories is enhanced by preceding eye movements, and by Baron-Cohen and Cross (1992) who found children as young as 4 interpreting eye accessing cues in adults. AJRG (talk) 08:19, 26 February 2010 (UTC)


 * Firstly it would help if you edited under your own name rather than an IP. I think this insertion needs discussion.  The publisher is a NLP organisation for a start, and it opens with a statement on Heap's use of sources which is dubious.  NLP is not validated or invalidated by one technique and its hotch potch nature means that individual aspects can be related to other material that has a better research basis.  As you say "not necessarily as described by NLP".  The fact that various non-verbal clues are picked up by children does not provide a validation of NLP.  This is also a section designed to indicate the way in which NLP is criticised.  The claims of NLP are covered elsewhere in the article -- Snowded  TALK  08:25, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * The statement on Heap's sources is accurate. The paper is here http://mheap.com/nlp1.pdf and all the references labelled DAI are dissertation abstracts. I'd be quite happy for all the material on EAC to be collected into its own section. AJRG (talk) 09:20, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * The phrase is an OR construct designed to cast doubt on Heap's work. I note the absence of a reply on the other points. -- Snowded  TALK  09:27, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * The phrase is an accurate summary of part of the paper, it is not OR. Wikipedia is not about validating or invalidating.  Since the previous academic material about EAC has such prominence, NPOV requires the inclusion of a recent academic rebuttal. AJRG (talk) 09:45, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * I disagree I'm afraid on the OR issue. The publisher also causes me concern given that they are an advocacy group for NLP.  NPOV requires us to be authentic to reliable third party sources, not to balance those sources with claims of NLP advocates. -- Snowded  TALK  09:51, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Have you read the paper? Many academic papers are published by advocacy groups.  Heap 1988 was published by Croom Helm, almost exclusively known for books on ornithology. AJRG (talk) 10:04, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Fortunately Ornithologists are not known for advocacy on denigration of NLP and while many papers may be published by advocacy groups, numbers along do not provide validation. -- Snowded  TALK  10:13, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Hypnotists are, though. Heap 1988 was originally a paper given at the Fourth European Congress of Hypnosis in Psychotherapy and Psychosomatic Medicine, 1987.  Wikipedia is about verifiability, not validation. AJRG (talk) 10:25, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Aside from the simple fact that Heap 1988 is not the only paper referenced in that system, you really are clutching at straws. Perhaps you can give us a third party source which says that anyone attending or speaking at a conference on hypnosis is in consequent of that location a bias source?  Are you seriously arguing  that an NLP organisation is not a partisan source which has at least to be treated with suspicion? -- Snowded  TALK  10:34, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * You haven't read the paper, then. Wikipedia is not about suspicion, it's about verifiability.  The views of Hypnotists on NLP are well publicised. AJRG (talk) 10:53, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Another important aspect of this is that the proposed section in question was already an issue discussed previously. If it is to be added to the article, it should be part of the previous issue on NLP eye accessing research, rather than added as a sort of practitioner oriented speculative and inconclusive wish for further research. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 08:32, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * This is simply false. There was no previous discussion of a new section on EAC.  The material on EAC is mixed up with everything else.  The recommendation for further research is based on the current state of the literature and has nothing to do with practitioners.AJRG (talk) 09:21, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * The point being made is that EAC has been discussed elsewhere (discussed previously in the article) not that there has been a specific proposal here, or at least that is how I read the comment. -- Snowded TALK  09:27, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * EAC is so mixed up in the rest of the article that comprehension is impaired. Since a majority of academic research into NLP has been about EAC, it deserves its own section. AJRG (talk) 09:45, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Then propose a new section on that here and see what support it gets - outlining the content and other changes would help. -- Snowded TALK  09:51, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * I just did.AJRG (talk) 10:04, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't see an outline of changes etc. -- Snowded TALK  10:13, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Pull all the content about EAC into its own section. What isn't clear about that? AJRG (talk) 10:25, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * May well be a good idea in the main section (although not criticism), how about "outlining the content and other changes" (sorry to have to repeat myself) -- Snowded TALK  10:34, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Please explain how that's a valid request. I made a bold edit and you chose to revert.  I've given my reasons at length.  Make an effort to achieve consensus. AJRG (talk) 10:53, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * You inserted a dubious section in the criticism section. Two of us have said that a sub-section may be appropriate elsewhere in the article and I have asked you to outline here what you think should be in it.  If you simply want to reinsert your original text then I oppose.  The request for you to outline a proposed change is normal in Wikipedia.  Broadening your editing range might help you appreciate that.  -- Snowded  TALK  11:34, 26 February 2010 (UTC)

I didn't insert a section in the criticism section. I added a whole new section. "Dubious" is a claim uninformed by reading either Heap (1988) or Diamantopoulos et al (2009). The existing paragraph starting "The experimental research that does exist" is all about the EAC model. Since that model is no longer unique to NLP it warrants a separate discussion. AJRG (talk) 12:12, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Last time I looked this article was about NLP and material in respect of the model should therefore cover the NLP use. -- Snowded  TALK  12:23, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Which is why Diamantopoulos et al (2009) is relevant and should be included. As the article currently stands it claims that existing research invalidates the EAC model.  That is plainly misleading, given the rebuttal. AJRG (talk) 12:49, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * You are moving your argument around here. Above you say that it should be included as the EAC model is no longer unique to NLP, hence my response.  Now that claim needs to be validated in its own right.   Dealing with EAC in this article has to relate to its use within NLP theory.  As such any insertion (if agreed) belongs in the body of the article, rather than being tagged onto the section on criticism.  That section contains a body of references, not just Heap 1988.  Further, the statements in Diamantopoulos (in my opinion) need more supporting material given that there are published in the journal of an advocacy group for NLP.  -- Snowded  TALK  12:58, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * You still haven't read the paper. The academic debate over the EAC model has been going on for thirty years and needs to be stated clearly and include relevant rebuttal. AJRG (talk) 13:06, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Then you really should not have a problem in providing a reference from another source, ideally one not tied to NLP.-- Snowded TALK  13:11, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * A reference to what? Diamantopoulos et al? AJRG (talk) 13:31, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
 * I have a real paper to get out today so after this comment I am going to have to leave it to other editors to pick up/discuss (which is probably a good thing). You are currently asserting a position based on a single source from a journal which is published by a NLP advocacy organisation.  If the position has validity then you should be able to find other sources, ideally from third party journals that have no factional interest.  -- Snowded  TALK  13:41, 26 February 2010 (UTC)

odd logical connection
In the section "Scientific Criticism", the fourth paragraph consists of two sentences. The first sentence states that there is lack of empirical research/evidence to support NLP. The second sentence states that someone said IF some of the NLP assertions are correct, THEN (a bunch of claims).

I don't understand why these two sentences are grouped together; the second doesn't follow the first in any semantic or logical manner (to me). I'm not even sure if the second sentence should belong in an NPOV article. It seems speculative at best, and pure fantasy at worst.

70.179.23.9 (talk) 19:00, 23 May 2010 (UTC)

fact tag
Given that the references are already in the same paragraph and the following one I can't really see why this has been added. -- Snowded TALK  05:48, 26 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Agreed; I'm not sure why a cn tag would be necessary there. bobrayner (talk) 10:43, 26 May 2010 (UTC)
 * The references in the paragraph do not directly support the statement about the attitudes of professionals toward NLP since Sharpley's (1987) literature review or Druckman and Swets. Devilly was added as a reference for this statement: "Since then, NLP has been regarded with suspicion or outright hostility by the academic, psychiatric and medical professions.". That source does not directly support the statement so I moved it here. We can move it back when there is a source. There are only small pockets of academics, psychiatrists and medical professions who are hostile toward NLP. There are probably more professionals who use it and are supportive of it. But we don't have any evidence either way. Devilly simply cites Sharpley 1987 that NLP was not supported in controlled studies. He does not say anything about the attitude of various professions toward NLP. He does make an argument for teaching evidence-based practice. I do remember seeing a poll by Norcross of professionals, mainly psychologists, which included a question about whether they rated NLP was credible for treating certain conditions. Anyway, you cannot make broad sweeping statements about the view of professions from those industries without high quality evidence. Otherwise the view needs to be attributed to a particular point of view. (And Devilly, 2005 is not adequate - I just reread it here). Action potential discuss contribs 14:16, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I think it tends to be indifference or hostility in my experience unless we include various management consultants and others who seized on it as a fad. Even the Surrey group are cautious in their statements.  -- Snowded  TALK  16:24, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
 * What is your feeling about the percentages of professionals with the different attitudes on a scale from Seized, Supportive, Indifferent, Skeptical, Hostile? Action potential discuss contribs 16:40, 27 May 2010 (UTC)

quasi-experiment on NLP therapy
This article is just an quasi-experimental design with pre and post test / with follow-up after 6 months. It found that NLP was roughly comparable with CBT based on effect sizes at follow-up. Its controls were limited and there was no randomization to treatment conditions. But this is common in studies of psychotherapy. The journal is peer-reviewed. It highlights some the methodological limitations of previous studies and mentions a number of studies which were supportive of NLP. So I guess the questions is, how do we balance these different views? We cite Roderique-Davies (2009) in the scientific criticism section even though it is published in an new journal. Should we cite the following paper to give another point of view of the research? How much weight should we give it?

Action potential discuss contribs 15:25, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Stipancic, Melita, Renner, Walter , Schütz, Peter and Dond, Renata (2009) 'Effects of Neuro-Linguistic Psychotherapy on psychological difficulties and perceived quality of life', Counselling and Psychotherapy Research, 10:1, 39 - 49, First published on: 12 October 2009
 * Roderique-Davies' claim to be included is that a newspaper quoted his soundbite. He doesn't have an academic reputation in this field - he researches drug addiction and social identification in self-selecting groups. AJRG (talk) 09:03, 29 May 2010 (UTC)

Norcross 2006
I moved the following text here because while NLP is listed in the table, the researchers did run significance tests or mention it in the body of the paper. That's unfortunate because the statistic that NLP was judged unfamiliar by only 18.2% of respondents would be informative if it could be verified.

Action potential discuss contribs 00:51, 28 May 2010 (UTC)
 * In a 2006 Delphi poll of experts in psychology and psychotherapy, 73.3% of respondents reported they were familiar with NLP as an approach to treatment of mental and behavioral disorders, and most of them reported that NLP has been discredited for the treatment of mental and behavioral disorders. Norcross et. al. (2006) Discredited Psychological Treatments and Tests: A Delphi Poll. Professional Psychology: Reasearch and Practice.
 * You removed the study because the researchers did "run significance tests"? Although an accurate statement I don't see how it can be an objection. Perhaps that's a typo? Table 4 has p values; which is desirable in sources, not undesirable. I shall restore it unless you have a better source.
 * bobrayner (talk) 10:12, 28 May 2010 (UTC)


 * I did not see table 4 p-value but they are not testing the ranking. The mean score for NLP as a treatment for mental and behavioral disorders in round 1 was 3.57, SD=1.06 and in round 2 it was 3.87, SD=.92. Both scores did not meet the cutoff of 4.0 for "probably discredited" treatments and it was "possibly discredited" but that was the neutral rating on the likert scale. The p-values in table 4 was to test if there was a difference between experts from the CBT versus psychodynamic/humanistic perspective. The ratings were on a 5 point likert scale. 1 indicated not at all discredited, 2. unlikely discredited, 3. possibly discredited, 4. probably discredited, and 5. certainly discredited. I've updated the statement attributed to Norcross - how does it look now? Action potential discuss contribs 14:27, 28 May 2010 (UTC)


 * I inserted "Probably or possibly" as that is readable and reflects the source. -- Snowded  TALK  06:35, 29 May 2010 (UTC)


 * Yes, it was somewhere between possibly and probably discredited. But we should say that ratings from humanistic orientations was significantly more favorable than ratings from CBT theoretical orientations (table 4). Action potential discuss contribs 07:41, 29 May 2010 (UTC)
 * 93% of the respondents were trained psychologists, 62% of them were employed at university (25% were behavioral, 18% cognitive, 8% humanistic, 7% psychodynamic). 60% employed at university. They appeared to average across discredited ratings from behavioral and cognitive orientations (to get CBT total) and across psychodynamic and humanistic orientations (to get PD-HUM total) and then compared CBT to PD-HUM and found that for ratings that NLP is discredited: CBT > PD-HUM. For a study that claims it was conducted within the context of evidence based practice it was very poorly controlled. Action potential discuss contribs 09:25, 29 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I think that is too esoteric a distinction for a wikipedia article - the reference is there if people want to move into it. Also CBT is a difficult category anyway.  -- Snowded  TALK  07:46, 29 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Why is CBT a difficult category in this context? AJRG (talk) 08:50, 29 May 2010 (UTC)
 * A side comment really, I am not sure I would include all the people they did in the CBT category. -- Snowded  TALK  09:32, 29 May 2010 (UTC)


 * Rather than calling them CBT orientation I changed it to cognitive and behavioural to avoid the confusion that Snowded raised. It now says: "However, the ratings of NLP given by psychologists from the humanistic and psychodynamic orientations were significantly more favorable[72] towards NLP than those identifying with cognitive and behavioral orientations." Action potential discuss contribs 10:08, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Its still "explaining away", a sentence or so is just enough. People can look up the research and draw their own conclusions, there is no need to spell out your opinion of what is or is not an important qualification.  -- Snowded  TALK  10:12, 30 May 2010 (UTC)

Popularization - please check
Can you please check my recent change to the introduction regarding popularization and that NLP has been largely ignored by social psychologists. Action potential discuss contribs 05:27, 29 May 2010 (UTC)

Von Bergen 1997
There is a paper called Von Bergen et al (1997) "Selected alternative training techniques in HRD" which criticizes the use of NLP in HRD. I just removed a quote attributed to Von Bergen et al about Druckman & Bjork 1991 not referencing NLP. It was confusing because it immediately followed the quote by Druckman (2004). Action potential discuss contribs 08:51, 29 May 2010 (UTC)

Applications
I made one set of changes to simply the recent addition to split out HR/management type applications. I have also reversed for the moment the change to this section which made a series of claims about NLP in relationship to other theories/practice. Happy to be corrected but the two sources are both NLP advocates and their claim could be interpreted as an attempt to claim legitimacy. For those sort of statements we would need an independent reference or corroborating statements from the other practices. -- Snowded TALK  12:51, 29 May 2010 (UTC)

Psychotherapeutic
Can we have some quotes from the sources used in the change this morning please. In particular I would like to see confirmation that sources other than NLP ones make the association and the derivation point. -- Snowded TALK  05:09, 30 May 2010 (UTC)


 * I'll add some quotes here in about an hour. Action potential discuss contribs 05:22, 30 May 2010 (UTC)


 * Happy to wait a bit longer than that! -- Snowded  TALK  05:31, 30 May 2010 (UTC)


 * Beyebach, M., & Rodríguez Morejón, A. (1999): "Within their solution-focused approach, these therapists do not shun from borrowing intervention developed at Palto Alto's Mental Research Institute (Fische, Weakland & Segal 1982, Watzlawick et al. 1974), Ericksonian hypnosis (O'Hanlon 1987), Neuro-linguistic programming (NLP) techniques (Bandler & Grinder, 1982, 1979), … from the beginning [SFT] showed strong links with the Palo Alta MRI group … and of Milton H. Erickson…" -- Beyebach, M., & Rodríguez Morejón, A. (1999). Some thoughts on integration in solution-focused therapy. Journal of Systemic Therapies, 18, 24–42.
 * Kerry (2009) "Rubin Battino's (2006) latest text, Expectation: The Very Brief Therapy Book, emphasizes the importance of examining client expectations in therapy, and outlines the numerous schools of therapy that address expectations for change. The author notes the contributions of Milton H. Erickson (Erickson & Rossi, 1979; Erickson, Rossi, & Rossi, 1976) and those who have used his work to develop brief ways of utilizing expectancy in session. Battino points to the use of language forms in psychotherapy. He acknowledges the contributions of Neurolinguistic Programming (Bandler & Grinder, 1976; Grinder & Bandler, 1975) and solution-oriented approaches to therapy (de Shazer, 1985; O'Hanlon & Wilk, 1987; Berg & Dolan, 2001) that use suggestion, "exceptions to the rule", and shifts in context (from a state of either/or to both/and) to alter client expectations. In their brief, respectful approaches to therapy, these practitioners have both used the client's frame of reference, and challenged their dysfunctional expectations of failure."(p.15)
 * Bill O'Connell:"[solution-focused therapy] belongs to the constructionist school of therapist, including among which are … neuro-linguistic programming (Bandler and Grinder 1979)…"(p.9)
 * Windy Dryden: "The philosophy behind solution-focused therapy is social constructionism. The epistemology also underpins…Neurolinguistic programming…"(p.382)
 * Mathison & Tosey (2007): "In common with brief therapy (McDermott & Jago 2001), and contemporaneous practices that share core influences, such as Solution-focused Therapy (de Shazer 2005), and Possibility Therapy (O'Hanlon & Weiner-Davis 1989), NLP challenges the assumption that personal change necessarily involves long-term therapy and insight into the past (Bandler & Grinder 1979:6-7)."
 * Action potential discuss contribs 06:15, 30 May 2010 (UTC)


 * OK, taking those at face value they establish some citation and grouping, what I am not clear on is why the extensive range of changes? I'm not sure all social constructivists would want to be associated with NLP.  Also the sources are questionable.  Dryden has been accused of throwing his lot in with Brender etc al.  Mathison & Tosey are in the NLP group as Surrey.   O'Connell's book verges on self-help and is certainly not an authoritative academic source.   Battino looks like a casual reference as does Beyebach.  If this was philosophy (my expertise) then I would expect support for that text in authoritative directories, major text books etc.   The more I look at this the more I think it should go back to a paragraph or two only with some reference to claimed associations.  The current wording implies an authority not supported by the references.  -- Snowded  TALK  07:09, 30 May 2010 (UTC)


 * O'Connell: has good writing style and academic credentials. It is not self-help. It is handbook published by Sage is recommended as a university text book by influential BRIEF, London. This can be considered authoritative.
 * Dryden's handbook is also published by Sage and corroborates O'Connell's point
 * Rubin Battino is also published by Crown. Rubin Battino is a professor emeritus and a counselor. It has a whole chapter dedicate to NLP and its contribution to brief therapy.
 * Beyebach et al. is published in Journal of Systemic therapies
 * Other sources link NLP to SFBT via the influence of Paul Watzlawick and the Mental Research Institute group at Palo Alto where both Gregory Bateson and Milton Erickson were active. Action potential discuss contribs 08:03, 30 May 2010 (UTC)


 * BRIEF is a training organisation so forgive me if I don't take that as authoritative. That aside you have not addressed my substantive points relating to expected sources for these statements and the relevance of the material in the first place.  At the moment it looks like an attempt to give a specious authority to NLP and we are having one of those period editing spates where criticism is removed etc.  so I am feeling cautious.  I am tempted to return it to its original state pending agreement here, or to reduce the paragraph substantially.  -- Snowded  TALK  08:18, 30 May 2010 (UTC)

The problem is that it is not easy to define whether NLP use in therapy is a practice, an approach, a method, a Batesonian cybernetic epistemology, a constructivist practice, or a mere set of techniques. As you know there are published sources for each of these views either in peer-reviewed journals, or books from reputable publishers (e.g Sage and Crown). NLP has had similar influences (Milton Erickson, Mental Research Institute, Paul Watzlawick) and has influenced (e.g. reframing), other practices and this help people get a sense of where NLP has come from and where it belongs in modern day practice. Action potential discuss contribs 10:33, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Or a pseudoscience with a commercial focus that can't justify its excessive claims. There are lots and lots of ways to label it and its far too easy (given the magpie nature of NLP) to link it to other theories and practices that may have some similarities of origin.  My view, as stated above, is that IF (and its a big IF) there is a need to provide this sort of data then it has to come from a suitable reliable source (see comments above.  -- Snowded  TALK  10:54, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * This implies that all NLP is the same and can be lazily dismissed without proper enquiry. Reality is more complicated than that. AJRG (talk) 11:16, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I think I said that there are lots of ways to label it didn't I? -- Snowded TALK  11:58, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * "a rose By any other name..."? Still implies that all NLP is the same. AJRG (talk) 12:39, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Not sure what point you are trying to make (or AJRG for that matter). -- Snowded  TALK  12:44, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * The point I'm making is that you've abandoned reality. Trying to tar all of NLP with the same brush stretches WP:NPOV to the limit. AJRG (talk) 12:52, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Can't see any example of that above AJRG, perhaps you can provide the diffs? -- Snowded  TALK  12:59, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Here. AJRG (talk) 16:22, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * You need to read more carefully. AP listed several different (positive) categories, I added a negative one and made the point that there are "lots and lots of ways".   Its a good idea to read what other editors say rather than simply reacting, especially when you have a tendency to stray away from addressing content to discussing the merits of other editors views.  -- Snowded  TALK  16:50, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * You claim an expertise in philosophy and yet pretend not to understand your own argument. Curious.AJRG (talk) 19:35, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * If you don't like the explanation then there is little more I can do to help you. -- Snowded  TALK  19:37, 30 May 2010 (UTC)

Proposed rewrite Scientific criticism section
I think we should rename the section to "NLP and science". I have worked on complete review of that section which is here. Please comment. Action potential discuss contribs 15:37, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * A quick scan says it is going to take time to work out what you have changed. Help us out - other than the title and the sections, what have you changed? -- Snowded  TALK  15:44, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Here. AJRG (talk) 16:28, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Back to your old ways I see.  I've made a polite request to another editor to quickly summarise where he has changed content rather than just re-ordering it.  Its a common request where there are a series of mixed (content and sequencing) changes.  Action Potential is free to accept the invitation or to refuse it.  We may disagree as editors but I respect his willingness to work with others.  -- Snowded  TALK  16:46, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Its a good idea to read what other editors say rather than simply reacting. AP had already done what you asked. AJRG (talk) 19:12, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * No he hasn't and he has just said (see below) that he will not have time. Try and keep up -- Snowded  TALK  19:21, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Try and pay attention. He made the changes and then immediately reverted them, precisely so that you could see exactly what changes he'd made. AJRG (talk) 19:28, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * If you check out the exchange on our talk pages you will find that we had agreed to the reversal once he had finished editing. My request above (I thought it was clear) was for a quick summary of the changes he had made (other than moving text around). -- Snowded  TALK  19:40, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I lost track of the exact changes. But can we have a discussion about acceptable sources for the various points of view? It would be great to come to some sort of agreement about that. Action potential discuss contribs 08:54, 2 June 2010 (UTC)


 * I only had today to work on it and I've now run out of time. I'll return in a few weeks but want to first get some comments from the wikipedia community about how to get this article up to GA or FA quality. Action potential discuss contribs 18:53, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Understood - I'm passing through Australia (Melbourne, Canberra, Brisbane, Perth) in late June/July if you are around -- Snowded  TALK  19:01, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Please message me privately about this. Action potential discuss contribs 08:54, 2 June 2010 (UTC)

The section should be made more readable to the average person. I added some explanation to the Norcross study together with more of the research findings. The reader should know what the relevant category means. The criticism section can be two parts. 1 Scientific Criticism 2. Psychology Practitioner Criticism (including Norcross et al, Von Bergen, and any others. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:11, 31 May 2010 (UTC)


 * You added information: "The possibly/probably category of discredit includes dolphin assisted therapy, equine therapy, psychosynthesis, scared straight programs, and emotional freedom technique (EFT)" Also you added a statement attributed to a book by Norcross et al. 2008 on evidence-based practice. Can you tell us more about the Norcross (2008) study and what the specific findings were? What type of study was it? Who were the participants? How were they selected? Did they also test to see if there was a difference between the views of cognitive/behavioral verus humanistic orienations in relation to NLP as they did in Norcross (2006)? Did they include NLP for the treatment of other conditions? The evidence seems a little weak at the moment. I've ordered the Norcross book you cited but it will be a few weeks. One more point - I really cannot do any more work on this for a few weeks anyway. I'm happy to work with you when I return. Action potential discuss contribs 09:18, 1 June 2010 (UTC)


 * EFT is in the "See Also" section of the article. Readers would not understand what the category means unless they see what is most closely related to NLP within that category. Dolphin assisted therapy, equine therapy, psychosynthesis, scared straight programs, and emotional freedom technique can be linked to the relevant articles to make it easier for the reader. The same is needed for the 2008 study. Statistical details of the Delphi method can be found on the relevant Wikipedia article. A link will help. NLP is an obscure subject. At least a scientific criticism section should be maintained to clarify. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:49, 2 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Norcross does not make that link in his 2006 article so we cannot make it here. That would violate WP:NOR. The use of Norcross 2006 on this page might actually be a breach that policy because it is not directly supported by the source. I don't think we can report data that was not reported by the author. But I'm waiting for a comment on that. I would really like to see some quotes from Norcross (2008) which backs up your proposed change. Do you still have access to the book? What exactly did it infer about NLP? Who was polled this time? How did they address the academic/CBT bias they acknowledged in the 2006 article? Did they measure the views of different perspective again? I seriously have limited time but can work with you on it after the break. Action potential discuss contribs 06:25, 2 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Then its simple matter of using direct quotes and deciding to serve the reader. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 01:52, 3 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Direct quotes can be taken of context. We have fallen into that trap on this article in the past. We have to be selective so that we represent the various views and ensuring that we do not give any one view undue weight. This is a difficult topic because there are no text books published by university publishers. We do have some peer-reviewed papers from different disciplines with a range of views. There is some empirical research with mixed results. Then there is the problem of assigning weight to the various views. There are thousands of books on many different topics. The problem then is assigning weight to the different views. For a long time even the opening paragraph was unstable until we found that the definition of NLP in the Oxford English Dictionary. Fortunately this resolved the issue. A remaining issue seems to be whether we have the word "controversial" in the opening sentence. The challenge then was, if you want to change the opening paragraph then you have to find a more reputable/reliable source. That being said, I think the best way forward is to rely on the highest quality sources we can find and stick to them closely. One of the problems is that some paragraphs are stuck together from multiple sources rather than paraphrasing an entire topic from a source. So I think we chose a few very well written articles about NLP from high quality sources then we can use those to structure the entire article. Ok.... need to get back to work now. Action potential --149.171.53.44 (talk) 06:41, 3 June 2010 (UTC)

Ancient Greek rhetoric
Is it just me, or does NLP seem a lot like a modern language take on aspects of the Ancient Greek liberal art of rhetoric? Oliver Low (talk) 21:44, 8 June 2010 (UTC)

"Popularity" and "Controversial"
"Despite its popularity,[13]" - is NLP popular? I do not have the article referenced, but in its title it uses the descriptor "Popular", which has a very different meaning. A 'popular method' comes from the populis, rather than from science, with no reference to its actual market share (ie, 'popularity'). I believe this phrase is misleading and should be cut. Not sure if the reference has something useful to say and should be preserved. Please advise. Ratagonia (talk) 02:27, 2 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Like most fads its now past its peak, but still has adherents. A  fresh pair of eyes noting some of these would be useful, my involvement is simply to stop the article becoming a propaganda piece for NLP practitioners and adherents.   For the avoidance of doubt given the odd personal attack above, preventing something becoming a propaganda piece is maintaining an NPOV.  Making it an attack piece on NLP would be as wrong.   -- Snowded  TALK  08:19, 2 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Not exactly sure why you've carried our "Controversial" discussion over into this section, but I'll follow suit (and update the header). The thing about identifying "propaganda" is, of course, that it is relative - i.e., it is dependent upon the individual's subjective point of view. You believe NLP to be a "fad", "pseudo-science", and a "cult", and so your judgment of what constitutes "propaganda" will necessarily reflect that position. Nevertheless, my hope was that the substance of our respective arguments could be evaluated on their own merit, by a group of editors, and that we could proceed accordingly. However, the discussion page seems quite deserted these days, and so I think the page should be left as is until more people are present who have the time and motivation to take the necessary steps to make the article more objective. That's my final two cents anyhow. Willyfreddy (talk) 01:51, 10 December 2010 (UTC)
 * I answered the point made by Ratagonia who opened a new section. I agree with your conclusion, but to make it clear, it would be as wrong for the lede to label NLP as a pseudoscience as it would for it to be "propaganda".  The article needs to inform the reader that they are dealing with something which attracts both adherents and detractors (a statement by the way which is one alternative to "controversial") -- Snowded  TALK  06:45, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

Flyby tagging
The first paragraph of the scientific criticism section summarises the rest of the material and is a form discussed by interested and informed editors some time ago. All of the material in the section which it summarises is referenced. There is no requirement to repeat those references twice in the same section. I can't be bothered to edit war over this, but there is no justification for either the tags or any attempt to remove the material given that it is fully referenced. -- Snowded TALK  16:06, 13 December 2010 (UTC)

Lack of adequate referencing in the criticiscm section
The criticism section violates various style policies. It is riddled with vague comments about anonymous "critics", unreferenced original research, personal commentary and opinion. For reasons best known to himself, Snowded keeps undoing my responsible attempts to bring this article inline with Wikipedia's policies. Until this section is properly referenced in accordance with the relevant policies I will continue to insist that it is. So stop making excuses for the current unacceptable inadequacies and do something about it - otherwise the criticism section will need to be removed altogether until it is. Afterwriting (talk) 16:13, 13 December 2010 (UTC)


 * If you bothered to read you would have seen I have already responded to this point above. There is no case for references being in place twice.  All the material is there in the body of the section and fully referenced.  Neither are you being particularly responsible.  You even deleted one reference I provided.  I have also put in the work to reference all challenges bar the nonsense of requiring double references in one section.   Fly by tagging is not improving the article, it is an attempt to get other people to do it for you-- Snowded  TALK  16:15, 13 December 2010 (UTC)


 * If you bothered to read you would have seen I have already responded to this point above. There is no case for references being in place twice.  All the material is there in the body of the section and fully referenced.  -- Snowded  TALK  16:15, 13 December 2010 (UTC)


 * It is not properly referenced at all. You seem to believe that you can make up your own policies on these matters.  And, for your information, your comments above appeared while I was writing my own comments above so I didn't get a chance to be "bothered" to read it.  How about you start to be "bothered" to put references where they actually belong?  Afterwriting (talk) 16:27, 13 December 2010 (UTC)


 * As I said before that is a summary paragraph. There are extensive references in the main body of the section all of which relate back to that summary.  I suggest you read it and if there is not a clear link list them here and we can see if we can improve it.  Doubling up references in one section is bad style.  Otherwise I have referenced everything you tagged so a little less aggression please, try and act collaboratively -- Snowded  TALK  16:31, 13 December 2010 (UTC)

Revisions 24th Dec 2010
I made a number of revisions which were all undone by user 'Snowded'. Granted, perhaps I was a little hasty. I have now adjusted simply the section titled 'Application', in order to define the "second" application of NLP. In particular I'd like to stress that NLP is not primarily used for psychotherapy, but rather primarily for effective communication, hence the edit. Thanks. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.112.89.243 (talk) 12:01, 24 December 2010 (UTC)
 * I felt the general tenor of your edits was to promote NLP rather than taking. NPOV. For the moment I fact tagged one claim and will review the rest later.  -- Snowded  TALK  12:09, 24 December 2010 (UTC)
 * I have explained better below... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.112.89.243 (talk) 12:13, 24 December 2010 (UTC)

Changes made 24 Dec 2010
I made a number of changes to the page today, which were each undone by 'Snowded'. AGreed, I was a little hasty and in hindsight, unsympathetic to those who have put their time and effort in to previosuly editing this page. I apologise.

Instead I have now edited the 'Applications' section to include a brief opening sentence, and to redefine the 'second' application as "interpersonal communication and persuasion". I feel strongly that NLPs primary use is for this, rather than for psychotherapeutic use, hece this edit. I hope people agree that it is fair to express that both are equally valid, rather than defining a misleeding 'primary' use and terming the interpersonal communication aspect/application as simply "other use".

Thanks and kind regards. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.112.89.243 (talk) 12:12, 24 December 2010 (UTC)

Robert Spitzer
The Robert Spitzer cited in this article is not the Robert_Spitzer_(psychiatrist) who has a wikipidia page. There are two different Robert Spitzers. Both are psychiatrists. The one associated with Neuro-linguistic programming does not have a L. middle name. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lyle troxell (talk • contribs) 10:25, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

"Controversial"
Hi. I'm wondering why NLP specifically has been given the "controversial" label whereas, for example, psychiatry and psychoanalysis have not on here. For example, publications from Richard P. Bentall highlight the controversial nature of psychiatry, and it would certainly not be hard to find a plethora of articles/publications doing the same for psychoanalysis (e.g. responses to Erdelyi in BBS). My point is NOT that psychiatry/psychoanalysis are controversial, whereas NLP is not, it's simply that ANY applied psychological technique will be controversial to some extent (even CBT, I'm sure). So, once again, why has NLP been given the "controversial" label, when it was not taken from the reference cited in that first paragraph. It seems to me that "Neuro-Linguistic Programming (NLP) is an alternative approach to psychotherapy..." would be most appropriate. Thanks. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.180.44.163 (talk) 22:44, 23 November 2010 (UTC)
 * There appears to be little discussion on this page recently. As the term "controversial" does not appear in the reference cited in that first paragraph, if there is no counter-argument provided to establish the justification for the term, I will replace it with "alternative". Accordingly, the first sentence will read: "Neuro-Linguistic Programming (NLP) is an alternative approach to psychotherapy...". —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.180.44.163 (talk) 06:04, 27 November 2010 (UTC)


 * The issue I think is that NLP is mainly known for its use in management consultancy in particular organisational work where it is controversial if increasingly marginalized. IN the main this is due to the claims made by its advocates and near cult like status in some cases.  It attempts to claim respectability via psychiatry where it is far from mainstream.   CBT is controversial not as a method in itself but due to the NICE attempt to more or less exclude the other talking therapies in its favour.  That said I saw a whole bunch of new popular books on it in Washington bookshops a couple of weeks ago, which smacked a bit of the early days of NLP's transition to a management fad.   This needs to be discussed, but alternative is not acceptable.  We have also had far too many SPA  IPs attempting to remove the word without discussion.   Incidentally the lede summarises the article, there is more than enough referenced material there to show it is controversial -- Snowded  TALK  08:41, 28 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Hi Snowded, thanks for the reply. Again, as I said, I am not debating whether or not NLP is controversial. I strongly believe that any applied psychological approach will be controversial and, considering our current knowledge of the mind/brain, this is to be expected. Psychiatry is hugely controversial (not to mention psychoanalysis), and I disagree with your claim that CBT, as a method, cannot be seen as controversial in itself (although I do not have any references to back this up right now). Furthermore, I don't see how what "SPA IPs" have done in the past has to do with our current discussion - hopefully this article has not devolved into a personal, "us against them" piece. Regardless, these are just opinions (yours and mine), and they carry less weight than the reputable reference utilised in the first paragraph, which, in summing up NLP, does not use the word "controversial". Accordingly, I believe that "controversial" should be changed to "alternative". —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.180.44.163 (talk) 21:25, 29 November 2010 (UTC)


 * The lede summarises the article, and there are references in the article to its controversial nature. Its not normal (or good practice) to have references in the lede.-- Snowded  TALK  03:35, 30 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Well, there IS a reference in the first paragraph, and it uses "alternative", not "controversial". Furthermore, the "criticism and controversy" section of the article has itself been labeled as potentially not objective, and clearly needs reworking (but one thing at a time). Nevertheless, using your logic, the introductory paragraph of any applied psychological method should contain the term "controversial" if references can be provided, within the body of the article, that demonstrate its controversial nature. Which, of course, would not be hard for any of the approaches. Regardless, I still feel that we are letting opinions get in the way of references. I suppose we will just have to agree to disagree about this. As this is one for and one against, could we please have some others weigh in here? Thanks. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.180.44.163 (talk) 02:50, 1 December 2010 (UTC)


 * You might want to consider registering a name here (and remembering to sign your contributions). As I said we have had a string of IPs attempting to remove that phrase, all of them SPAs,  at the moment you also seem to be an SPA but you are at least using the talk page.   I do think you are missing a substantial point here.  NLPs notability is not as a psychological method but as a management consultancy movement.  Depending on the orientation of the commentator it is either a pseudo-scientific cult or an "applied psychological method".  Largely as a result of all that there is very little serious neutral literature on the subject.  The University of Surrey group which is frequently quoted are also running an NLP consultancy group so their material has to be used with caution, and there is no other substantial body of material.  What there is is in the article.  As to the tag I am not sure when that crept in, but no one has made the case for it so it can be deleted.  The material there is all referenced.  I do think there is a case for rewriting the lede to reflect these points-- Snowded  TALK  09:01, 1 December 2010 (UTC)


 * And so I have - although name calling probably isn't too constructive. So, yes, I understand that you think I'm missing something, and I certainly think the same thing about your perspective. Nevertheless, I don't want to lose our focus here, as our opinions need to take a back seat. The Oxford Dictionary would certainly be considered neutral, and they are using the term "alternative" instead of "controversial". So, again, I'd like to see what other people's opinions on this are here. Willyfreddy (talk) 12:00, 1 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Thank you for registering it makes life easier. The Oxford references uses "alternative" in a longer text which is quoted in full.  It doesn't support defining NLP as alternative and it doesn't call it an alternative approach to psychotherapy but says "a system of alternative therapy".   As I have said several times now - the lede summarises the article as a whole.  -- Snowded  TALK  15:01, 1 December 2010 (UTC)


 * "As I have said several times now..." Yes, we have both stated our arguments numerous times now. It is very obvious that we disagree. Accordingly, let's see what others think. We can see where we are at in a couple of weeks. Willyfreddy (talk) 00:05, 2 December 2010 (UTC)


 * On the WP:AGF assumption that you are a new editor, you need to be aware that WIkipedia is not democracy and you are expected to deal with the arguments made. -- Snowded  TALK  08:21, 2 December 2010 (UTC)


 * This reminds me of why I've avoided discussing articles on here in the past. I have dealt with your arguments, and provided counters. Let others decide the stronger position. I simply do not have the motivation or time to argue incessantly on the internet. I have no personal stake in this. You clearly do. Your lack of objectivity on this article is manifest: You consider NLP a "fad", and are "protecting this from propaganda". Previously you suggested that "Depending on the orientation of the commentator it is either a pseudo-scientific cult or an "applied psychological method"". In other words, someone either considers NLP a cult or is spreading propaganda. I reject your subjective characterization completely and your personal involvement in the content of this page, in my opinion, should preclude you from having any serious level of input into its content. You are no more objective than the NLP zealots themselves. One does not need to convince you, and only you, that a change is warranted. This page is not yours. I have made my arguments, I will wait for others to weigh in, and if there is a consensus then I think it should be changed. That's my 2 cents. Willyfreddy (talk) 12:41, 2 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Actually you haven't dealt with the arguments, you have simply repeated an assertion in respect of a reference. You have not addressed the issue of its use outside the context of psychology (which is about the only thing that makes it notable).  Neither have you addressed the points on the context of the quote you are relying on, and while we are at it you have not addressed the issue of neutral third party material.  You also need to read more carefully,  I characterised two positions as "cult" or "applied psychological method"   I did not say that NLP had to be considered as either a cult or propaganda.  You are now resorting to small string of personal attacks;  a simple question - have you edited here before or on a related page under a different name or as an IP?  -- Snowded  TALK  12:54, 2 December 2010 (UTC)


 * You already asked me your "simple question", and I already answered it (see talk page of IP address, above). Anyhow, yes, I am painfully aware that you are not satisfied with my argument, and I'm okay with that. If anyone else thinks that any points relevant to the current discussion require further elaboration then I'd be happy to participate. Willyfreddy (talk) 13:45, 2 December 2010 (UTC)


 * I support 'alternative', which seems to better describe the state of the controversy. Ratagonia (talk) 02:27, 2 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Support for 'alternative' from me too. Snowded and Willyfreddy appear to be arguing the same point, but have been caught up in the details of the argument. Chunking back up, there will be those who view NLP as a cult, and others who view it as a applied psychological method. The aim is to provide a neutral page free from bias of the two stances. The word and stance of 'alternative' would support that as it is a much more neutral word than it's charged alternative 'controversial'. Sure it may be both alternative and controversial, they are not mutually exclusive. Therefore let's just use both - alternative for the field of NLP, controversial for the personal opinions about NLP - something which is inherently true and cannot be argued. So let's just use alternative or use both. Balupton (talk) 03:46, 25 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Controversial is a simple statement of fact (and referenced now as part of a subsequent discussion). I'm happy to use both if that helps.  However if anything "alternative" places it into a category that some adherents might not like.  -- Snowded  TALK  04:32, 25 December 2010 (UTC)

! I am another editor who is not in agreement with the term "controversial" in the opening paragraph. I am now officially opening a dispute to try to find resolution. It seems clear that a majority of editors are in favor of removing this term. Below is a copy of my discussions on the "talk" page, which should have been written here from the begining. User:Jeannmb 01:33 6 March 2011 (UTC)

NLP is highly controversial in its claims - see the criticism section It is also used as an exemplar of a pseudoscience on MIT courses which is another label that will go in there as soon as the full source is tracked down. Also to satisfy another editor I sourced "controversial" from an NLP site so its not seen as implying that its dubious -- Snowded  TALK  20:30, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

Also, a question given you are an SPA. Do you have any commercial interest in NLP? For example are you an NLP practitioner or trainer? That would not stop you from editing but it should be declared. -- Snowded TALK  21:00, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

Above question still stands, you have a potential conflict of interest here. -- Snowded TALK  22:47, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

I am not a trainer and have not any comercial interest in NLP. By the same token, have you actually been trained or have you practiced NLP in order to be able to argue definitions?


 * I have not practiced NLP and I would not waste money on being trained. Ditto Spiral Dynamics and a dozen other self-improvement pseudo/psychological practices that have emerged over the last few decades. I regard such practices for good reason as encouraging self-deception at best and manipulative (in the unethical sense of the word) at best.  That view is based on the fact that  I have talked extensively with trained practitioners and am aware of the literature.  Now those are my opinions and I would not impose them on the article, neither should you as a practitioner attempt the contrary.  Controversial is a factual statement and it is evidentially (from the sources) seen as positive in some NLP circles. Accordingly I don't see how it is NPOV to say that.  We could make much stronger negative statements supported by sources in the lede.   You might like to look at this and this.


 * It is clearly identified as a pseudo-science in reliable sources and in some cases exhibits cult like qualities. I have provided one reference from an NLP source that says it is controversial and the extensive criticism later in the article makes that controversy clear and none of those references are weak.  Remember the lede summarises the article and that lede is already compromised enough.  We might want to put pseudo-science in the opening sentence and/or the MIT point as those are relevant to a new reader.  Your point about it being a collection of tools not a science is not supported by NLP's scientific claims in the original book and latter work including training.  -- Snowded  TALK  22:36, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Thank you Snowded, you just proved my point. If we had an argument about F1 engines and you have never touched, repaired, optimized an F1 engine and had no training nor experience in mechanics, engineering or F1 driving what is the point? Yes, many people watch F1 on Sundays, even go to Silverstone and might have even talked to drivers or their teams. But this does not make them knowledgeable. The same goes for disciplines like Karate or Aikido. You can talk to and read as much as you want, but unless you get yourself on to the training mat and try practice what you are talking about, you are offering empty words. Please do go and edit articles were you have actual experience and knowledge. User:Jeannmb 22:00, 4 March 2011 (UTC)


 * You are unlikely to get any changes to this article - Snowded does not have a NPOV and will revert anything you do to make the article more neutral. I've tried to make changes in the past but, in the end I've got better things to do with my time than argue with a person who doesn't get what NPOV.  The mere fact that he describes getting trained in NLP as 'wasting money' shows, I think, that he does not approach this topic with an open mind.


 * I tried to open a discussion with him via his talk page but he deleted it and did not respond. Ho hum...


 * There is a lot of rubbish talked about NLP - and maybe the article would be better if it differentiated between NLP as a tool and NLP as a belief system (which is how some people talk about it) and the stupid '300 to a room' training sessions that some dreadful trainers run do nothing to help this. I understand what B&G were doing in the first place - they started it all off by making it clear that NLP wasn't necessarily true, just useful. The other big issue I have with it is that the three core parts of NLP - pillars, presuppositions and modelling (which are rather key to understanding what it's all about) don't get a mention...


 * (BTW - I'll declare an interest - I have learned about the subject and, at it's core, find it a useful tool. When I learned, the group included three psychologists and a GP, all of who continue to use NLP as I do, as a useful tool.  We don't 'believe in it' - the cult status problem - we just use bits of it when it's useful.)


 * Anyhow - if you want to make changes, find he is blocking you, I'll be happy to support you in any dispute.


 * Tattooed Librarian (talk) 18:56, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

Thank you Tattooed Librarian. My intention is certainly not to get into a dispute but it seems like Snowded does not want to compromise, as I did earlier. My suggestion was to leave the controversy for later down the article and we can both be right. I am stunned that there are editors who insist on putting forward their opinion on a subject they do not have knowledge of. I also asked for more clarification on the reference cited and did not get an answer. I am not trying to make NLP look perfect, it isn't, but the word "controversial" as used in the opening seems to reflect more of a personal opinion (as you said) than a fact. I vote for a as neutral as possible definition in the beginning. User:Jeannmb 02:08 6 March 2011 (UTC)

The opening paragraph - defining NLP
Hi all. I am new to editing this page. Today I edited the first introductory paragraph in order to give a more accurate and inclusive definition of NLP. Unfortunately my edit was undone by another user. I took great care to ensure that I was sensitive to the work that others have put in to this, and changed only two aspects of the opening paragraph as I have first-hand knowledge of NLP. My edit came about as a result of two main concerns over the existing definition, which I would like to present below:

1) Most would agree that the opening paragraph should seek to provide a simple and objective defintion of NLP. However, here, the very first sentence attempts to define NLP as "a controversial approach to psychotherapy and organizational change", which is simply not a fit definition. Whilst it is undeniable that there is much controversy over NLP, and I agree that this should be presented on the page, it is not part of the definition of NLP, and therefore does not have a place in the opening section of this page. There is a substantial section regarding controversy further down, which is suffice to present this fact. The term simply cannot be used to define NLP.

2) The definition itself: an "approach to psychotherapy and organizational change" is very limiting and does not fully define NLP accurately. This definition is only one aspect of NLP, and does not explain the full intentions and use of NLP. I have read through the history of this discussion page and it seems I am not the first to bring up this issue. Whilst the definition provided has come from the OED, I have to argue that it is not the best definition, in that it is limiting. In the discussion topic titled "Bogus OED definition", the user Action Potentila points out that "Outside of psychology, NLP is defined more generally as a communication approach". This is the aspect which I would like to make clear, as it plays a large part of how NLP is used in the modern day. There are many other more inclusive definitions for NLP which would better improve the introduction, and which I believe Richard Bandler more fully defines his and Grinder's model now. I am in fact in touch with Richard and could request a definition from him if this is prefered? Alternatively I have a defintiion coined by Owen Fitzpatrick who is a friend of Richard Bandler and who has co-written book with him. I would be happy to cite this.

Please understand that my intention here is to improve the definition, whilst preserving the hard work of those who have already dedicated time and effort in contirbuting to the page. I feel that my edit provided a more inclusive and objective definition of NLP, whilst keeping the relevent previous citations in tact. Below is the paragraph as I had edited it, and which I propose be used. Notice that it reshuffles the information that was already present and I have npt simply rewritten it. I think this provides a more accurate defintion:

" Neuro-Linguistic Programming (NLP) is "a model of interpersonal communication chiefly concerned with the relationship between successful patterns of behaviour and the subjective experiences (esp. patterns of thought) underlying them". NLP seeks to educate people in awareness of the way in which the human mind works, and how effective communication can be used to change patterns of mental and emotional behaviour. "

Please share your thought so that we may come to a mutually satisfactory definition for the opening paragraph.

Yours faithfully. Sugar1080 (talk) 16:05, 24 December 2010 (UTC)


 * The lede summarises the article, and given that the article contains material on its controversial nature it is proper to reference that. The last think you should do is to get a definition from Brandler, WIkipedia works from 3rd party sources and the OED is one of those.  You have also used NLP web sites as sources.  These are not reliable sources in wikipedia terms, especially when they are commercial sites.  Overall I would agree that these days NLP is more a management consultancy tool and the training aims at that.  However that is an opinion we sure its not a validated fact.  -- Snowded  TALK  21:50, 24 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Hello again.


 * Ok I hear some of your points. Yes validation is important, so let's keep the OED definition. The semantics due to the structure of the paragraph is misleading - not intentially I'm sure - but needs to be addressed. The OED states that NLP is "a model of interpersonal communication chiefly concerned with the relationship between successful patterns of behaviour and the subjective experiences (esp. patterns of thought) underlying them" and "a system of alternative therapy based on this which seeks to educate people in self-awareness and effective communication, and to change their patterns of mental and emotional behaviour". I insist that we introduce the article EXACTLY like this then. This is not the same as opening the page by falsely stating that it is "an approach to psychotherapy and organizational change" - this is not a fact, and if it is, where's the citation - who says? Wuite simply, this is NOT a correct definition of NLP. Perhaps this is the main issue. I sought to correct this by restructuring the sentence last time, but it was undone.


 * Secondly, regarding the use of the term "controversial", whilst I still disagree about it's position in the first paragraph ,how about we meet half way stve. We can keep the word "controversial" in there, but remove it as a suggestion for the definition. Taking all the above into consideration, this would mean the lead paragraph is presented like so:


 * Neuro-Linguistic Programming (NLP) is "a model of interpersonal communication chiefly concerned with the relationship between successful patterns of behaviour and the subjective experiences (esp. patterns of thought) underlying them" and "a system of alternative therapy based on this which seeks to educate people in self-awareness and effective communication, and to change their patterns of mental and emotional behaviour"(OED). Whilst NLP has a number of applications, specifically as an approach to psychotherapy there is a great deal of controversy.


 * How about this? At least this way, we present the facts (OED definition) first and foremost, followed only after with the part about it's controversial use in psychotherapy. I am sure that you can see that the definition should come first. 87.115.78.239 (talk) 12:31, 26 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Firstly please sign in when you edit, at the moment you are editing under two different names which is not acceptable. You might also want to note that no editor can "insist" on anything here.  You also need to read WP:BRD, if something is contested you discuss it on the talk page and reach agreement before you make that change to the article.


 * On the substantial point I am happy to go to the full OED defintion and in general I agree with you that its generally a management consultancy technique these days rather than psychotherapy but we need more citation support for this as well as statements about support. You haven't provided a reference for that claim,  I will revert it if the fact tag is not satisfied.  As to controversial, its sourced and its true.  I think its easier in the first sentence but I am open to it being second or third, but then it will need to be expanded to say that it is controversial (summarising that section by reference to its lack of scientific assessment and possibly the accusation that it is a cult.).  As I say I think a single word at the start is easiest but I am open to ideas.  -- Snowded  TALK  14:45, 26 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Hi Snowded and thanks for your comments, also for advising me on the proper use of wikipedia.


 * Firstly, you say that you agree with me about it being "a management consultancy technique", but I haven't said this at any point. Where did this come from? Sorry if it appeared that I suggested this, I don't believe this should be in the paragraph, particularly since, as you say, it cannot be cited. Secondly, the page currently opens with the claim that NLP is an "approach to psychotherapy and organizational change" - where does this so-called fact come from? Initially I confused it to be from the OED (hence what prompted me to challenge it), but now realise it's not. So who's definition is it? Either way I suggest that we stick to the OED definition as it's clearer and more inclusive.


 * So given all this, how about we use the opening presented below, followed immediately by whatever you would like to add about the controversy aspects. What's most important to me, is that the definition is provided first without bias.


 * "Neuro-Linguistic Programming (NLP) is "a model of interpersonal communication chiefly concerned with the relationship between successful patterns of behaviour and the subjective experiences (esp. patterns of thought) underlying them" and "a system of alternative therapy based on this which seeks to educate people in self-awareness and effective communication, and to change their patterns of mental and emotional behaviour"(OED)". (Then Snowded, please add the points about its controversy) Sugar1080 (talk) 20:10, 27 December 2010 (UTC)


 * As I've said before, a significant number of articles ( maybe even a majority ) are on people and subjects that at least some people would consider "controversial". Q: Is NLP controversial?  A: Many people would say so.  Q: Is this controversy so significant that it requires mentioning in the first sentence about it in this article?  A: I greatly doubt it.  It is entirely appropriate to have criticism of NLP in the article but the introduction should principally describe what NLP claims to be rather than what some people think about it.  This should come later.  To justify including "controversial" in the introduction on the basis of "summarising" the article seems both disengenuous and manipulative. Afterwriting (talk) 12:13, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * It is of course open you to doubt that it is appropriate or not for "controversial" to be used. I think the evidence of the main body of the article and the references clearly establish that it is.  That is a legitimate disagreement.  However to accuse editors who disagree with you of being manipulate and disingenuous is a clear failure to assume good faith.  Its not the first time, or the only article where you have failed to focus on content issues but have chosen to comment on other editors.  -- Snowded  TALK  18:41, 11 January 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't think you can have controversial there in the first sentence. Put that in the paragraph where the criticism is introduced. Remember wikipedia needs to be written from a neutral point of view. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 02:29, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
 * There is nothing inherently good or bad about the word controversial. Indeed I would be upset if my own work were not so described.  It is an accurate word given the evidence of the article, and as I keep repeating the lede summarises the article. There are also far too many SPAs making this point -- Snowded  TALK  12:14, 7 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm not against using the word in the lead section, just its placement in the first sentence before even defining NLP. I think that the idea that NLP is controversial is a point of view and should not preceed the definition of NLP. Perhaps we can come up with a one sentence summary of the controversies for the opening paragraph or for somewhere in the lead section. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 18:16, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

section on techniques?
I think there needs to be a section describing the typical interventions and techniques used in NLP, e.g. rapport, reframing, submodalities, goal-setting, timelines, anchoring, future pacing, etc. Just keep to the basic techniques based on reliable sources. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 01:26, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

less jargon?
Is there any way to reduce the jargon and gobbledegook on this page? I'm finding it difficult to get a good grasp of what NLP entails. Or, barring that, could an example be given to help illustrate what this is all about? Maybe I'm not smart enough, but I really find this page hard to understand. Thanks. 119.237.147.66 (talk) 20:05, 28 March 2011 (UTC)

Pseudoscience
Interestingly someone sent me a copy of this slide set which is from a course at MIT in which NLP is used as an exemplar of a pseudoscience. What do people think of the source? -- Snowded TALK  10:27, 19 January 2011 (UTC)


 * The source itself will probably need a specific author. I will check on it. I have seen the engram and submodalities information somewhere else and it is clarifying.  I will look for that author first, I think it was a Dutch professor of psycholinguistics. That slide might be useful in the criticism section. Neuro-linguistic programming is used in universities as an example of pseudo-science in courses on that matter (Lilienfeld, S. O., Lohr, M., & Morier, D. (2001). The teaching of courses in the science and pseudoscience of psychology. Teaching of Psychology, 28, 182-191, Lum, C 2001. Scientific Thinking in Speech and Language Therapy. LAWRENCE ERLBAUM ASSOCIATES, PUBLISHERS Mahwah, New Jersey London)  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:49, 25 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I pinged back a request for author from the person who sent it to me but have not heard back yet so if you can find it that makes it more solid as a reference -- Snowded TALK  05:00, 25 January 2011 (UTC)


 * A slide prepared for a course even at MIT is not a reliable source. No peer review. Perhaps it is sourced to something that looks like an RS, but a slide for a course does not qualify. Ratagonia (talk) 06:23, 6 March 2011 (UTC)


 * It would be a reliable source to say that the MIT course used it as an example, but not to say that NLP is a pseudo-science. That would need more and there are some candidates here and  here -- Snowded  TALK  07:16, 6 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I think those MIT lecture slides are fake. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 01:29, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I suspect you may want them to be. However the number of pseudo-science references in the literature is high so it probably needs to be a category and if we really want to revisit the lede be there as well.  -- Snowded  TALK  23:34, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I actually don't know if they are real or not. Its an issue of verifiability. I'm a good skeptic. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 01:21, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't think we can label it as pseudoscience just because it's on the fringe. This doesn't seem as open and shut as, say, homeopathy or astrology. I don't agree with the category being listed at the bottom of the page. 71.12.183.234 (talk) 04:49, 25 April 2011 (UTC)
 * The current thread on this is at the bottom of the page. I've given you one direct quote and several other references from reliable sources that say it is a pseudo science and that counts over your opinion.  Otherwise please note that the category was in place before you deleted it so WP:BRD applies. -- Snowded  TALK  06:53, 25 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Perhaps it should be in the fringe category rather then pseudoscience category. Some skeptics allege that it is pseudoscience but there is no consensus. It is probably best described as questionable per the WP:FRINGE/PS guideline. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 19:16, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

Applications section
Discussion seems to have made a move to the applications issues. Material suggestions on the application section can be written here. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:09, 27 May 2011 (UTC)

The applications section is small and the reader is not given description or explanation of methods or broader application. Any argument existing in literature that NLP is not psychotherapy might be mentioned in this section. Suggestions welcome. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:23, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You may be starting from a misunderstanding. The modality of psychotherapy informed by insights from NLP is formally known as Neuro Linguistic Psychotherapy (NLPt).  Reliable sources are not always scrupulous about the distinction, which may confuse you.  AJRG (talk) 09:16, 2 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Sourced information would help to clarify differences between AndyzB and your account.  Also, there is a book on coaching mentioned in this section. Any books that represent the therapy side of NLP may make clear to the reader the applications. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 04:39, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I can't speak for AndyzB... Bridoux and Weaver (2000) is already in the list of references and there are also some books by Lisa Wake. AJRG (talk) 08:10, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Here is an example of NLP taught at vocational college attached to the top university in Australia. Is this common in other parts of the world? --118.127.29.46 (talk) 05:04, 4 June 2011 (UTC)

What are the specific differences you referred to, Lam? On the subject of "NLP" and psychotherapy AJRG makes a very valid point. The existence of the NLPtCA organization is yet more evidence that whilst there are a handful of therapeutic techniques within the FoNLP, neither NLP (a specific MODELLING TECHNIQUE) nor the wider FoNLP are forms of psychotherapy. To say otherwise is like arguing that because a car has rubber tires the whole car must be made of rubber. To be specific, NLPt - Neurolinguistic Psychotherapy (notice NO hyphen, etc.) - is recognised by the UKCP in Britain, and through the UKCP by the EAP. And why? If NLP or the FoNLP were forms of psychotherapy why wouldn't the UKCP have recognised them as such? The NLPtCA (Neurolinguistic Psychotherapy and Counselling Association) had to be set up because neither NLP nor the FoNLP qualified - as determined by professionals! Likewise some members of the NLPt - such as Lisa wake and Pam Gawler-Wright - are now claiming that they are putting the missing neurological dimension into "NLP" - because NLP and the FoNLP AREN'T SCIENTIFIC.

Food for thought, isn't it?

AndyzB (talk) 17:37, 5 June 2011 (UTC)


 * It is, and those are useful comments. From what I can see some aspects of NLP continue as a part of what might generally be classed as "talking therapies' of which there are a range and there are linked issues (in the UK) of evidence around things like CBT.  However NLP is better known in the self help/management consultancy/ project management etc. etc. areas where a lot of the training takes place.   Given a long weekend in Hay I did an unscientific look through several books on areas such as NLP and Project Management and NLP and dieting.  The latter was pretty much hockum, the former contained a lot of material that you could equally well find in other books on the subject without the need for NLP, some techniques which were uniquely NLP and which were reported as working.  The problem with the former was that it dressed up that material in a pseudo-scientific overlay with various claims for objectivity etc. etc.   The fact that there are short and other courses on NLP in vocational courses, listed along with ones on how to use Excel is probably not noteworthy and the presence of such courses is not an academic validation per se.
 * The evolution of NLP, the way it is applied does need elaboration. In psychotherapy we really need a third party account of the various differences between the bodies if one exists.  We can of course make reference to those bodies without a third party source without an commentary if its appropriate.   -- Snowded  TALK  04:47, 6 June 2011 (UTC)


 * I suggest instead of main title of psychotherapy, there could be list of smaller sections or paragraphs of; Therapy (include dieting and broader), psychotherapy, education, human resources, communication etc. I will look through papers on the applications. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 06:17, 7 June 2011 (UTC)

IP 122.../118....'s Edits
Hello IP 122.../118...   .  You made a series of major controversial edits mixed in with small changes. Please discuss and provide sourcing for your proposed changes here, starting with your controversial changes in this paragraph below Lam Kin Keung (talk) 04:32, 6 June 2011 (UTC):

Despite its popularity,[13] NLP has been largely ignored by conventional social science in part due to a lack of professional credibility[13] and insufficient empirical evidence to substantiate its effectiveness.[14] It is difficult to determine the exact impact NLP has had; NLP appears to have minimal impact on academic psychology or mainstream psychotherapy and counselling.[14] At the same time, NLP has been adopted by some private psychotherapists, including hypnotherapists, who undertake training in NLP and apply it to their practice. NLP has gained popularity within management training, life coaching,[15] and the self-help industry.[16]


 * My recent edits were aimed to quell some of your more extreme bias. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 11:12, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Please stop making accusations against other users (you still haven't replied on one of the most stupid on your talk page) and focus on proposals to improve the content. At the moment you seem to be attempting a slow edit war  -- Snowded  TALK  11:17, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You told me to stop making personal accusations then you followed with your own accusations! But I agree that we should focus on improving the article content and not on personalities. That's why I am not going to use a username. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 11:53, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I think I was entitled to ask you to apologise for a false claim that I and another editor had been blocked, but I'm happy to let that go. Current suggestions that another editor is showing extreme bias is more problematic, especially as they have been careful to source their material.    That said, your last sentence raised an interesting question - have you previously edited n this subject under another ID?  -- Snowded  TALK  12:00, 7 June 2011 (UTC)


 * We've had problems with "HeadleyDown" on this page for several years. Just keep an eye out for his or her behavior and report to admin. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 13:38, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Five years ago, and I note you have neatly sidestepped answering my question. Again, have you previously edited in this subject under another ID? -- Snowded  TALK  04:58, 8 June 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm just keeping an eye on the article from time to time. I'm not interested in editing content, I'm just editing for NPOV. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 15:16, 8 June 2011 (UTC)


 * I'll take that as a I don't want to answer the question response. Editing for NPOV is editing for content and you are subject to the same rules as everyone else - discuss changes on the talk page if they are disputed.  -- Snowded  TALK  20:55, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

AJRG's edit: Academic Criticism
AJRG. Please discuss your controversial edit of "Academic Criticism" here below, providing sources where they are needed. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 06:09, 7 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Its a strange interpretation of WP:OR. As far as I can see AJRG does not dispute that the criticism is from a scientific source, but argues that pseudo-science is not a scientific term (without a contradictory reference) and therefore the title is invalid.  It seems to be that if scientific sources use a word critically then it is clearly scientific criticism.   I was debating overnight if it should go to the OR notice board, or to ANI as its starting to look like a delaying tactic and/or a diminution one. -- Snowded  TALK  06:21, 7 June 2011 (UTC)


 * By the way I think the tag is inappropriate as it implies the section is POV which it isn't. I suggest putting Academic Criticism back while we resolve this.  -- Snowded  TALK  06:42, 7 June 2011 (UTC)


 * I agree. The criticisms of pseudo-science and discredit come from scientific points of view. The original justification from AJRG  is just opinion. Imposing it into article without discussion is the main activity in this case. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 06:45, 7 June 2011 (UTC)


 * I think you would more accurately describe that point of view as scientistic, not scientific. All the sources you used were from positivist psychologists. They share the view that ALL psychotherapy needs to be evidence based and/or empirically validated. They believe that NLP is a form of psychotherapy so it too should be empirically validated. Not all clinicians in the field share this view. If the experimental psychologists had their way we'd all be doing behaviour therapy for just about everything. It just does not work that way. Psychologists and psychotherapists are not all scientistic. I don't like the subheading "Academic criticism" or "Scientific criticism". You wrote the paragraph, what was your aim when you wrote it? What were you attempting to achieve? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 11:34, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
 * In part its the claims of NLP in respect of natural science that make it more vulnerable to criticism on empirical grounds that others. Other talking therapies have less of a problem as they are less ambitious in their claims.  Have you got a reference on you scientistic/scientific point above?  -- Snowded  TALK  11:44, 7 June 2011 (UTC)

Academic criticism was Snowded's term, which I'm not wild about but is nonetheless verifiable. I'm challenging the use of Scientific criticism as a description for a claim of pseudo-science, because I haven't found any reliable sources to support it (WP:V). AJRG (talk) 21:58, 7 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Scientific criticism is an accurate description. This is reasonable on Wikipedia articles.  For example, Creation Science, Scientific Criticism section involves issue of pseudoscience .  Trying to force your title into the article is unconstructive. Please discuss controversial edits. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 04:05, 8 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Your original edit AJRG was to use a fairly dismissive title. For me it is very clear that criticism by the scientific community is properly headed "Scientific Criticism" and this is further confirmed by the example of creation science given above.  I further note that neither you or the IP have been able or willing to provide any contradictory citations.  Indeed when I last challenged you on this your produced yet another critical article and argued that because scientists criticised NLP then it must be a science.  Ironically you now demand a citation to say that pseudo-science is term used in scientific criticism.    -- Snowded  TALK  04:57, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

You can't use Wikipedia as a source, so the Creation Science article is irrelevant. I'm challenging your use of the term, so you need to provide a reliable source, per WP:V. AJRG (talk) 21:27, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
 * No one is using it as a source, its being used as an example and/or precedent.  The form suggested here is in common use on Wikipedia.  You don't deny that the sources used are scientific, so if scientific sources describe something as a pseudo-science then that is scientific criticism.  As far as I know there is no dictionary of acceptable language to be used by scientists in criticising things, or may be you know of such an authority and can cite it?  -- Snowded  TALK  21:39, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
 * All the sources cited in that section are psychologists. Perhaps you can use psychologists rather than scientists as its more specific. I can think of various subtitles such as "Argument that the title is misleading", etc. Another way would be to just have a section where the title is discussed with origins and definition and also show the criticism from some of the psychologists who dispute it. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 23:59, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
 * And in the case of creationism most of the critics are evolutionary biologists. -- Snowded  TALK  04:05, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You can't claim precedent. You have to show a reliable source. AJRG (talk) 19:52, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You're the one making the claim that language used by scientists in criticising NLP has to be sourced as scientific.  You might have some credibility in this if you went over to the creationist article and made the same point.  -- Snowded  TALK  05:45, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You keep trying to turn policy upside down. If you want to give a label to something, you have to show a reliable source.  WP:V, WP:NOR and WP:NPOV all apply.  AJRG (talk) 09:09, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
 * If we have a series of reliable scientific sources criticising NLP as a pseudo-science then the correct title for that section is scientific criticism. There is nothing in any of the policies you trot out which places demands for secondary verification of the nature of their language - if there is point it out.   You may not like the fact that the sources say what they say, but these increasingly obvious attempts to spin out properly identifying the criticism are simply disruptive and there are plenty of policies that deal with that.  As I say, prove that you really think this by challenging the use at Creation Science.  If you won't do that then your motivation here is pretty obvious.  -- Snowded  TALK  11:10, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
 * WP:V "applies to all material in the mainspace—articles, lists, sections of articles, and captions—without exception"
 * WP:NOR "To demonstrate that you are not adding OR, you must be able to cite reliable, published sources that are both directly related to the topic of the article, and directly support the material as presented."
 * WP:NPOV "In some cases, the choice of name used for something can give an appearance of bias." "Pay attention to headers, footnotes, or other formatting elements that might unduly favor one point of view"  AJRG (talk) 16:49, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Know all of that, and its far from clear if you really understand, or simply don't want to understand that properly referenced material from scientists can be headed "Scientific Criticism" without the need for that language to be independently proven to be "scientific". As I say I'll believe you are serious if you go and try and make the change on Creationism.  -- Snowded  TALK  16:56, 11 June 2011 (UTC)

Despite repeated requests, you haven't provided a source. Nor have you made any coherent argument from policy which might excuse that omission. AJRG (talk) 17:07, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I have read through the policies carefully and there is nothing in them that supports your contention that the language used by scientists has to be independently validated as being scientific. Pseudo-science is a term used in a series of articles by scientists in the relevant field.  Those articles have been validated per WP:V.  We are using the language of those articles so we do not fail WP:NOR and a body of articles by scientists all of which are critical have been presented, not a single source.  Further you have not provided any scientific sources that counter the position, instead you have made reference to material which show NLP is used in practice  in some health bodies, from that you infer (now that is original research) that the cited material is unrepresentative.  In one really crazy example you suggested that because scientists were taking NLP seriously by studying it that it was a science - again clear OR.
 * Further you have been shown a precedent in which similar material is headed scientific criticism, and that on an article with a much larger number of editors involved and under Arbcom scrutiny. This is a clear a case of prevarication as I have seen in a long time.  You have not shown how policy requires us to validate the actual language used by scientists as "scientific" and have instead resorted to simply quoting the policy without argument.   If you can't show how policy supports you here then I am going to revert the title and if you change it again take it to ANI as a behavioral issue and/or raise an RfC  -- Snowded  TALK  04:41, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You're arguing that because a scientist writes something, it must be scientific? And because it's critical it must be criticism?  And that's your defence of "scientific criticism"?  Pure OR.  Get a source...  AJRG (talk) 11:07, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You know perfectly well that I am not saying that. We have a series of referenced articles from scientists which are critical of NLP, therefore the title of that section is scientific criticism.  The language that scientists choose to use in that criticism is their own affair and not subject to separate validation.  We are using their own language without qualification therefore it is clearly not OR.  Please point to the section of the OR policy which supports your position.-- Snowded  TALK  11:13, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Your reply proves my point. AJRG (talk) 11:39, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Please point to the section of WP:NOR on which you rely -- Snowded TALK  11:46, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
 * The term "original research" (OR) is used on Wikipedia to refer to material—such as facts, allegations, ideas, and stories—for which no reliable published source exists.[1] That includes any analysis or synthesis of published material that serves to advance a position not advanced by the sources. AJRG (talk) 19:11, 13 June 2011 (UTC)


 * AJRG. I feel silly explaining the obvious and I hope I don't look to patronize, but “Scientific criticism” already has a section full of reliable sources that are supporting it. The criticisms come from a set of scientific viewpoints:


 * Roderique-Davies criticizes NLP, he states “Firstly, our thinking patterns should be defined as ‘cognition’ not ‘neuro’. Use of the latter word is effectively fraudulent since NLP offers no explanation at a neuronal level and it could be argued that its use fallaciously feeds into the notion of scientific credibility.” This quote of Roderique-Davies can be added to the article. He also says: “The links with scientific credibility persist in NLP books”


 * “NLP is the art and science of excellence” (O’Connor and Seymour, 1994, cited in Heap, 2008). Yet despite this, and despite its very name suggesting strong links with accepted science, NLP has no credible basis in neuroscience and has been largely disowned by the very academic fields within which it claims to lie, namely psychology and linguistics.


 * Beyerstein also criticizes from a scientific viewpoint: "though it claims neuroscience in its pedigree, NLP's outmoded view of the relationship between cognitive style and brain function ultimately boils down to crude analogies”


 * Devilly’s paper is titled: "Power Therapies and Possible Threats to the Science of Psychology and Psychiatry” It is clearly from a scientific viewpoint.


 * The Norcross et al (2006) research is from the viewpoint of EBP, or evidence based practice. They also write:  “The consensus emerging on this Delphi poll on potentially discredited treatments and tests leaves us feeling encouraged. Multiple books, several Web sites (e.g., Quackwatch, Skeptic’s Dictionary), and a journal (The Scientific Review of Mental Health Practice) have dedicated themselves to publicizing psychological myths and discredited procedures. Psychological science tends to be self-correcting in that its foundation lies in empirical evidence (more than most professions, anyway). As a field, we have made progress in differentiating science from pseudoscience in the practice of psychology.” Lam Kin Keung (talk) 01:57, 13 June 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't think he is arguing against the various sources of the criticism LKK, instead he is focused on (to my mind absurd) argument that the word "pseudo-science" is not a scientific term (unless we find a reference which says it is) and therefore if the section contains that language it cannot be headed "Scientific Criticism". Its a pretty blatant attempt at amelioration, clutching at last straws etc. etc. -- Snowded  TALK  04:42, 13 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Yes, in either way it does appear absurd and desperate. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:39, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Policy isn't absurd or desperate. It's there for a reason.  AJRG (talk) 19:11, 13 June 2011 (UTC)


 * AJRG. Please take time to read carefully WP policy pages and other editor's comments on this talkpage. Few editors will be willing to give tiresome elementary tutorials and explanations if you don't contribute some effort. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:24, 14 June 2011 (UTC)

Question
Regardless of what people think is an appropriate title for the section, does any other editor support AJRG's assertion that its OR? -- Snowded TALK  11:18, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I'll leave this question up for another 24 hours, but if there is no support then I will take action -- Snowded TALK  05:34, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Silence doesn't mean consensus. I challenged you to provide a reliable source and I'm still waiting.  AJRG (talk) 21:41, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
 * It means you are in a minority of one, so if you think other editors are wrong then you will need to appeal it -- Snowded TALK  21:43, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You haven't produced a single source to back any of your claims in this whole discussion. And Lam Kin Keung, who does take the trouble to look for sources, hasn't found one to support you here.  AJRG (talk) 22:20, 15 June 2011 (UTC)


 * No support. The objection is nonsense. Whether it contains the term pseudoscience or no,  the quotes given above and the sources in the section are full of the scientific criticism from scientific perspectives and more than sufficient for title: Scientific criticism. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:26, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

Professionally discredited therapies
Professional discredit is currently being muddled up with the concept of pseudo-science. This should be avoided.

Pseudo-science is a concept in philosophy discussed, for example by Karl Popper (see, for example, the quotation by Devilly) and refers to globally agreed norms of scientific endeavour.

Professional discredit relates to the behaviour of individual professionals and is necessarily local, because professional standards vary between jurisdictions. This is particularly important because attitudes to psychological treatments differ markedly between Europe and the United States. For example, (Cummings, N. A. & O‟Donohue, W. T. 2008 Eleven blunders that cripple psychotherapy in America. New York: Routledge) lists Psychoanalysis among "Psychotherapies That Are Unsupported, Probably Ineffective, And/Or Potentially Harmful".

For the current American view of professional discredit we have a reliable source in Thomason T.C. 2010 Psychological Treatments to Avoid, The Alabama Counseling Association Journal, Volume 36, Number 1. AJRG (talk) 11:50, 11 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Your source says that NLP is a discredited, or probably discredited approach it doesn't say that the concept of professional discredit relates to the behaviour of individuals or that is is necessary local. Do you have a source for that statement?  -- Snowded  TALK  12:10, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Apparently you didn't bother to read the source - NLP is listed as "Possibly discredited".
 * In response to your question, see "An Ethical Judgement", British Medical Journal, Dec 9, 1876, p756.
 * Also "Jung explicitly incorporated the `personal factor' into his therapeutic procedure. It was this approach that, in the case of Sabina Speilrein, may have brought him some professional discredit." (Field, N. Healing, Exorcism and Object Relations Theory, British Journal of Psychotherapy, Volume 6, Issue 3, pages 274–284, March 1990)  AJRG (talk) 16:25, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I must admit I'm starting to worry about you, despite our various disagreements you normally use sources properly and understand policy. However in the case of this article some of your comments and use of sources are, to put it frankly bizarre.  I can't see any way in which your Jung quote supports your statement.  You can't go from a suggestion that Jung may have been professional discredited to say that all professional discredit is personal.   Your earlier citation lists various sources many of which include NLP in their lists, one of those (Norcross, J. C., Koocher, G. & Garofalo) is qualified as "probably" but only one.  The others simply list it.  Neither by the way can you claim that the Alabama Journal of Counseling is the definitive authority on this subject.  As it happens it provides further supporting material so its not a major issue.  -- Snowded  TALK  16:40, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Go and read the source again. It says "possibly discredited", not "probably".
 * For a more recent comment on professional discredit see here. AJRG (talk) 17:08, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You really are missing the point. Your Alabama source references a body of articles several of which list NLP as discredited, one of which has a list split into harmful/possibly discredited.  Given that its one of several its not a source that supports your statement.  You have now added in another reference that shows that an individual can be professionally discredited.  This is not disputed, people AND approaches can be professional discredited, the fact that you can find some examples of the first does not invalidate the second.  I think you are (as in the past) simply running google searches on key words to try and find things to support your perspective, without much critical reading or logic.  -- Snowded  TALK  17:27, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You haven't provided a single source to support the notion that an approach can be professionally discredited (as distinct from scientifically refuted) separately from the professionals involved. Do you have one?  AJRG (talk) 11:41, 12 June 2011 (UTC)


 * AJRG. Do you have a source that is explaining that Witkowski is muddling pseudoscience with discredit?


 * It is silly to say professions have jurisdictions in how you are saying it. In the case of clinical psychology and claims to efficacy, the reference point is scientific consensus in the psychology, linguistics and neuroscience research. Professional discredit is a possible alternative sub-title under the more major title of pseudoscience with Witkowski's explanation as a connecting point. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:49, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Witkowski doesn't muddle pseudoscience with discredit - he discusses them separately. Are you really seriously suggesting that professional standards don't vary with jurisdiction?  The section should be titled Pseudo-science claims, as I've mentioned before.  Concerns over professional discredit (use of experimental, harmful or ineffective techniques) belong in the Practitioner standards section.  AJRG (talk) 11:41, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
 * This is not an issue of breaking professional standards within one country but one of whether a method or approach is professionally discredited. Also if you check policy you will find that we don't use "claims" when we are using a reliable source. -- Snowded TALK  11:45, 12 June 2011 (UTC)


 * AJRG. A title of “Pseudo-science claims” would marginalize the scientific viewpoints.  Claims is a word to avoid especially on fringe controversial subject articles.


 * Witkowski does not separate pseudo-science issues from issue of discredit. He talks of pseudo-science of NLP and then extends it with research on discredit.  Norcross et al (2006), under the main issue of evidence based practice, extend the explicit issues of unvalidated/pseudoscientific/quack therapies by referring to discredit.  Pseudo-science is a reasonable alternative title for the scientific criticism section, including the extended issue of discredit. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 01:48, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
 * See WP:SYN. I'd be comfortable with Pseudo-science accusations if you prefer.  The point is that this is a significant minority view, not an academic consensus.  AJRG (talk) 19:34, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Have you yet found an example of a reliable source which says it is not a pseudo-science?  If per your claim, it is a minority view then you should be able to find some sources to represent the majority perspective?  -- Snowded  TALK  21:19, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
 * It is not a black and white issue. Characterizing something as pseudo-science is merely opinion. There is no objective test for this. There is current research into NLP. If it was pseudoscience, the research would have stopped. In fact the majority of recent studies were somewhat supportive of NLP and there are only a few that pseudo-skeptics. Is there an up-to-date literature review into NLP? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 12:23, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
 * AJRG. Please try to understand it is important to avoid marginalizing significant viewpoints on Wikipedia. Most of your suggestions here seem to have that result WP:ALLEGED Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:30, 14 June 2011 (UTC)

Does Elich call NLP pseudoscience? Does Einspruch? Does Sharpley? Does Heap? Does Stephen Palmer (Introduction to counselling and psychotherapy: the essential guide)? On Google Scholar, the query "neurolinguistic programming" +pseudoscience returns only 55 results whereas the query "neurolinguistic programming" -pseudoscience returns 2,290. AJRG (talk) 22:08, 14 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Sharpley’s 1987 title is "Research Findings on Neuro-linguistic Programming: Non supportive Data or an Untestable Theory. Devilly and others have commented on this and consider NLP to be pseudoscientific in concept. Sorry AJRG. I count 81 returns on neurolinguistic programming NLP and pseudoscience. Even 55 is large especially with peer reviewed journals included. But counting every source as policy would lead to a lot of unbalanced articles on Wikipedia.  It’s the reliability and weight of the sources that counts here. Please try to understand this.  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:17, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Read WP:SYN. You're not allowed to say "Sharpley means pseudo-science" when he doesn't say that.  And learn how to use Google Scholar properly - only half the records returned by your query actually include the term "pseudoscience".  If you think the 55 records that mention pseudoscience represent a large number of sources, surely the 2,290 records that don't mention pseudoscience represent a much larger number?  AJRG (talk) 21:58, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Have you got a source which says it is not a pseudo-science? -- Snowded  TALK  22:02, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't need one, because I'm not disputing that a few reliable sources make that claim. I'm saying that most reliable sources don't, as is indicated by the Google Scholar comparison above.  AJRG (talk) 22:27, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Where did you perform that search Lam Kin Keung? How do you know that it is a large result? Where there any high impact journals in that result? Devilly does not claim that "NLP is a pseudoscience in concept" as Lam Kin Keung claims. The only evidence of a pseudoscientific characteristic that Devilly presents is that VK/D or the rewind technique from NLP has not been empirically tested yet. No other evidence is presented. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 12:23, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You're commenting on the content of a reliable source which of course is fine, but its not the way wikipedia works. You need to find those comments in a reliable source -- Snowded  TALK  13:43, 15 June 2011 (UTC)

Toward NPOV
I have added a NPOV tag to the article because this article has been overtaken by several editors with an agenda to disparage or debunk the subject. We need some impartial editors to assist in introduce some balance. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 16:55, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You can't tag something because you don't like it, not can you make personal attacks on other editors who throughout this exercise have used references. If you can't come up with sourced material to establish its NPOV then you can't tag it, its that simple.  If you think (and can justify) your accusations then take it to ANI but then beware australian throwing instruments -- Snowded  TALK  18:06, 19 June 2011 (UTC)


 * It has nothing to do with whether someone likes it or not. If an edit does not not think that the article adheres to NPOV then he or she can tag it until the issues are addressed. Just removing the tag without addressing the issues does nothing. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 23:34, 19 June 2011 (UTC)


 * You have to list the issues and provide some supporting evidence.  No one can address the issue as stated above which is just a personal attack on other editors.   Tagging an article as NPOV without explaining why (in terms of specific content examples) is considered disruptive behaviour -- Snowded  TALK  05:10, 20 June 2011 (UTC)


 * One of the main problems is the presentation of opinions as if they were scientific fact. We need to make sure that statements attributed to sources do not go beyond the evidence. I tagged some specific examples of this. I'll look at it again soon and make some more specific suggestions. What sources do you suggest a good impartial overview of the subject? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 07:58, 20 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Please propose changes here first. Otherwise I think the problem is that there are no "impartial" overviews of the subject, if by impartial you mean views that balance scientific criticism against practitioner/founder claims.   The body of scientific/professional material which is evaluative in nature is negative and that is common on a lot of things that are labeled pseudo-science.  There is some material from the University of Surrey which is supportive (with qualifications namely a dependent on reported effect) but that is already in the body of the text.  There is then the original material from the authors and reports of its "popularity".   Overall I think the best thing the article can hope to do is accurately report on what NLP is and its reported impact, properly report scientific criticism and leave judgement to the reader -- Snowded  TALK  08:06, 20 June 2011 (UTC)

How would we cover NLP and the "art of seduction"? e.g. The Game (see pages 38, 47, 48, 58, 74, 124, 125, 142, 145, 220, 264, 291, 334, 437, 444, 446). Strauss is a New York times journalist who documented the seduction community. Not surprisingly this is ignored by the academic sources but appears in other (reliable?) sources such as television talk shows, newspapers and magazines. The rights for "The Game" were purchased by Spyglass, Garrett, Diane (August 22, 2007). "Spyglass nabs 'The Game' rights". Variety.

--122.108.140.210 (talk) 23:49, 20 June 2011 (UTC)


 * It could be represented similar to the coaching books in the application section. If there are more than one with NLP in the title it is better. For example, e.g.1. The Enneagram and NLP: A Journey of Evolution: Linden 1994, e.g.2 Personality Selling : Using NLP and the Enneagram to Understand People and How They Are Influenced (Valentino and Linden 1999. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:57, 21 June 2011 (UTC)


 * We don't currently have an comprehensive applications section. I suppose the application of NLP in the art of seduction has some cross-over with coaching. Most of this is already covered in the seduction community article and other subarticles. We might just have a brief section on this focusing on the application of NLP and link to the sub-pages. I'm not sure if the mass media would be considered reliable source for this information given it really has not been discussed by the academics in their ivory towers. I don't think the article would be complete without outlining the dark side of NLP. --122.108.140.210 (talk)  —Preceding undated comment added 05:40, 21 June 2011 (UTC).


 * I have not seen anything in the sources about dark or light sides of NLP. Could you quote a source? Lam Kin Keung (talk) 06:07, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
 * The art of seduction would be considered dark side of course. It is hugely popular. Just look at the number of torrents that are downloaded. The popularity of NLP seduction dwarfs psychotherapy or any other application. There are even cable television programs dedicated to this. Mystery (pickup artist), now has a cable tv program in the US: "VH1 show teaches men how to meet women". The Orange County Register. August 1, 2007. Retrieved August 4, 2007. I found one academic source: masters thesis --122.108.140.210 (talk) 01:36, 22 June 2011 (UTC)


 * There is still not a mention of dark sides in the master thesis.Lam Kin Keung (talk) 04:18, 23 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Such purposeful (and practically farcical) obtuseness demonstrates a clear lack of interest in improving the article through discussion. Willyfreddy (talk) 21:03, 23 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Yes Willyfreddy. Its an unreasonable statement. Lam is clearly just trying to waste our time. Note: He has already been identified by another constructive editor as probably sockpuppet of HeadleyDown. Its probably just a matter of time. Brenda Lo88 (talk) 02:13, 24 June 2011 (UTC)

NLP in the TV and popular media
Can we have a subsection that covers NLP as it has been appeared in the mass media? I think it would be interesting. Derren Brown was interviewed by Richard Dawkins on the BBC a while ago. The seduction community guys also received a lot of media attention recently. They openly acknowledge the influence of NLP in their books and seminars. How would we cover this within wikipedia rules? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 12:09, 22 June 2011 (UTC)

NPOV and neutrality
I've added a NPOV tag to the article because someone keeps adding extremely selective POV to the article. It appears there is an agenda to disparage the subject rather than present it in an impartial way. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 11:52, 15 June 2011 (UTC)


 * That is not really a justification for the tag. Its your opinion and you are commenting on the motivations of other editors rather than content.  You can't challenge (as far as I can see) the validity of the sources used.  So if you think they are selective then you have to find balancing reliable sources which contradict them.  Also remember this is a section titled "Criticism" so it is by definition going to contain critical material.  Without sources you are just opining and that doesn't count.  You also need to be specific in what additions you consider to be POV.  Without sourced material the tag goes -- Snowded  TALK  13:47, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Although I have my doubts about the section title Academic Criticism (might not Academic Discussion be more appropriate?), unless specific content on the page, or the quality, reliability or accuracy of the sources in question is impugned, by other good quality, reliable and accurate secondary sources then the NPOV tag should be removed. ISTB351 (talk) 15:33, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Snowded and Lam Kin Keung are trying to characterize NLP as pseudoscience. A claim of pseudoscience is of course notable, and there have always been a minority of academics making that claim about NLP, but the majority of reliable sources (see Google Scholar comparison above for a ballpark indication) don't make that claim.  The article should treat the claim as a significant minority view.  AJRG (talk) 22:21, 15 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Information and quotes in the criticism section are critical of course. They are attributed to reliable sources from scientific viewpoints. Calling them “claims”, “academic” or “accusations” based upon the editor opinion  is unacceptable.  Please read carefully: WP:ALLEGED  WP:NOR Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:29, 16 June 2011 (UTC)


 * AJRG, you are very selective in your use of "OR". You know full well that to derive "minority" from the data you have is a blatant case of OR.  The whole point here is that we have a section about scientific criticism, in which pseudo-science is used by reliable sources. That means in that section the language is used, and the lede needs to reference the fact that such a criticism has been made.  -- Snowded  TALK  05:44, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

POV tags have been added based on general statements without any specific examples and without any challenge to the sources used. Further no counter sources have been provided. If such sources are found and/or if a reliable source is found that says the views expressed are a minority then we can look at amending the text. I'll leave them for the moment to allow the IP to satisfy the normal conditions for using the tags. -- Snowded TALK  06:00, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

My 2 cents: I took a look at those "MIT slides" and found this on one of the pages: "NLPers further claim that you can [...], increase penis size, [...]". That is a blatant Strawman conception of NLP and I find it very difficult to believe that any (visiting) MIT professor would stand behind such nonsense. I also find it interesting that in the debate over the slides no one bothered to mention their ridiculous content. Finally, to be completely honest, I do not understand why a user such as Snowded, who has an obvious personal agenda, is allowed to have so much control over this article. Willyfreddy (talk) 05:45, 17 June 2011 (UTC)
 * No one is using the slides as an authority - and why OD are first comment? -- Snowded TALK  06:17, 17 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Hello Willyfreddy. Conflict of interest is an important factor in Wikipedia articles of commercial products such as NLP.  Snowded’s research and work in knowledge management looks to me as unrelated to NLP in the professional and subject terms. Knowledge management is quite mainstream. NLP is fringe.  You might differ.


 * Concerning control; it is WP policy that dictates what can be included. All editors are being included to contribute any good editing that is complying with NPOV. Any forcing of edits without sufficient discussion is not acceptable and is not allowed.


 * The penis enlargement issue is interesting. There are such big claims on the Internet e.g. .  Stronger sources would be needed to include it as an NLP application.  I will have a look for that or similar claims in existing sources.  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 06:24, 17 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Based on editing style, single use account and extreme POV, Lam Kin Keung is almost certainly HeadleyDown who has been banned permanently from editing wikipedia. I will notify administration. See Long_term_abuse/HeadleyDown for more details --122.108.140.210 (talk) 02:02, 19 June 2011 (UTC)


 * IP 122.108.140.210. Please stop your disruptive accusations.  If you suspect sockpuppetting take your claim to an admin forum.


 * Regarding the suggestion of Willyfreddy above: There appears to be no mention of penis enlargement claims in the sources I have access to.  But the NLP practitioners do make and publish the dubious claims according to many available sources.  These include:  NLP for curing cancer (Lilienfeld et al 2001), NLP as a schizophrenia cure, epilepsy, myopia, depression, PSTD, a cure-all (Stollznow 2010), NLP for alcoholism (Norcross et al 2008), NLP for lie detection (Vrij 2001).  These may be appropriate for the application section. Or perhaps the criticism section.  Other suggestions?  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:48, 20 June 2011 (UTC)


 * There seem to be a lot of books in the "self-help" category, several examples from Lindsey Agness on Amazon, Then we get books on subjects like "Happy Kids Happy You: Using NLP to Bring Out the Best in Ourselves and the Children We Care for" and so on. I suggest we keep to examples that are referenced in reliable sources -- Snowded  TALK  06:07, 20 June 2011 (UTC)


 * I'd like to read the following references: Lilienfeld et al (2001) and Stollznow (2010). Can you make them available please? Willyfreddy (talk) 00:07, 21 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Correction: The Lilienfeld et al source is 2002. Lilienfeld SO; Lynn SJ; Lohr JM, ed (2002). Science and Pseudoscience in Clinical Psychology. The Guilford Press. ISBN 1572308281. Stollznow.K., (2010).  Not-so Linguistic Programming: Skeptic vol 15, Number 4 2010. Pp7.  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:48, 21 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Neither reference is publicly available. Accordingly, I cannot form an opinion on them. Willyfreddy (talk) 03:56, 21 June 2011 (UTC)


 * See: WP:SOURCEACCESS  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 04:02, 21 June 2011 (UTC)


 * That's all nice and good, but it's not overly helpful to the current discussion. Willyfreddy (talk) 06:05, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
 * What Lilienfeld et al say? Can you provide a quote? I read it a few years ago and they presented no no substantial research into NLP whatsoever. Its a real stretch to cite it here. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 03:04, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
 * In the index of Lilienfeld et al (2002), NLP is only mentioned on a single page; and you also only quote a single page from Stollznow (2010). Accordingly, it should not be difficult to provide the appropriate quotes here. Willyfreddy (talk) 19:13, 23 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Yes I can see from a simple amazon search. Barely even a minor mention in Lilenfeld. It looks like a case of extreme POV/tendentious editing. Brenda Lo88 (talk) 02:09, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
 * What are you talking about? Lilienfeld is a notable practitioner/scholar. He heads the group that is campaigning for evidence-based practice (EBP) to be adopted by the APA and other psychology associations. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 10:13, 26 June 2011 (UTC)


 * IP 122…. There are big discrepancies in your message.  You have very repeatedly removed the references to Lilienfeld et al. You again just removed this large paragraph containing Lilienfeld et al  with a confusing note in the edit summary that hides the change.  You also state a few lines above in this talkpage “What Lilienfeld et al say? Can you provide a quote? I read it a few years ago and they presented no no substantial research into NLP whatsoever. Its a real stretch to cite it here”.  Now you are saying Lilienfeld is a notable practitioner scholar/of evidence based practice.  You appear to be disagreeing with yourself.  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:52, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
 * LKK, in case you missed it, I'll repost an earlier message to you: In the index of Lilienfeld et al (2002), NLP is only mentioned on a single page; and you also only reference a single page from Stollznow (2010). Accordingly, it should not be difficult to provide the appropriate quotes here. Could you please do so. Thanks. Willyfreddy (talk) 05:09, 27 June 2011 (UTC)


 * I already quoted Stollznow above.  Here are fuller quotes: “NLP is simply another pseudoscience with a pretence to science in its name, terminology, and alleged lineage.”


 * “Bandler and Grinder’s infamous Frogs into Princes and other books boast that NLP is a cure-all that treats a broad range of physical and mental conditions and learning difficulties, including epilepsy, myopia and dyslexia. With its promises to cure schizophrenia, depression, and post traumatic stress disorder, NLP shares similarities with Scientology and the Citizens Commission on Human Rights, CCHR.”


 * Stollznow (2010) Not-so Linguistic Programming: Skeptic vol 15, Number 4 2010. Pp7. Lilienfeld states (Concerning Tony Robin’s statements about NLP): “He also claimed that through neurolinguistic programming, clinicians can cure people of tumors and longstanding psychological problems in a fraction of the time required for regular treatments”.   Lam Kin Keung (talk) 07:20, 27 June 2011 (UTC)


 * That's great, thanks a lot. Willyfreddy (talk) 07:54, 27 June 2011 (UTC)

Note relevant to opening remark: Yes, this article obviously needs a lot of work and preferably from subject experts in NLP. There is extreme slanting against NLP from some editors to the point that the article disparages the subject.Brenda Lo88 (talk) 02:07, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

Popularity
In the lead there is a note attributed to Heap (1988) which states: "How widespread or popular NLP has become in practice is difficult to say with precision, though. As an indication the number of people to have been trained to 'Practitioner' level in the UK since NLP's inception seems likely to number at least 50,000. Trainings in NLP are found across the world, principally in countries where English is the first language, but including Norway, Spain and Brazil. There is no unified structure to the NLP practitioner community. Probably in common with other emergent fields, there is diversity in both practice and organisation, and there are resulting tensions"

Can we find a updated summary of the estimated number of people have trained to "practitioner" level worldwide? Also what is the size of the industry? How many books sales? How big is the NLP seminar market? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 12:00, 22 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Find a reliable third party source which covers that and we can look at inclusion. -- Snowded TALK  19:08, 22 June 2011 (UTC)


 * What do you consider a reliable source for this kind of information? There are only estimates in published sources. No comprehensive surveys exist. I suppose we can use these as long as we identify the source and reliability of the figures. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 02:20, 26 June 2011 (UTC)

Pseudo science
Actually there are many references - I've been planning to make some edits to the main body based on the material, but there is enough here and here to justify use of the category. -- Snowded TALK  08:25, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you. AJRG (talk) 08:36, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Pleasure, unfortunately another editor did not even bother to read the edit summary -- Snowded TALK  08:38, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Perhaps a couple of Google searches didn't convince him. Can you quote verbatim from two or three of your best sources?  AJRG (talk) 08:54, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Read his edit summary, he didn't even look at the talk page. I've asked him to self revert as WP:BRD applies. -- Snowded  TALK  08:58, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

However, to respond to the query - from Tomasz Witkowski "Thirty-Five Years of Research on Neuro-Linguistic Programming. NLP Research Data Base. State of the Art or Pseudoscientific Decoration?" which is one of the articles available without paying. Its also a disciplined survey of many papers building on Heap.

"being the background for the pseudoscientific farce, which NLP appears to be. Using “scientific” attributes, which is so characteristic of pseudo- science, is manifested also in other aspects of NLP activities. It is primarily revealed in the language – full of borrowings from science or expressions referring to it, devoid of any scientific meaning. It is seen already in the very name – neuro-linguistic programming - which is a cruel deception. At the neuronal level it provides no explanation and it has nothing in common with academic linguistics or programming. Similarly impressive sounding and similarly empty are expressions used for formulation of tenets of the concept, such as sub-modalities, pragmagraphics, surface structure, deep structure, accessing cue, and non- accessingmovement. My analysis leads undeniably to the statement that NLP represents pseudoscientific rubbish, which should be mothballed forever."

Enough I think -- Snowded TALK  09:17, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Interesting author who hoaxed a Polish psychology journal. The study, though, suffers from selection bias: Witkowski has his own (unstated) definition of NLP which he uses to exclude data from the sample.  AJRG (talk) 22:40, 23 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I like the hoax assuming its true, Shows someone with a good sense of the absurd and the guts to demonstrate the ease with which people can be taken in!  All studies need to make selections and when I read it there seemed clear.   That said, its not our place to comment on the quality of the article if it has been in a refereed journal.  There are several others as well on the search, I selected one that was readily available by was of illustration.-- Snowded  TALK  04:54, 24 April 2011 (UTC)
 * The fact that Tomasz Witkowski went to the trouble of recreating the Sokal Hoax might suggest that he has serious reservations about the quality of the peer review process. I came across a detailed reply to this paper here.  AJRG (talk) 11:28, 24 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I review around 4/5 articles a month for journals where I am on the editorial panel, and I've been through it as an author. I think any intelligent person has serious reservations about the process but the fact remains that Witknowski's paper is in a refereed academic journal and the counter is a subpage of a commercial NLP site.  So its a curiosity no more.  I know I have said this before but I am impressed by your facility to use internet searches  -- Snowded  TALK  13:30, 24 April 2011 (UTC)
 * With all that journal income, you'll soon be able to afford my fees... AJRG (talk) 14:51, 24 April 2011 (UTC)
 * lol, happy to give you 80% of zero -- Snowded TALK  15:02, 24 April 2011 (UTC)

Hi, Snowded; Still plugging away, I see :)

Anyway, I thought I'd drop in a comment or two about one of your latest claims. Namely that my response to Witkowski's article is "a subpage of a commercial NLP site". In the first place, what is it you think I'm selling? Due to a disagreement over my publisher's, sorry - EX-piublisher's - ethics I have withdrawn both of my books from publication. So, no cigar on that score.

And in any case, are you really not aware that Mr Witkowski is also a published author of books, in Poland?

In the second place your comment is a complete red herring. My response to Witkowski Review of Witkowski's article, regardless of where it was published, is either correct or incorrect on a point-by-point basis. Arguing that my entire article is less valid just because it doesn't appear in a peer-reviewed journal is neither here nor there - except to an academic like yourself who has a vested interest in perpetuating a system that pretends that academics are smarter than the rest of us. Which is certainly not always the case.

You also seem to have forgotten to mention that I have had a response to Dr Michael Heap's articles (1988, 1989 & 2008) published by Michael Heap in his own yearly sceptic's magazine - The Skeptical Intelligencer, Vol. 11, 2008. Since my article Response to Dr Heap's criticisms took up nearly half the magazine, which is financed by Dr Heap himself, I hardly think he used my article merely in order to extract the rejected body fluid, as one sock puppet suggested a while back. More likely, I think, it was because even though he doesn't support the FoNLP, he at least has the integrity to present both sides of the case and allow his readers to draw their own conclusions.

Of course your argument matches Witkowski's overlong and basically irrelevant claim that even getting reviewed in a peer-reviewed journal isn't worth a whole lot unless it is a "highly rated" peer-reviewed journal. Yet as I demonstrate in my own article, it takes no effort at all to find material in highly-rated journals which make the same mistakes as can be found in articles in less highly-rated journals. The following (24 point rated) examples are both taken from Witkowski's article:


 * An article by Coe and Sharcoff (1985) in the International Journal of Clinical and Experimental Hypnosis which is invalid because the researchers were examining a claim that the co-creators of the FoNLP had never made - the myth that a person's PRS could be ascertained by self-report and/or watching their eye movements as well as by listening to their use of sensory predicates;
 * An article by Matthews, Kirsch and Mosher (1985) in the Journal of Abnormal Psychology which is invalid because it reported on an investigation the "NLP double hypnotic induction", which doesn't exist, i.e. whilst there is certainly a technique called the "double hypnotic induction", it is not an NLP-related technique, and neither Nandler nor Grinder ever claimed that it was.

Likewise it is extremely misleading to imply that the peer-review process has anything to do with establishing the "truth" of any article. For example, amongst other relevant material published by the Journal of Counseling Psychology in the 1980s there was an article by Falzett (1981) which supported the value of using a person's PRS, an article by Sharpley (1984) which claimed there wasn't even a sure way of determining someone's PRS, a response by Einspruch and Forman (1985) which said that both Sharpley's review and most of the material he reviewed had missed the point, and Sharpley's so-called "rebuttal" (1987) which counter-claimed that it was Einspruch and Forman who had missed the point.

So, does that mean that "NLP" was valid in 1981, until Sharpley's article in 1984, then valid again in 1085, but invalid again in 1987?

I don't think so. AndyzB (talk) 19:11, 25 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Sorry its very simple. A peer reviewed journal counts as a reliable source here, while a blog article does not. Why not submit it?  -- Snowded  TALK  21:25, 25 April 2011 (UTC)


 * I agree, Andy, why don't you polish your blog article and submit it? Someone needs to get a hold of all those original experiments and critique the methodology. Its like the blind leading the blind. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 01:49, 26 April 2011 (UTC)

Hello. The NLP-pseudoscience issue is interesting from the new Witkowsi paper, and worth explaining more clearly. Witkowski emphasizes the pseudoscientific characteristics beyond the fact that NLP has no reliable evidence for effectiveness. So in the context of pseudoscience, he covers Sharpley’s paper on NLP being an untestable (pseudoscientific) theory : Sharpley, C. F. (1987). Research findings on Neurolinguistic Programming: nonsupportive data or untestable theory? Journal of Counseling Psychology, 34, 103-107

But Witkowski goes deeper looking at NLP’s discredit and implausibility, referring to Norcross et al and Singer and Lalich. Nocross, J. C., Koocher, G. P., & Garofalo, A. (2006). Discredited psychological treatments and tests: A Delphi Poll. Professional Psychology: Research and Practice Copyright, 37, 515–522

Singer, M. T., & Lalich, J. (1996). "Crazy" therapies. What are they? Do they work? San Francisco: Jossey-Bass Publishers So the pseudo-science issue in NLP involves, but is a bit different from the issue of empirical results. There are slightly different views/rationales from those who say it is pseudoscientific. It has no reliable evidence for effectiveness, but that is only one aspect. There are other sources online:

Lilienfeld makes use of NLP as an example of pseudo-science in this article:

http://www.srmhp.org/0101/raison-detre.html

and in research articles on teaching undergraduates how to identify pseudoscience: Lilienfeld, S. O., Lohr, M., & Morier, D. (2001). The teaching of courses in the science and pseudoscience of psychology. Teaching of Psychology, 28, 182-191

There are other sources that teach critical thinking and identify NLP as pseudoscience: Teaching critical thinking in psychology: a handbook of best practices (2008). By Dana Dunn, Jane S. Halonen, Randolph A. Smith ISBN: 978-1-4051-7402-2. PP12

“From the beginning of course, scientific psycholog had many pseudoscientific competitors to contend with, ranging from astrology to graphology. In the 20th century and the growth of technology, we saw the introduction of nonprofessional therapies that added scientific sounding language: neurolinguistic programming, right-brain training programs, the Transcutaneious, Electro-Neural Stimulator, the Brain SuperCharger, the Whole Brain Wafe Form Synchro-Energizer. The appeal of such psychobabble is not surprising: people have a great nead for easy answers that promise escape from uncertainty and that do not require them to think too hard.”

There is evidence of this on the web also in the form of presentation slides with similar references sections: In the field of language and linguistics:

http://show.zoho.com/public/simonspears/Scientific-Thinking-in-Speech-Therapy-ppt

(Lum identifies NLP as pseudoscientific, some of the slides of the above are from the book: Lum, C. (2001). Scientific Thinking in Speech and Language Therapy. Lawrence Erlbaum Associates. Mahwah, New Jersey London)

“Have you ever wondered about the difference between speech and language therapy and other occupations (e.g.) elocutionists) and complementary therapies (e.g. iridology, reflexology, aromatherapy), or pseudo-scientific interventions such as neuro-linguistic programming?) They differ from one another in significant ways. “ (Lum 2001, p16)

In the field of psychology (as above):

https://docs.google.com/present/view?id=dfbw8nz3_1hqgpsbf7&pli=1

Devilly (2005) also uses NLP as an example of pseudoscience in: Devilly.G. (2005) Power Therapies and possible threats to the science of psychology and psychiatry Australian and New Zealand Journal of Psychiatry Vol.39 p.437

Singer and Lalich (1997) in Crazy Therapies. The reviews of the book state it is about pseudoscientific therapies and the authors have a whole section devoted to neurolinguistic programming. Singer and Lalich mention the fact that there is no evidence of effectiveness. But they also talk about the exaggerated and pseudo-scientific terms. They also talk about the implausibility of the claims.

Singer (1996) says "none of the NLP developers have done any research to "prove" their models correct though NLP promoters and advertisers continue to call the originators scientists and use such terms as science, technology and hi-tech psychology in describing NLP"

Singer, Margaret & Janja Lalich (1997). Crazy Therapies: What Are They? Do They Work?. Jossey Bass, p167-195. ISBN 0787902780.

Also in Prometheus chained: Social and ethical constraints on psychology. Drenth, Pieter J. D. European Psychologist, Vol 4(4), Dec 1999, 233-239. doi: 10.1027//1016-9040.4.4.233

“Here again we find a great number of pseudo-scientific horsefeathers: neuro-emotional integration, reincarnation therapy, scientology, and – a more recent popular approach – neuro-linguistic programming (NLP). Again, the latter will be elaborated as a good example of the humbug being peddled out in this field.”

“Often pseudo-scientific practices are motivated by loathsome pursuit of gain. We have already seen the economic manipulation of the credulity of NLP quarries.” He writes about pseudoscientists and their manipulation using the ignorance or desperation of clients.

There is also a section in neurolinguistic programming in an Encyclopedia of Pseudoscience that also covers NLP’s pseudoscientific ideas and identifies its lack of evidence for effectiveness:

Dr William F. Williams, Encyclopedia of Pseudoscience (2000) publ. Fitzory Dearborn Publishers, ISBN 978-1-57958-207-4

So to show the common scientific view of NLP as pseudoscience, and the explanations for why it is considered pseudoscience, it will probably need its own sub-section in the scientific criticism section. Following Witkowski and others above, that can include: NLP as a pseudoscientific title, NLP concepts being pseudoscientific, and NLP practitioners using pseudoscientific myths and perspectives.Lam Kin Keung (talk) 07:22, 26 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Th criticism section really needs more structure, do you feel up to a redraft? I used Witkowski as it was one of the few on the list that was easily accessible for other editors to check, but it was only one of many examples, the list above with the commentary fleshes that out considerably.  If we get that section right then the lede can be changed to provide a summary -- Snowded  TALK  09:24, 26 April 2011 (UTC)


 * It would be quite easy to expand or re-integrate what is already there. It may or might not need sub-sections. The above is plenty to work with for now. I will have a go.  Please correct any language mistakes I might make. I will be working from my cognitive linguistics background, so other business, philosophy of science, or science perspectives are welcome. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 09:38, 26 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Very happy to help -- Snowded TALK  10:43, 26 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I jumped the gun a little. I think I agree with Snowded here. We need a section that gives an outline of the argument of critics. I think it would be best to start from an article that is peer-reviewed and use as the main source to structure the section. The Witkowski paper is not a good example because it was not written by a native speaker of english and makes many basic errors. Can you suggest an article which best represents the skeptic's argument? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 13:33, 26 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Lets let Lam Kin Keung draft something, he has a solid grip on the sources and its easy to correct english -- Snowded TALK  15:21, 26 April 2011 (UTC)

Issues in view of NLP as pseudoscience
Hello. Here is a structure that gives clear explanation of the issues of this view. Some of it is from the prior section. There is more to check or add, but here is a draft below Lam Kin Keung (talk) 08:13, 27 April 2011 (UTC):

NLP has been criticized beyond its lack of reliable evidence for effectiveness. Certain neuroscientists, linguists and psychologists have written that; neuro-linguistic programming is a pseudo-scientific title; NLP uses pseudo-scientific claims, concepts and terminology; NLP exhibits characteristics that identify pseudo-scientific developments; and NLP appears on lists of discredited therapies.

The term neuro-linguistic programming has been identified by some sources as a pseudo-scientific title. Roderique-Davies (2009) says that the name of neuro-linguistic programming is pseudo-scientific and wholly inappropriate as it offers no explanation of behavior at the neurological level. Witkowski (2010) also states that at the neuronal level NLP provides no explanation at all and it has nothing in common with academic linguistics or programming. Similarly, Corballis (1999) has stated that "NLP is a thoroughly fake title, designed to give the impression of scientific respectability".[57]

Witkowski (2010) states that NLP uses impressive sounding and similarly empty expressions such as; pragmagraphics, surface structure, deep structure, accessing cues, non-accessing movement etc. Beyerstein (1995) also says that NLP contains pseudo-scientifically applied terms such as eye accessing cues, metamodeling, micromodeling, metaprogramming, neurological levels, presuppositions, representational systems, and submodalities. He says this is to obfuscate and to give the impression of a scientific discipline.[58] According to Beyerstein (1995) "though it claims neuroscience in its pedigree, NLP's outmoded view of the relationship between cognitive style and brain function ultimately boils down to crude analogies."[59]

With regard to the perceived promotion of popular myths and anti-scientific perspectives, Beyerstein (1995) has implicated NLP in promoting a set of neuro-mythologies of the New Age involving a relativistic perspective and the use of “you create your own reality” in an attempt to gain immunity from scientific testing. Devilly (2005) has used NLP as an example of a type of pseudo-science called a “power therapy”, and has outlined a number of characteristics that identify such pseudo-sciences. Such characteristics include the promotion of unobtainable goals, rationalization traps, manufactured credibility, a set of specific beliefs, self generated persuasion, vivid appeals, the use of common misconceptions, and attacks on critics through the use of innuendo.

NLP has also been included in literature critiquing pseudo-science in general. Sources include books such as Crazy Therapies (1997), the Encyclopedia of Pseudo-science (2000), Science and Pseudo-science in Clinical Psychology (2002) The Skeptic's Dictionary (2003) and Tall Tales about the Mind and Brain (2007). NLP has more recently been used as a key example of pseudo-science to facilitate the understanding of the importance of rational and critical thinking in a number of academic subjects. Lum (2001) uses NLP as an example for understanding the difference between science and pseudo-science in language and speech therapy, and Lilienfeld et al (2001) and Dunn et al (2008) have used NLP as an example of pseudo-science for teaching undergraduates how to identify pseudo-scientific psychological interventions. According to Witkowski (2010), NLP also appears on “the list of discredited therapies” published in the journal; Professional Psychology: Research and Practice. With reference to work by Carroll (2003), Della Sala (1999), Lilienfeld et al (2003) and Singer and Lalich (1996) on identifying “pseudoscientific, unvalidated, or “quack” psychotherapies”, Norcross et al. (2006) have rated NLP on a continuum of discredited procedures. They listed “Neuro-Linguistic Programming (NLP) for treatment of mental/behavioral disorders” at “3.87 (SD=0.92)” which achieves a similar level of discredit as dolphin assisted therapy, equine therapy, psychosynthesis, scared straight programs, and emotional freedom technique (EFT). Subsequent literature by Norcross et al. (2008) shows that “neurolinguistic programming for drug and alcohol dependence” was rated among the top ten most discredited of the interventions included in the study [64], and in Glasner-Edwards and Rawson (2010), NLP is listed as “certainly discredited”.


 * It looks good to me although I would be tempted to include the self-reported/phenomenological reliance in the first sentence. -- Snowded  TALK  08:32, 27 April 2011 (UTC)


 * No, that is just a original synthesis. You are not allowed to take bits and pieces from different sources and create your own synthesis. See WP:FRINGE. But its not that simple. You can remove the subtitles if you want. Keep up the good work. Just don't put it to the article yet until others editors have had a chance to comment and make suggestions. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 19:04, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
 * How on earth is that synthesis? It summarises the issue with lots of references.  No conclusions are drawn which are not in the source material.  -- Snowded  TALK  21:58, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
 * It is original research and/or synthesis because it takes bits of pieces from multiple sources and then combines them in a novel way. As it stands it is just a hotch potch of statements from different critics. You need to find the most reputable/reliable source that outlines the arguments of critics. You can even paraphrase this. But we need to find and agree on an appropriate source first before redrafting anything. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 02:36, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
 * All wikipedia articles summarise material using references from multiple sources not a single source. This is prevarication -- Snowded  TALK  04:10, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree. Good editing is about selecting and rephrasing sources. But this article is difficult because the sources appears to be polarized between proponents and skeptics, and few in the middle. I'm trying to get from you a high quality source that best summarises the arguments of skeptics. Suggestions? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 14:13, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't really agree with your language here. Its not that most academic sources are skeptical about NLP, its that they dismiss it as a pseudo science.  It is more than legitimate to summarise those sources in this article, and there is no need or requirement to find a single summary source.  -- Snowded  TALK  08:02, 29 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Hello Snowded. I think you are right the first sentence needed more about going beyond evidence.  Actually the phenomenology issue could stay in the before Empirical Validity section because it has more focus there.  The issues of pseudo-science usually go further than issue of empirical measurements.  Instead the Devilly source explains better the issue of promotion perspective and anti-science.  There could be some overlap between the sections but so that long it explains the matter clearly it should be ok.  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 04:46, 28 April 2011 (UTC)


 * May I suggest that you make use of an impartial tone. Also, avoid stating opinions as facts. See if you can achieve some neutrality by introducing the notable counter-arguments for each criticism. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 13:54, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
 * You might be getting close to the creationist argument here that all things are theories. We are not required to be neutral in the sense of accepting both scientific criticism of NLP, and the arguments of NLP advocates as having equal value.  -- Snowded  TALK  08:02, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm actually agnostic, or maybe weak atheist. I do not believe in god or creationism but I would still attempt to "write for the enemy" to counteract my bias. I would outline the arguments of adherents and scientists without letting my personal bias intrude. If you're honest, the watchmaker argument is somewhat convincing. But that is a different kettle of fish. There is clear consensus in science that evolution is the better theory as it has superior explanatory adequacy, is testable, and it is confirmed by experimental data. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 10:28, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
 * The point is not what you would or would not do, but how wikipedia is written. Here we are talking about NLP as a pseudo-science in a section under that name.  There is no requirement to counter the over-wealming evidence of the scientific community within this section.  The tone at the moment reflects the sources which is what it is meant to do.  I think its time to put it in place with some minor tweaks.  -- Snowded  TALK  13:12, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
 * "Writing for the enemy" is a good way to counter personal bias which is clearly a problem in this draft in its current form. In fact, neutral point of view is required when writing for wikipedia. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 14:37, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
 * You are not addressing the point. The text summarises existing scientific literature which is the standard in WIkipedia.  If you think it doesn't do that then provide an example.  If you have references from reliable sources that provide counter arguments then list them.  If you can't do either then I will put the existing text into the article.  -- Snowded  TALK  13:19, 30 April 2011 (UTC)
 * What would be acceptable to you as a reliable source? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 08:17, 1 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Read WP:RS -- Snowded TALK  15:29, 1 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Has anyone provided evidence of this being a majority view? If not, then we should be clear that it's a significant minority view. AJRG (talk) 23:12, 1 May 2011 (UTC)
 * I can't find any scientific sources which counter this, and several of the "its pseudo-science" articles summarise the literature so its clearly the dominant view. Of course if you can find anything which says otherwise, happy to look at it.  -- Snowded  TALK  23:40, 1 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Most reliable sources don't describe NLP as pseudoscience. They usually point to the need for better quality research.  Until that changes, it's a significant minority view.  AJRG (talk) 08:36, 2 May 2011 (UTC)

The Encyclopedia of Pseudoscience (2000) doesn't qualify as a reliable source - see David Bloomberg's Nov 2000 review in Skeptical Inquirer... AJRG (talk) 10:59, 1 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Please give your best example of the "its pseudo-science" articles that summarise the literature so I can check it. Crazy therapies (Singer 1997) is not a WP:RS. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 01:27, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
 * I already linked you to the one that is readily available, and the others are well summarised above and they have been in place for some time. If there are specific authorities you dispute please list them with a reason (not a statement) -- Snowded  TALK  02:04, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Of the following journals, which ones would be acceptable to show counter-arguments? The Coaching Psychologist, Qualitative Research in Organizations, Curriculum journal, Journal of Transformative Learning, Journal of Consciousness Studies, The Psychotherapist, Human Resource Development Review, Qualitative Research in Management and Organization, Learning Organization, Constructivism, Innovations in Education and Teaching --122.108.140.210 (talk) 04:52, 3 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Crazy Therapies is written by psychology professionals (PhD level) Singer and Lalich. It includes a big section on NLP. It is referred positively by Norcross et al (2006) as literature examining pseudoscientific psychotherapies. Carroll (2003) could be added (Carroll, R. T. (2003). The skeptic’s dictionary. New York: Wiley.).


 * The Encyclopedia of Pseudoscience is edited by Williams. The (17 or more) advisors, consultants and contributors are mostly PhD level lecturers and professionals. It is cited by e.g. Technical Communication Quarterly 12. 3  (Summer 2003): 267-284. The Rhetoric of Junk Science.Hass, Bruce; Kleine, Michael.


 * The sources are accurate and reliable for statement that NLP is included in books critiquing pseudoscience.Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:33, 2 May 2011 (UTC)


 * That was my impression as well when I checked the two books out. I can't see any reason stated above as to why these are not reliable sources.   AJRG & the IP do you have any arguments here?  If not I think this has gone on long enough.  -- Snowded  TALK  06:08, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
 * I gave you the Skeptical Inquirer reference. To quote from the review: ".. errors, major and minor, can be found throughout.", "It reads more like a collection of opinions", "[needs to] contain material that is both correct and objective. Unfortunately, this tome fails on both counts."  AJRG (talk) 08:27, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, Lam Kin Keung's draft still fails to include any context or counter-arguments. By what criteria did you select your sources and snippets, and exclude others? You still have failed to give me your best source that represents the skeptics arguments. What source best summarises the views of proponents? Is there a source that impartially reviews both sides? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 04:52, 3 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Getting to the deeper issues and context, the main criticism of the Encyclopedia of Pseudoscience is that it has “Paranormal Favouritism” and is not critical enough.


 * The scientific skepticism views and context have some added points.  A good recent source is that of the linguist and the skeptic Dr Stollznow:


 * “NLP is simply another pseudoscience with a pretence to science in its name, terminology, and alleged lineage.”
 * Not-so Linguistic Programming: Skeptic vol 15, Number 4 2010. Pp7


 * There are two issues to add from that source. One is that the claim to previous expertise is also pseudoscientific one.  The other is the similarity with scientology:


 * “With its promises to cure schizophrenia, depression, and post traumatic stress disorder, NLP shares similarities with Scientology and the Citizens Commission on Human Rights, CCHR.”
 * Stollznow (2010) Pp 7


 * The Norcross references have NLP and scientology together in the research, Devilly (2005) writes of scientology in relation to power therapies and NLP and Drenth 1999 also writes of scientology in the same criticism as NLP. So the scientology information from the skeptics resources could add a bit different view to the present information. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:42, 3 May 2011 (UTC)


 * If you start quoting partisan sources such as skeptics magazines and books then you're opening the gates for equally partisan sources from NLP proponents. That's why I suggest we begin with a source that outlines the arguments from both sides in an impartial way. Also, keep to peer-reviewed journals only which will help filter out most junk and save all time. Can you please comment about the acceptability of some of those journals I mentioned above? Would they be acceptable sources to you? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 07:35, 3 May 2011 (UTC)


 * I will look into them. As Snowded mentioned, the current section above is ready for adding to the article.  We can make discussion of additional sources separately.  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:04, 4 May 2011 (UTC)


 * So if I understand it you're looking into the counter arguments of both sides? This needs to be done before inserting anything. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 09:33, 4 May 2011 (UTC)


 * It has been looked at. The criticism section is ready for update. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 04:07, 10 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Hardly. It doesn't make clear that this is a significant minority view, and woefully fails NPOV.  AJRG (talk) 12:14, 10 May 2011 (UTC)


 * I clarified the first 2 lines. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:19, 11 May 2011 (UTC)
 * AJRG - how can you say it is a minority view when its nearly all the available sources? So you have something which says that?  Either (to our IP_ are we required to show counter arguments to statements made by reliable sources.  This is time wasting.  Without a counter source the material needs to go up.  -- Snowded  TALK  15:11, 11 May 2011 (UTC)

The overwhelming majority of reliable sources on NLP don't use the term pseudoscience. You've provided a few that do, so this is a significant minority view. AJRG (talk) 16:09, 11 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Incorrect, minority view is an interpretation on your part. We have a significant number of academic sources which say it is.  You have not provided ones so far that directly or indirectly say it is not.  Anyway as far as this argument there are significant sources which say that it is, and that is all the proposed amendment reflects.  If you find reliable sources that reject the claim then they might be included as a counter balance.  However they would have to be comparable, ie from refereed journals.  I would cast doubt by the way on a journal created by NLP advocates and refereed by them-- Snowded  TALK  11:17, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
 * You haven't provided any evidence for this being a majority view. Publication of a claim in a peer-reviewed journal doesn't make it a majority view.  AJRG (talk) 15:53, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
 * The proposed text does not say that it is the majority view, it follows normal WIkipedia style in reporting what reliable sources say. If you think there is an issue with WP:WEIGHT then you need to find some comparable sources that counter the position otherwise I can't see any valid objection to the text as proposed -- Snowded  TALK  17:46, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
 * If there are reliable and neutral sources indicating that NLP may have empirical validity then these need to be balanced against those sources claiming NLP to be pseudoscience. The fact that some sources suggest that it is pseudoscience is notable.  Claims of pseudoscience, however, don't necessarily mean that something such as NLP is definitely false or invalid - often it just means that it hasn't, for whatever reasons, satisfied the required empirical criteria. The fact that some sources claim it to be pseudoscience needs to be mentioned in a neutral way - not in a way that suggests that such claims are objectively true. Sometimes what people assume should be "reliable sources" turn out not to be so reliable at all. Ontologicos (talk) 17:55, 11 May 2011 (UTC)


 * The sources above are reliable compared to the majority of the sources in the article. They are from scientific viewpoints. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 06:53, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
 * With the exception of the Encyclopedia of Pseudoscience - but you don't actually need to include that. The new wording is a slight improvement, but the last paragraph about Norcross et al. is OR in this context and shouldn't be in this section at all.  AJRG (talk) 13:32, 12 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Williams Ed (2000) is reliable, especially for the statement. Norcross et al (2006) refer directly to other the sources in the section.  I will update and make it easier to read. There is a new reference for the issue too:


 * Glasner-Edwards. S., and Rawson.R. (2010) Evidence-based practices in addiction treatment: Review and recommendations for public policy. Health Policy. Volume 97, Issues 2-3, October 2010, Pages 93-104 Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:51, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
 * This is still OR. Either directly quote Norcross on NLP as pseudoscience, from a reliable source, or leave the section out. AJRG (talk) 15:53, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Doesn't look like OR to me - what is factually incorrect? Also please clarify, when you say section you mean the last paragraph, or are you now arguing a wider case?  -- Snowded  TALK  17:49, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
 * The Norcross papers don't support the claim of pseudoscience - they make a different claim which is already reported in the article. Trying to infer support is OR.  AJRG (talk) 19:17, 13 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Its not original research. Quotes are ok though, have been added with further examples of the continuum for clarity. Research of Norcross et al takes the pseudo-science issue and adds further case adding consensus and granularity to a continuum of discredit.Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:33, 14 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Agree. I think with your latest changes we are now there.  AJRG, if you still have objections would you list them please.  At the moment you only seem to be arguing the Norcross point, is that the only objection?

The two paragraphs starting "NLP is also considered" still imply a majority view and need to be recast. Unless you can directly quote Norcross on NLP as pseudoscience, from a referenced reliable source, inclusion is OR (as well as undue weight since the actual claim is already in the article). AJRG (talk) 10:55, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
 * SO if we change "is also considered" to say who said it and move the Norcross the main criticism section will that satisfy you. I really disagree with you by the way on both points, but I am testing a compromise -- Snowded  TALK  11:07, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Subject to sight of the actual wording, that could be a reasonable compromise. AJRG (talk) 11:13, 14 May 2011 (UTC)


 * So start those two paragraphs with a new one saying "A range of academic commentators have stated that NLP is a pseudo science:" then have the two paragraphs as bullets removing the considered and just stating the reasons. ???  -- Snowded  TALK  11:17, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
 * "A range of" is poor, as it implies a wider membership. "A number of" is more accurate. I'm not wild about your bullet point idea, but give it a try.  AJRG (talk) 11:46, 14 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Yes agree.  I made the even stronger changes to the two lines.  Also the main issue of the section is “NLP has been criticized beyond its lack of reliable evidence for effectiveness”.  That includes the pseudoscience related criticisms and the discredit related criticisms of Witkowski, Norcross et al and Glasner-Edwards and Rawson. I should have made that clearer in that first paragraph. See if it ok now.  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:34, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Where in the Norcross paper does it discuss, report findings or make conclusions regarding NLP for the treatment of mental disorders? Can you provide a quote and page numbers? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 02:54, 15 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Norcross et al (2006) state “ Neuro-Linguistic Programming (NLP) for treatment of mental/behavioral disorders” and give average of second round at “3.87 (SD=0.92)” at page 518.  Witkowski (2010) also states this as on "the list of discredited therapies" and “Neuro-linguistic Programming for treatment of mental/behavioral disorders averaged 3.87 (SD=0.92)” page 65.  Norcross et al 2008 list “Neurolinguistic programming for drug and alcohol dependence” under “Top 10 Discredited Mental Health Treatments” (page 198) in the section “The Dark Side: Identifying What Does Not Work” page 196.  In section “1.2.1. Treatments that do not work” Glasner-Edwards and Rawson (2010) list “Neuro-linguistic programming” under “Certainly Discredited”  page 97.  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 04:36, 15 May 2011 (UTC)


 * I suggest we now replace the "Scientific criticism" section with the above text. We can then look at changing the final paragraph of the lede to reflect this material  -- Snowded  TALK  06:26, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Replacing the Scientific Criticism section is a bad idea. This majority of reliable sources ask for better research.  Only a few make the pseudoscience claim.  AJRG (talk) 09:05, 16 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Do you have relevant research reviews that state your objection? Lam Kin Keung (talk) 10:40, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
 * This is the default scientific position. Reviews that don't use the term pseudoscience cannot be used to artificially inflate your point of view, and so still belong in a separate section.  AJRG (talk) 11:34, 16 May 2011 (UTC)


 * The statement “a good deal more empirical support is needed before the positive therapeutic claims of neurolinguistic programming proponents can be taken seriously” is more relevant to the Empirical validity section.


 * Following your concern of reviews that use the term pseudo-science, this could also be added or paraphrased to the section on “criticisms beyond lack of evidence” if you want more quotes:


 * Drenth (1999) states that “The wellknown Dutch psycholinguist Levelt (1995) has passed devastating judgment on NLP: It does not know the literature, it makes use of insights that have been rendered out of date long ago, concepts are not understood or are a mere fabrication, conclusions are based upon wrong presuppositions. The theory and practice of NLP has nothing to do with neuroscientific insights, nor with linguistics, nor with informatics and programming.) page 235


 * “Pseudo-sciences such as NLP, homeopathy, and spiritual healing are not without danger. In the first place we often see a more serious relapse after a temporary improvement, as was shown recently by the psychologist Vervaet in a follow-up study of victims of healing by praying. Moreover, in case of no or little success people suffer not only from feelings of disappointment, but also from feelings of guilt and failure (lacking motivation, insufficient faith). Third, it prohibits serious investigation and diagnostics with sometimes tragic consequences”. Drenth (1999) page 236 Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:39, 17 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Yes I agree. I will start working on the lede. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 08:27, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
 * There is no analysis or discussion of that data specific to NLP by Norcross which puts into doubt its citation here and puts into doubt the reliability of Witkowski as a source because there is no way to know if it was statistically significant. We don't why it was not analysed or included in the discussion. Perhaps there was too much variation in the data to allow for any inference. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 09:59, 15 May 2011 (UTC)


 * They are both reliable sources for information presented. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:58, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
 * On what basis is it reliable given that no statistical inference is justified? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 02:06, 17 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Read WP:RS Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:35, 17 May 2011 (UTC)

Hello. Before current section of facts on criticisms beyond… is added, here is optional paragraph that includes explanation about the growth of NLP. Prof Lassiter and Roderique-Davies give explanation:

Some criticisms of NLP give explanation as to why NLP has been adopted in some situations: In criticizing the use of NLP as inappropriate for police interrogations, Lassiter (2004) says that NLP is accurately described as pseudo-science, and is based upon premises that are prime facie implausible, folklore and myth, and may be a throwback to trial by ordeal. Roderique-Davies criticizes NLP as a “cargo cult psychology. (page 62)”

Lassiter, G. D. (Ed.). (2004). Interrogations, confessions, and entrapment. New York: Springer. (page 79)

This and other criticisms about the perceived cult-like nature of NLP could be added as there is the time. Or the current section on "criticisms beyond…." could be just added as it is. What is your preference? Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:10, 18 May 2011 (UTC)


 * I can't see any more objections so I suggest you make the change -- Snowded TALK  07:11, 18 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Ok. Its been in more than acceptable factual state for a long time. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 07:18, 18 May 2011 (UTC)
 * You did not answer the question. On what basis is it reliable given that no statistical inference is justified? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 02:06, 17 May 2011 (UTC)
 * That is your commentary on the content of the article, it does not challenge its reliability unless you have an article with equivalent authority which makes the point.  You need a reference that makes the same criticism -- Snowded  TALK  16:18, 19 May 2011 (UTC)

Re- the heading for scientific criticisms section: It is written showing scientific points of view concerning NLP. Witkowski and Beyerstein look at NLP and its anti-science perspective, Lilienfeld, Devilly, and others look at its pseudoscientific characteristics. Its clearly scientific criticisms. If you have other evidence, discuss here. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 10:30, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
 * They're certainly academic, but poorly informed rehashes of other peoples opinions don't have anything to do with science (which the OED defines as "the intellectual and practical activity encompassing the systematic study of the structure and behaviour of the physical and natural world through observation and experiment"). Pseudo-science ("a collection of beliefs or practices mistakenly regarded as being based on scientific method") is a rhetorical accusation, not a scientific term.  AJRG (talk) 13:33, 29 May 2011 (UTC)


 * It might be the view of yours that the pseudoscience characterization is just rhetoric, or just academic. Academic has a misleading doubletalk meaning. There are other options. The title could be "pseudoscience and research on discredit", "Criticism from science professionals", "Characteristics of Pseudo-science", or just "Scientific Criticism". None of those latter titles holds double meanings. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 04:39, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
 * None of these suggestions are acceptable. Academic has a clear primary meaning (see here) whereas its secondary (purely colloquial) meaning is not applicable in this context.  AJRG (talk) 18:57, 30 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Its a summary of reliable sources, I don't see any basis on which you can say its a "poorly informed rehash". Are you saying those sources are not scientific?  Also on what basis do you say that psudo-science is not a term used by scientists.  it clearly is.  -- Snowded  TALK  18:20, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
 * The sources are mostly primary sources, tertiary sources or non-English publications. I didn't say that scientists never use the term "pseudo-science" - I said it wasn't a scientific term: it has no evidential basis.  AJRG (talk) 19:28, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Umm, they are mostly commentaries on NLP by people from the scientific community. Those count as reliable sources.  If scientific sources label it as a pseudo-science then how can that not be a scientific criticism?
 * By that logic, a couple of articles about baseball by sailors in a maritime journal would make baseball a nautical term... The two Norcross papers are primary sources for their American opinion polls.  Glasner Edwards and Rawson probably counts as a primary source too, since they quote without evaluation another, then unpublished, American opinion poll, also by Norcross.  None of this has been replicated by third parties, or outside of the US.  AJRG (talk) 18:37, 30 May 2011 (UTC
 * I'm not aware that maritime journals have anything relevant to say about baseball. On the other hand in this case we have a range of articles in relevant journals all of which come to similar views.  Your commentary on those content of the journals is not relevant unless and until you can produce some reliable sources which support you.  If you did then the material might be relevant, but it would not challenge the fact that these articles represent a body of scientific criticism.  Also you are very confused on primary sources;  these are scientists drawing conclusions about NLP in reliable courses - that is exactly what Wikipedia looks for.    Otherwise we have a section with the title "criticism" and with content that comes from reliable sources in the scientific community.  Those various commentators, in reviewed articles are using the term pseudo-science.  Its perverse to try and claim that this is not scientific criticism.  -- Snowded  TALK  04:27, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
 * For heaven's sake go and read the policy before you pontificate about it. Primary sources are very close to an event, often accounts written by people who are directly involved, offering an insider's view of an event, a period of history, a work of art, a political decision, and so on. An account of a traffic accident written by a witness is a primary source of information about the accident; similarly, a scientific paper documenting a new experiment is a primary source on the outcome of that experiment. Historical documents such as diaries are primary sources. (3. Further examples include ... tabulated results of surveys or questionnaires; ... )  AJRG (talk) 20:47, 31 May 2011 (UTC)


 * The paper you added to the NLP and Science article is a primary source . Secondary sources are built on primary sources.  Primary sources would be for example Sharpley and Witkowski referred in their reviews that concluded the NLP is untestable/pseudo-science/discredited.   Primaries and reviews would also be ones that the expert panel of psychology professionals would know of to say that NLP is discredited. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:07, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Lam, your comment proves that you haven't understood the policy - primary sources can only be used in specific ways (which I complied with in the case you quote). AJRG (talk) 14:07, 1 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Agreed. Also AJRG I note that you do not challenge that those sources are scientific.  There is also a huge difference between a witness report of a traffic accident and a reputable profession writing up the results of an experiment in a peer reviewed journal.  Its like your maritime example, a wholly inappropriate and misleading comparison.  I further note that you have been citing lists of practices as evidence with no use whatsoever of reliable referred sources.  It is very very clear that the criticism here is from the scientific community.  It may be invalid (although sources would be needed to establish that) but it is scientific.  -- Snowded  TALK  04:02, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
 * A Delphi poll doesn't count as peer review. It's just an opinion poll.  AJRG (talk) 14:07, 1 June 2011 (UTC)


 * The individuals represented in the literature of (Norcross et al, Beyerstein, Devilly, Drenth etc) are most often characterized as “experts”, “doctoral level mental health professionals”, “trained psychologists” and “behavioral scientists”. The perspectives followed in those sources are primarily science and scientific skepticism. It goes beyond question of empirical validity, to the face validity of concepts (or misconcepts), and identifies pseudo-scientific characteristics of neuro-linguistic programming. "Academic" is too narrow and imposes the unsourced opinion of the criticisms being just rhetoric or just impractical.  Accurate straightforward titles could be “Pseudo-science”, “Pseudo-scientific characteristics of NLP”, “Criticism from Professional Psychologists” "Criticism from Psychology Experts", "Criticism from Behavioral Scientists”, or “Scientific Criticism”  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:05, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Lam, you're still trying to imply that this is a majority view. It's a significant minority view, no more.  AJRG (talk) 14:07, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I think of those that "Scientific Criticism" is the best and the most common in wikipedia. Pseudo-science is also acceptable.  -- Snowded  TALK  04:02, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Claiming that something isn't science is (necessarily) not a scientific criticism - its a philosophical one. AJRG (talk) 14:07, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
 * When made by scientists it clearly is. On what planet is a criticism by several scientists not scientific criticism?   Your significant minority point was discussed before - at the moment the only sources we have make the various criticism.  Despite weeks of repeated requests the best you have achieved is a few primary sources that list it as a therapy. If you can't do better than that I am going to revert the title to scientific criticism per this discussion.  If you are unhappy you can take it to a forum -- Snowded  TALK  16:58, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I struggle to believe that you're claiming ignorance of meta-level reasoning. A claim that something isn't science necessarily exists at a meta-level outside of science. It cannot be part of science, so the adjective scientific does not correctly describe it.  As for your significant minority point, Lam has found a handful of reliable sources that use the term "Pseudo-science".  If you could be bothered to check the talk page archive, there are many more reliable sources which do not.  AJRG (talk) 21:03, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
 * A body of references from scientists have deemed NLP to be pseudo-science. It is thus a scientific criticism.   Of course you might want to tell those scientists that they fail to understand meta-level reasoning and you are of course entitled to such an opinion.  However for our purposes here your view of the legitimacy of their use of language is hardly relevant.   The exclusion of something from the definition of science, is the legitimate province of scientists.   Lam has found a body of material that criticises etc.  Todate you have not provided a reliable source which challenges that conclusion.  I have checked the talk page archive, and I see that I have replied on each "reference' you have produced. Most were to lists of use which is not the same thing.  -- Snowded  TALK  22:05, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Until you can produce a reliable source saying that a claim of pseudo-science is a scientific criticism, you're indulging in OR. AJRG (talk) 09:02, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I've been very patient over this but that response is comical. A section headed scientific criticism has to contain criticism by scientists, what language they use is their affair. -- Snowded  TALK  09:08, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
 * That's your opinion. WP:V applies.  AJRG (talk) 09:15, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Its an absurdist position to say that language used by scientists has to be independently verified as being "scientific", when that language comes from reliable sources.  There may  (I think this is silly but I am willing to try it) a possible way forward if we title the section "Scientific Criticism" and have a following section which is titled "Pseudoscience" containing all the material which uses that word.  If that is not acceptable then please be very clear which policy you think is violated if we call this section "Scientific Criticism".  If you then insist on the position it can be taken to the appropriate forum -- Snowded  TALK  09:26, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
 * If the pseudoscience material is moved to its own section, the scare quotes may not be necessary. The title should be Pseudoscience claim, because it is not the majority view.  AJRG (talk) 14:06, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You have sources which say it is not pseudo science? You have a source which says it is not the majority view?  Does anything in the article make a statement about its majority/minority status? -- Snowded  TALK  14:11, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Take the trouble to review the large number of references in the talk page archive. For a recent example see here.  AJRG (talk) 14:34, 2 June 2011 (UTC)

If you check out the abstract that one is a critical article it doesn't make a statement about pseudo-science or the majority status of any claim. Otherwise I have reviewed and commented on all articles you have brought to this discussion and none of them provide a counter position. Its evident you just want to draw this out so that you can find a way to reduce the impact of any criticism so please simply state which wikipedia policy you are relying to to sypport your statement that pseudo-science is not a legitimate term to be used in a referenced section on scientific criticism. We can then take it to the appropriate forum -- Snowded TALK  14:42, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You're not going to find many reliable sources saying that the moon isn't made of cheese. I gave you an example of NLP being treated as science, and being criticized in that context.  The talk page archives go back a long way, and many other people have provided sources.  The burden is on you to produce a reliable source saying that a claim of pseudo-science is a scientific criticism, otherwise it's OR.  AJRG (talk) 20:29, 2 June 2011 (UTC)


 * AJRG, you failed to make clear link to policy. Here it is:  WP:OR.  The sources for scientific criticism are extremely strong.  Your objection is very sad and pitiful. Sorry NLP is so criticized. Please read the policy carefully and try to cope. Editing as a practitioner or proponent will be very hard and focus on the criticism section of a pseudoscience will uncover more critical information through time. Scientific Criticisms is both reasonable and suitable as a title. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:19, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Lam, please abide by WP:NPA. You haven't produced any reliable sources for a claim of pseudoscience being scientific criticism.  WP:V applies.  AJRG (talk) 07:55, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
 * “Academic” clearly involves imposing the unsourced opinion about practicality of the criticisms. “Pseudoscience” is acceptable as a compromise. It focuses more on content rather than the critics.  Otherwise Scientific Criticism title is fine. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 02:15, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I've no problem with a separate section on the pseudo-science claim, which is clearly notable. It can't, however, contain anything that doesn't explicitly use the term pseudo-science, because that would be OR.  AJRG (talk) 09:02, 2 June 2011 (UTC)


 * The section involves information that has the explicit mention of pseudo-science, including the Norcross et al sources. Pseudo-science is acceptable as a title. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:19, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Lam, as I said above, I'm fine with Pseudoscience claim as a section title, but you can't use the Norcross Delphi polls to support it. AJRG (talk) 07:55, 3 June 2011 (UTC)

Discredit is an issue within and related to pseudoscience issue. Norcross states that it is important to know what is discredited, or doesn't work according to consensus, beyond the issue of pseudoscience. Witkowski's paper states NLP is pseudoscience and then goes further to quote Norcross et al. The pseudoscience title is fine and Norcross is included, unless you can contact Norcross, Witkowski and others to make them retract their comments about pseudo-science. More can be added from Roderique Davies and others on discredit of the NLP concepts, relation to other discredited developments, new age etc. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 09:22, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't think you can support that position from the sources you have. Let's examine the exact quotes you're relying on, one by one.  AJRG (talk) 11:20, 3 June 2011 (UTC)


 * The quotes were already examined in previous discussion. Sorry, AJRG, but your edit is unacceptable. For over a week you have failed to provide anything substantial to support your claim, and your edit just imposes your opinion about pseudoscience and rhetoric.  The edit is reverted to the original (Scientific Criticism).  If you want to discuss quotes more, do that in a section that deals with the specific issue in question. If you have further objection, take it to a suitable forum. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:44, 4 June 2011 (UTC)
 * The claim above (outdented) hasn't been substantiated. Please do so per WP:V.  AJRG (talk) 08:59, 4 June 2011 (UTC)


 * AJRG. The onus is on you to substantiate your edit. After a week, you have not done that. So it is reverted back to "Scientific Criticism" Lam Kin Keung (talk) 07:21, 5 June 2011 (UTC)


 * On what basis did you select your sources for this section? It seems highly selective. On what basis did you decide "scientific criticism" was most appropriate for the subtitle? How can we work toward some sort of balance here? --122.108.140.210 (talk) 14:40, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

Proposed lede paragraph
Hello. As mentioned on the above, here is proposed lede paragraph Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:50, 16 May 2011 (UTC):

NLP has been largely ignored by conventional social science in part due to a lack of professional credibility and insufficient empirical evidence to substantiate its effectiveness. NLP appears to have minimal impact on mainstream academic psychology or mainstream psychotherapy and counselling. NLP is seen from certain scientific, linguistic, and neuroscience perspectives as having a pseudo-scientific name, concepts, terminology, and characteristics. NLP is used as an example of pseudo-science for facilitating the teaching of scientific literacy at the professional and university level. NLP also appears on consensus based expert-derived lists of discredited therapies and interventions.


 * This seems to ignore the role of NLP in the British NHS, for example here, here and here.  AJRG (talk) 09:41, 16 May 2011 (UTC)


 * That might be relevant or included in the statement: "NLP has been adopted by some private psychotherapists, including hypnotherapists, who undertake training in NLP and apply it to their practice. NLP has gained popularity within management training, life coaching,[15] and the self-help industry.[16]". They are different issues. It is relevant more to the earlier paragraphs in the lede. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 10:06, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Also here. AJRG (talk) 10:08, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Also AJRG two of those references are non-clinical and many management courses from many theoretical backgrounds are made available by the London Deanery and others. None of those references are third party -- Snowded  TALK  05:54, 17 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Since you chose to add your comment here, I should point out that The British Journal of Radiology is the official peer-reviewed monthly research journal of The British Institute of Radiology... AJRG (talk) 15:37, 17 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Where else would I add them? You initially provided three references; two Yorkshire and Humber and London Deanery are non-clinical offerings of training and the Newham one says that NLPis one service in the Harmony Family Centre.   You then added a 2006-7 survey of 50 patients which has an "if repeated qualification" in the BIR.  None of those are third party comparative studies.-- Snowded  TALK  15:57, 17 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Why the obsession with third party studies that add no new research? AJRG (talk) 20:32, 17 May 2011 (UTC)
 * 'cause that is the way wikipedia works. -- Snowded  TALK  20:57, 17 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Please explicitly quote the policy you're relying on. AJRG (talk) 13:25, 18 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh for goodness sake, this is borderline prevarication. To make a statement about a range of research we need a reliable third party source which has done that comparison.  You are attempting to find odd quotes (only one of which is an RS) and then synthesis a conclusion.  WP:OR and   WP:RS read, think ...  -- Snowded  TALK  17:20, 18 May 2011 (UTC)
 * You can't quote a policy then? AJRG (talk) 20:53, 18 May 2011 (UTC)
 * It appears that even Lam Kin Keung relies on finding odd quotes and opinions and then follows with unjustified generalizations/conclusions. We need to be clear when we are making scientific statements and when we are stating beliefs and opinions. This applies those who are dismissive (e.g. skeptics) or supportive of NLP. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 16:32, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
 * So far he has produced a broad range of sources and summarised them well. So far you have only expressed your opinion but provided no sources -- Snowded  TALK  16:33, 19 May 2011 (UTC)

I noticed there is the referencing in the lede of the article. So some is added above and some changes that are fitting the references. Do you have any more suggestions on this paragraph? Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:33, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
 * I think they are a legacy of conflict, in terms of style given that the lede summarises the text it would not need references -- Snowded TALK  05:30, 20 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Ok. That will make it easier to the reader. The first sentence might not be representative of literature. In what sense is the NLP popular? Popular psychology? Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:37, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Well there a plethora of self-help books, training courses, certification schemes etc - mainly in the leadership/communication/management fields.  Its not popular in psychology as we  have established.  -- Snowded  TALK  05:40, 20 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Ok, would the above change represent it in the context better? Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:59, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
 * OK by me, lets see what others think -- Snowded TALK  06:37, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
 * What's the source for "exists mainly in popular psychology" - is there any RS support for this? AJRG (talk) 10:26, 20 May 2011 (UTC)


 * It is not a quote. I just made this information into the softer form:


 * “Not surprisingly, assumed but now discredited left right brain differences top the list of NLP’s dubious roots. Its mental typologies, and the remedies for personal shortcomings derived from them, are not to be found in any reputable psychology textbook.” Della Sala (2007) Page xxi
 * “However, controlled studies shed such a poor light on the practice, and those promoting the intervention made such extreme and changeable claims that researchers began to question the wisdom of researching the area further” (Devilly 2005)
 * Lam Kin Keung (talk) 10:47, 20 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Its normal for the lede to summarise the article. So far all of the evidence is that it is discredited in reputable psychology, and despite several requests no counter references have been provided.  In those circumstances its fairly generous to say its present in popular psychology, it might be more accurate to say that its dominant residual practice is in management/leadership/personal development -- Snowded  TALK  10:51, 20 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Ok that sounds fine. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:41, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
 * It's not fine - it's pure POV. For the use of NLP in European Psychotherapy see Ginger S, Legal status and training of psychotherapists in Europe, European Journal of Psychotherapy & Counselling, Volume 11, Issue 2, 2009, Pages 173 - 182  AJRG (talk) 07:54, 21 May 2011 (UTC)


 * The Ginger reference makes brief mention of "NLP". It does not mention the "neuro-linguistic programming" specifically. It says above the listing "It is therefore difficult to globally enumerate the relative importance of these diverse trends, but we have attempted an approximate estimation". The paragraph above should be summary of the criticisms.  This longitudinal statement comes from critic Devilly (2005): "NLP is no longer as prevalent as it was in the 1970s or 1980s, but is still practiced in small pockets of the human resource community". I make suggestion that Devilly could appear in the main part of article.  To make simple the paragraph above, the first part of the statement could be removed.  See how it is looking.  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 06:10, 22 May 2011 (UTC)

To be blunt, and purely as a matter of personal opinion, I find the level of ignorance posing as informed opinion amongst critics of whatever it is they think of as "NLP" to be deeply unfortunate. Let me give an example.

Lam Kin Keung has repeatedly referred to Norcross as a reliable source of information on "NLP". But in doing so he has apparently overlooked all of the information that throws the validity of the Norcross et al's polls into serious doubt:


 * Norcross et al seem to have had little knowledge of some (most?) of the "treatments" they were asking people to rate. For example, in the report on their 2006 poll, whilst bemoaning the fact that "37% [of their "experts"] were not familiar with Erhard Seminar Training" (page 521), they nevertheless included in their list of 'treatments' "Erhard Seminar Training for Treatment of mental/behavioral Disorders".  And this despite the fact that Werner Erhard sold his business over 20 years earlier to the organisers of the Landmark Forum, now known as the Landmark Education Corporation (LEC).

(Three guesses as to which organisation isn't included in the list.)


 * The value of the results are highly dubious in light of the wording of the survey: "Discredited Psychological Treatments and Tests", along with the wording in the rating scale:

"1 = not at all discredited, 2 = unlikely discredited, 3 = possibly discredited, 4 = probably discredited, and 5 = certainly discredited."

(Norcross et al, 2006, page 516)

Even a high school student of psychology is likely to know the effects of couching questions in a particular form of words. In this case it seems very likely that the frequent use of the word "discredited" introduced serious bias into the test results. It should be noted that whilst the mythical "NLP treatment" was rated 3.57 in round 1 and 3.87 in round 2 (see below), the lowest scores for any form of treatment were 3.32 in round 1 and 3.26 in round 2.


 * The value of the results is further thrown into doubt - as even the authors admit - by the limited number of tresponses.

From an initial mail out of 209 questionnaires, only 138 were returned, of which a further 37 had to be discarded (for various reasons - page 516). On the second round (see next point) the questionnaires were mailed to the 101 respondents from round one, but only 85 responded - just 40.7%. This surely suggests that a majority of the people the researchers thought of as people whose opinions mattered didn't think the poll was particularly worthwhile.

(In the second poll (2009), 250 questionnaires went out, 113 came back, but 30 were blank. In the second round 75 questionnaires went out, but only 57 came back - 22.8%  Hardly a vote of confidence?)


 * There is no indication in the articles covering the two polls which would suggest that there was any attempt to standardize the ratings. That is to say, there was no set of descriptions which would indicate what exactly was meant by, for example, "Neuro-Linguistic Programming (NLP) for treatment of mental/behavuioral disorder".  So what on earth did those who ranked this mythical subject actually think they were rating?  Did they all believe in the same myth?  Who knows - nether Norcross nor Lam Kim Keung know the answer, but we are asked to accept this as valid evidence regarding "NLP"!

Why on earth should we accept any opinion that appears in such a thoroughly questionable exercise?
 * The very nature of the two part poll reeks of peer pressure. In brief, in the second round (using exactly the same questionnaire), raters were sent the processed results of round 1 along with the questionnaire.  This is easily recognizable way of implying that those taking part in the second stage of an activity should try to conform to the results in round 1.  Coming in combination with the emphasis on the word "discredited" it surely comes as no surprise that only three results in round 2 were lower than for the same item in round 1, whilst the rest went up by anything from 0.03 to 0.35.

See here for more details of both poll reports: http://www.bradburyac.mistral.co.uk/norcross.html

Likewise, why should we value Devilly's opinion? He took his (flawed) description of the V/KD technique (which certainly doesn't include the "whole" of the FoNLP) from an unofficial source - i.e. from someone who most certainly wasn't an expert on the subject - and gave it barely 12 lines of text on a two-column page. When I corresponded with Dr Devilly (by e-mail) he seemed to have difficulty remembering anything about "NLP" or the FoNLP. Again, hardly the mark of someone who was/is well-informed about the subject.

See here for more details on Devilly's article: http://www.bradburyac.mistral.co.uk/devilly.html

So, whilst I accept without question Lam Kin Keung's assertion that various statements have been made about "NLP" being a pseudo-science, it seems that he really needs to get to grips with the fact that ANYONE can say ANYTHING. Even when they have virtually no idea what they are talking about. Which is a pretty crucial difference, though certain critics consistently try to brush it under the carpet or smother it with red herrings.

Yet another example cited in this discussion is Robert "Skeptic's Dictionary" Carroll. In his book Carroll gives more space to NLP than to any other subject. And it is mainly nonsense - his PhD notwithstanding. He fails to provide an accurate definition of "NLP", he misdates it's creation, he misplaces it's geographical point of origin, he wrongly states that it is a "large group" programme, he wrongly equates it with est (Erhard Seminar Training), etc. And so on and so forth. And that's in just the first few lines of the fantasised description!

For a more detailed description see: http://www.bradbury.mistral.co.uk/nlpfax27.htm

In this context, journal articles are likewise mainly erroneous. That statement often brings scornful dismisal because it seems unlikely that so many academics would make such errors. So let's consider the article by Dr Willem Levelt of the Max Planck Institute of Psycholinguistics in Nijmegen, Holland, for example.

At the start of his critical article Dr Levelt claims that he has read a whole "stack of books" on the subject - yet he cannot distinguish betweem "neuro-linguistics" (a term coined by Alfred "General Semantic" Korzybski at least as far back as 1936 (thirty-six) and "neurolinguistics" (no hyphen), a term related to the follow-on from aphaseology, the study of the effects of damage to the brain on a person's understanding and use of language. This is an interesting oversight since the term "neurolinguistics" is generally thought to have been formally introduced as late as 1985 by Harry Whitiker when he founded the Journal of Neurolinguistics - about 11 or 12 years after Bandler decided to use the name "Neuro-Linguistic Programming" and over 40 years after Korzyski coined the term.

By and large, Levelt's article hammers on about this confusion of "neuro-linguistics" and "neurolinguistics", or merely rehashes previous criticisms.

But there is another, very simple reason why so many articles by academics are in error - the academics aren't making the mistakes themselves, they are simply copying from each other - errors and all. And since they have done so little research they don't even realize that the errors are there.

One example of how these errors originate can be found in the case from 1977 when PhD candidate Lee F. Owens submitted a thesis in which he claimed that "NLP" suggested three ways of determining a person's representational systems - eye movements, verbalizations and self-report. And even in that brief description we already have two crucial errors.


 * 1) The five "representational systems" referred to in NLP-related sources are essentially the five basic senses - sight, hearing, etc.  So there is absolutely no need to investigate what a person's representational systems might be.
 * 2) In fact Owens confused plain "representational ststems" with the "preferred representational system" concept, and his failure to find agreement between the alleged three methods of assessment says nothing about any aspect of the genuine FoNLP (field of NLP).

Nevertheless, numerous researchers, as well as reviewers such as Sharpley and Heap, took the easy option of approximating Owens' experiment and (inevitably) reporting the "three ways" error as though it were a reflection on the authentic FoNLP.

But note - no one ever produced a quote from anything by Bandler and Grinder in which they made the "three ways" claim; and neither (as far as I know) has anyone referred to the genuine claim which appeared in both The Structure of Magic II (1976) and Frogs into Princes (1979), i.e. "In order to identify which of the representational systems is the client's most highly valued [i.e. preferred] one, the therapist needs only to pay attention to the predicates which the client uses to describe his experience". (The Structure of Magic II, page 9).

And so the errors have been perpetuated, over and over again, seldom straying beyond the bounds of the "eye movements, PRS, predicate matching triangle" which so many critics seem to imagine constitute pretty much the whole of "NLP". It's a bit like some of the contributions on this page. The same errors are posted in a discussion and then unquestioningly treated as bona fide evidence. Good grief!

It is also interesting to note that Snowded, and others - along with Witkowski, of course - are still pushing the tired old "peer reviewed journels are totally reliable instriuments of truth" myth, though my point about the conflicting articles which appeared in the Journal of Counseling Psychology in the early-mid 1980s seems to have overlooked.

If we accepted this claim then we would have to syuppose that NOTHING is "true" unless it has first been confirned in some reputable peer reviewed journal. A likely story :))))

Let me put the point a little more forcefully, then, by quoting the words of a genuine expert on the subject:

"The mistake, of course, is to have thought that peer review was any more than a crude means of discovering the acceptability — not the validity — of a new finding. Editors and scientists alike insist on the pivotal importance of peer review.  We portray peer review to the public as a quasi-sacred process that helps to make science our most objective truth teller.  But we know that the system of peer review is biased, unjust, unaccountable, incomplete, easily fixed, often insulting, usually ignorant, occasionally foolish, and frequently wrong."

(Horton, R. (2000), Genetically modified food: consternation, confusion, and crack-up. In the Medical Journal of Australia, No. 172, pages 148–9.)

Richard Horton, FRCP FMedSci, for those not familiar with the name, is editor-in-chief of the internationally renowned, peer reviewed British medical journal The Lancet.

AndyzB (talk) 11:18, 20 May 2011 (UTC)


 * This might be relevant for the fourth of the paragraphs of the criticism section "Critics are silenced with the retort that one must be part of the movement to make a sound judgment." Drenth, 1999 page 235 Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:41, 21 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Not a bad idea as its a common pseudo-science defense. I had the same when I blogged on the subject, the strong statement that until I had been trained I could not comment.  Otherwise Andyz you are arguing a position not using sources.   That has no validity in wikipedia.  You may think that is wrong and you may also (along with others) not like the peer review process.  However that is how wikipedia works.  If you want to challenge that then the place is other than this article.  Please also note that wikipedia also requires you to use people's user name failure to do so can result in a block -- Snowded  TALK  06:56, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Snowded, it would really help if you actually read the policies you wave around. Posting another editor's personal information is harassment, unless that person voluntarily had posted his or her own information, or links to such information, on Wikipedia. You've made your identity very clear, so this cannot possibly apply in your case.  AJRG (talk) 07:47, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
 * I did read it, carefully, and its come up before in related discussions. The fact that its easy to find out who I am in real life (as it is for AndyzB does not justify using real names in discussions.  Given that it is easy to find its not a blocking offense per se on a first instance, but persistent use might be, especially when the error has been pointed out.  -- Snowded  TALK  10:20, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Squid ink. You don't want to engage with AndyzB's points, so you're creating a distraction.  AJRG (talk) 12:25, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Clear water - I have no intention with engaging with AndyzBs points as they are either his opinion, original research or arguments against policy.  If he can produce some reliable sources then we can look at - the same point I have made to you several times.   I have told him to use by user name not my real name per wikipedia policy -- Snowded  TALK  12:32, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Still creating a distraction, and no sign of an apology for wrongly threatening to get AndyzB blocked. Your position would have more credibility if you could be bothered to look up your own references.  Perhaps you'd be good enough to respond to the European Journal of Psychotherapy & Counselling reference I gave above...  AJRG (talk) 14:17, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
 * The block threat was in violation of WP:Civility and should be withdrawn. It appears to me that Snowded's throwing around of Wikipedia' polices that have no bearing on the point in hand deserves the censure of this encyclopaedia. An apology to AndyzB would be appropriate in this case, as well as the recognition of the undoubted validity of the points that he has recently made. This sort of obfuscation and obstruction impedes the production of an effective encyclopaedia. Earlymorningcans (talk) 18:14, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
 * You guys really need to read up on the way Wikipedia works. AndyzB has made a series of criticisms of material in referenced papers, and he has criticised the whole concept of refereed papers having authority.  He has also referenced and partially reproduced material from from his own web site which acts as a clearing house of sorts for NLP material.  All of that may or may not be valid, however it has no place here unless and until he gets those criticism published in a reliable source.  At that point and at that point only do the criticisms come into play, and even then WP:WEIGHT would apply.  AJRG,  I thought I had been through all your references, looking back I went through 4 but you have quoted another without a link.  I have found it and read it.  NLP is listed one of a list of "Humanistic or Existential approaches" with no other commentary.  I see no reason to dispute that, or that it is used within the NHS and elsewhere.  That is already covered in the article.  Nothing in that article (or source referenced by you) has addressed the issue of pseudo-science.  Please remember that we have a section on criticism, and the lede needs to reflect that section as well as other uses.  Easrlymorning, I think I'll wait for the checkuser to run on your account...  -- Snowded  TALK  21:32, 21 May 2011 (UTC)

Snowded, if we're honest, your entire approach to the job of editor does nothing but violate a primary tenet of Wikipedia - that information should be presented a neutral point of view. You, on the other hand, do whatever you can to expunge anything that contradicts your own campaign - conducted not only here but all over the Internet - to discredit whatever it is you think of as "NLP". Since when does Wikipedia exclude any information that hasn't been published in what YOU call "a reliable source"? What is actually required is that material be suitably referenced so that readers can check FOR THEMSELVES whether the information is likely to be reliable. Your behaviour, in complete contrast, violates visitors' right, as intelligent adults, to see both sides of the "argument" and make their own decisions.

I am therefore formally requesting that you provide me with information, or point me to information, on how I can complain about your totally biased activities as an editor which, in my opinion, are more likely to bring Wikipedia into disrepute than serve it's declared aims. AndyzB (talk) 05:54, 22 May 2011 (UTC) Thank you.
 * I put a welcome message up on your use page to help you navigate your way around here. I suggest you read it and in particular WP:RS; your statements above indicate that you haven't read either.  The neutral point of view principle does not mean that we have to be balanced between a position that is supported by reliable sources and one which isn't.  IF you read up on the reliable sources policy you will see this.  As to complaints you can go the reliable sources notice board to get a third party opinion or you can raise the subject at WP:ANI.   I am more than happy for my editing history on this article to be put under scrutiny, but you might want to read WP:Boomerang and/or get some advise from more experienced editors before you go down that route.  I'd also check your facts carefully.  I have mentioned NLP less than a dozen times coming up for five years of nearly daily blogging and maybe a few tweets.  Its something I rarely encounter in the world of management, and never in academic circles and that has been the case for the best part of a decade -- Snowded  TALK  06:11, 22 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Hello AndyzB. Please feel welcome to add constructive editing in collaboration.  Also please be of understanding about Wikipedia and read the articles posted to you. Some information on Wikipedia may be you find objectionable.  If you make big changes to cope on the article you may be reverted. That is regular. Big changes are discussed here first. Some new editors here may have an NLP practice. That is ok if they declare it and they offer the helpful suggestion. Science views on NLP are very unfortunate and negative. Sorry. They are the relevant major views.  Some of the information you showed today might be useful. Welcome to discuss. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 07:23, 22 May 2011 (UTC)

Lam Kin Keung - please see the end of these comments:

Firstly, I'm not particularly surprised by the tone and content of your response, Snowded. But FWIW, threats have never impressed me much, especially when it looks very much like you are trying to deter me from using safeguards deliberately built-in to Wikipedia - another violation of WP:Civility? ;)

And who determines what is "reliable", Snowded? (I'll come back to this later on.)

As to your mentions of NLP, those that appear under your own name may be relatively rare, though you were, as you know, advertising your actions in regard to this page less than a week ago. I'll say no more even though that material was accompanied by both your user name and your real name. I wonder what, in your mind, is the difference between here and there? And are you seriously claiming that you have only discussed your views on "NLP" and "pseudoscience" on your blog, twitter and Wikipedia? You do surprise me.

As for not encountering NLP-related techniques in "the world of management" - which I presume includes management training? - you cannot be serious. Various NLP-related techniques are being taught to managers all around the world, and (going by my personal experience) have been since at least the mid-1980s. Only to avoid pointless discussions with people like yourself they often aren't described as "NLP". One good example would be what NLPers call "pacing", in particular "mirroring", which now turns up regularly as "mimicry". There was an interesting article on persuasion which included a section on mimicry and institutes where it is being researched (Duke University, Durham, USA; INSEAD business school in Fontainebleau, France, etc.) in NewScientist magazine: Jones & Motluk, 8 Ways to Get Exactly What You Want (Section 1: Be A Mimic), Issue 2655, May 7, 2008).

Later on in the same article (section 4) there is a discussion of "framing" - which is closely akin to what NLPers refer to as "reframing".

And please note, Snowded, I am NOT, repeat NOT, claiming that the researchers originally got their ideas from an NLP-related source. All I'm saying is that the NLP-related techniques and the descriptions in the article suggest (regardless of the original sources) that the authors of the article and the co-creators of NLP are all talking about the same things.

Having said that, this does, by implication, offer mainstream support for the validity of the relevant NLP-related techniques. And it's no use saying that doesn't matter because it may have been the co-creators of NLP and the FoNLP who did the borrowing, because your central claim consists of nothing more (correct me if I'm wrong) that NLP is pseudoscience because it claims to be based on scientific principles. (Always remembering that this is itself a logical fallacy - reification - because "NLP" is a specific modelling technique and not a sentient being and therefore cannot "claim" anything.) In the first place Bandler, Grinder and Pucelik have always been entirely open about where they got many of their ideas. And in the second place, if borrowing a technique meant it was no longer valid then the NLP-related technique of "anchoring" would suddenly become invalid just because it was "borrowed" and slightly adapted, from the "conditioned reflex" process identified and studied by Pavlov. And even though we all experience "anchoring" every day, by smells, sounds, etc.

By the way, that seems to be three NLP-related concepts/techniques which have been validated by mainstream researchers. But don't worry, I'm building a list, and that's just a beginning.

Just one other thought: Since neither Bandler nor Grinder, singly or jointly, had an article published in a peer reviewed journal (I don't know about Pucelik), by Snowded's logic they do not have the right to comment on the field of study which they created!

By the way, I wonder just how rigid your personal policy is, Snowded. I have had a fairly lengthy article published in Michael Heap's journal "The Skeptical Intelligencer", Vol. 11, 2008, in response to his three main articles, so it covered most of the points I would make here if you didn't keep reverting them (see http://www.bradburyac.mistral.co.uk/response.html). My book "Develop Your NLP Skills" (originally entitled "NLP for Business Success") was first published in January 1997 by a reputable publishing house specialising in business books - Kogan Page, It went through 4 editions and was translated into at least 15 languages, before I withdrew it from publication earlier this year. Wherever possible I have submitted my evaluations of the academic criticisms to the original author(s) for them to correct any mistakes or misinterpretations which I might have been guilty of. So far the only corrections I have been asked to make were in relation to (1) a Professor who is in fact fully tenured, though the entry on the university website said she was still only an associate professor; and (2) the information from members of the team behind the Druckman and Swets report (1988) that the actual report on "NLP" had been written by just one person - the sub committee chairman - without being vetted by the rest of the team.

Not one item of information regarding the contents of my critiques has been corrected due to author feedback, though I have made both of the corrections to the author details that were asked for.

But according to Snowded none of that qualifies me to make edits of the highly one-sided material HE has entered. Even though I have no requirement that anything be removed, only that some counterbalancing information be introduced so that readers can judge for themselves what the so-called "scientific evidence" is really worth.

Hmmm. I wonder what that tells us about the NPOV rule as applied to this page?

AndyzB (talk) 09:23, 22 May 2011 (UTC)


 * AndyzB, keep on fighting the good fight for the sake of this encyclopaedia. In my opinion, you should not hesitate to report these wanton contraventions of Wikipedia policy (including, but not limited to, WP:NPOV, WP:Censor, WP:Civility, WP:IRS and WP:V) by Snowded to the administrators' notice board. As a latecomer to this dispute, I feel reticent about reporting it myself, but will be happy to support you in your patient, temperate and peaceful attempts to resolve this dispute in accordance with Wikipedia policy. Earlymorningcans (talk) 10:01, 22 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Hello AndyzB. Norcross (2006 p515) states Crazy Therapies as a source that covers “pseudoscientific, unvalidated, or “quack” psychotherapies”.  There is the consistency of view between the critical sources on these matters. Concerning your view on claims to science vs pseudoscience, it is view of critics that NLP/proponents make claims to science. However, but your view on NLP=not therapy is something I read before somewhere.  Do you have the reliable sources in this matter?  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 10:40, 22 May 2011 (UTC)


 * I've only just chanced upon this discussion but further comments further up this talk page such as: "You are unlikely to get any changes to this article - Snowded does not have a NPOV and will revert anything you do to make the article more neutral. I've tried to make changes in the past but, in the end I've got better things to do with my time than argue with a person who doesn't get what NPOV. The mere fact that he describes getting trained in NLP as 'wasting money' shows, I think, that he does not approach this topic with an open mind." - make it quite clear that the consensus of the wikipedia community is against Snowded in this instance and that perhaps we should pursue having Snowded blocked from editing on this particular page as he seems unable to retain a neutral pov. Grand High Most Supreme Hochmeister of Wikipedia and the Universe (including Ireland and Wales) 11:48, 22 May 2011 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Trumpkin (talk • contribs)


 * It is with great trepidation that I must firmly support Trumpkin (talk) in this matter. Snowded's hostility to WP:NPOV has been demonstrated time and time again on this talk page and elsewhere. I think it is time that an appropriate remedy was decided upon by a competent administrator. There is a clear consensus in support of AndyzB. Earlymorningcans (talk) 11:55, 22 May 2011 (UTC)

Ignoring for the moment our friendly neigbour hoaxers. AndyzB a few simple points: Hopefully that helps, I'm not going to respond to the various accusations you have made,  I simply encourage you to read up on the policies, then come back with sourced proposals for changes to the article. Those can be from papers you have written which have been published in professional journals. Although again there is some advice under WP:RS about referencing your own material if I remember aright that you should check out. -- Snowded TALK  17:34, 22 May 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) You are a new editor, working on a page in which you have subject matter expertise and strong beliefs, that is never an easy position.
 * 2) You really need to read up on WP:RS and WP:OR, no matter how strong your argument or experience is has no validity unless it is in a reliable third party source. This is a simple lesson that any subject matter has to learn, and its hard.  However that is the way things work around here
 * 3) If you find reliable sources to support aspects of NLP they may be relevant, but they would not counter the pseudo-science sources. Forming a conclusion from those sources as to NLP which is not in the sources if original research
 * 4) I am very serious when I say that I have seen little evidence of NLP in either the academic or client circles in which I work. 15 years ago a little more but now none.  I am not proposing to put that in the article, I simply pointed out that I have little engagement with the subject, I don't move in those circles. You made the accusation that I was campaigning all over the internet to discredit NLP, well if that was the case there would be some evidence - and under a dozen mentions in my blog over several years hardly counts.  You might also note that I carefully waited until after the new text in the criticism section was agreed before I tweeted.  I was been vary careful not to canvass.  Also you and I are free to advocate whatever positions we want off wiki, as long as when we edit here we do so in accordance with the rules.
 * 5) Bandler and/or Grinder can be used as an authority for what they have been created (again see WP:RS) even if they have no papers in refereed journals (although that is telling if true). If you check elsewhere we can use the web site of a political party as a RS for what they say about themselves, but we cannot use it to make definitive statements about that party's political position, for that we need those good old reliable third party sources.
 * 6) Lam Kin Keung (who has done most of the work here to acknowledge the effort) has suggested you find some third party sources that would support the position you want to take. I've said the same thing.  No editor regardless of what they think of NLP is going to refuse a reliable source, but original research, your own blog as a source, these are simply not allowed.  I'm not wild about it, but its the way things are.  At least on NLP we do have sources.  On other pseudo-science part of the problem is that we have a complete absence of sources as the scientific community more or less ignores them.
 * Snowded reminding other of wp:agf, I sense a wikipedia boomerang! Grand High Most Supreme Hochmeister of Wikipedia and the Universe (including Ireland and Wales) (talk) 17:43, 22 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Trumpkin, I have warned Snowded about his most recent comment at his talk page. If he continues with this behaviour, I propose that he should be reported to the appropriate authorities without further notice. Earlymorningcans (talk) 17:51, 22 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Snowded followed me to the talk page Talk:Queen Elizabeth II's visit to the Republic of Ireland in an attempt to undermine my efforts there and I have also reminded him that wikihounding constitutes harassment under WP:HA. Grand High Most Supreme Hochmeister of Wikipedia and the Universe (including Ireland and Wales) (talk) 17:56, 22 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Note: Earlymorningcans permanently blocked as a sockpuppet -- Snowded  TALK  07:08, 23 May 2011 (UTC)

If there are no further suggestions, I suggest the paragraph above can go into the lede. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:09, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Are you paying attention? The bit about "mainstream psychotherapy and counselling" is wrong, at least in Europe where NLPt is a recognized professional modality - I've given you the journal reference.  Your last sentence also fails to distinguish between the results of a professional survey in the USA and professional practice in Europe.  AJRG (talk) 15:44, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
 * The same question could be asked of you. You have found a reference which lists NLP, but makes no commentary so your statement is original research  -- Snowded  TALK  06:19, 25 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Try reading the title as well - Legal status and training of psychotherapists in Europe. Per WP:V, for the UK see also the UKCP entry here.


 * This paragraph is to summarize the empirical and criticism sections. It is written more clearly below with the reference to Roderique-Davis, Norcross et al and Beyerstein's characterizations. Norcross et al (2006) does not limit the results to northern America. Do you have any further suggestions to make?Lam Kin Keung (talk) 04:34, 25 May 2011 (UTC)

NLP has been largely ignored by conventional social science in part due to a lack of professional credibility and insufficient empirical evidence to substantiate its effectiveness, and is characterized by critics as a fringe or cargo cult psychotherapy. NLP is seen from certain scientific, linguistic, and neuroscience perspectives as having a pseudo-scientific name, concepts, terminology, and characteristics. NLP is used as an example of pseudo-science for facilitating the teaching of scientific literacy at the professional and university level. NLP also appears on consensus based expert-derived lists of discredited therapies and interventions.

My apologies, Lam, you made a comment earlier that really did deserve an answer, not least because it made an invalid point, but has appeared in numerous places as though it constituted a complaint:

"This might be relevant for the fourth of the paragraphs of the criticism section 'Critics are silenced with the retort that one must be part of the movement to make a sound judgment'." Drenth, 1999 page 235"

The reason the comment is invalid is because, as in every example I've come across, it claims that the argument is that "one must be part of the movement to make a sound judgment". But this is certainly NOT what I said.

My point was that the critics don't know what NLP is about, NOT that they aren't NLPers.

Surely it isn't rocket science to understand that you can have accurate knowledge of a subject without wanting to have a part in it?

I'm quite interested in the Scopes Trial of 1925, but I don't have any desire to become a lawyer.

Let me give an example of my point.

Lee F. Owens claimed that "NLP" offered three ways of assessing a person's PRS - by watching their eye movements, by self-reports and by listening to their verbal predicates.

But this was plain wrong. Neither Bandler nor Grinder ever made such a claim, and Owens didn't (couldn't) produce any evidence that they had ever made such a claim. But they DID make the claim that in order to detect a person's PRS (in 1976 they were still calling it a "most highly valued representational system) one ONLY needed to listen to a person's use of verbalized predicates.

Now Owens didn't need to be an NLPer to understand that. Nor did he need to agree with anything Bandler and Grinder had said. He just needed to read the relevant books (and in 1976/1977 there still weren't many such books around, so it really wasn't a mammoth task).

And let's take this one step further.

In his 1984 article Sharpley included The Structure of Magic I, The Structure of Magic II AND Frogs into Princes in his list of references. And yet he still ignored what Bandler and Grinder had said and agreed with Owens. Moreover he observed that: "Perhaps least accurate [for determining someone's PRS] is eye movements (strongly advocated by NLP)" (page 246).

Now Sharpley obviously managed to read at least a bit of Frogs into Princes without being any kind of NLPer, or he couldn't have made the mistake I've just mentioned, namely that he looked at the diagram on page 25 (UK edition) - which was clearly labelled "Visual accessing cues for a normally organized right-handed person" - and somehow concluded (maybe he didn't actually read the text?, I don't know) that this was a guide to how to determine a person's PRS.

Which is kind of strange, because the diagram has two eye positions for "visual", two for "auditory", one for "kinesthetic" and one for "auditory digital", also known as "self-talk". It had/has NOTHING to do with determining a person's PRS. One would have thought that someone who knew that the five representational systems were visual, auditory, kinesthetic, olfactory and gustatory would have noticed that:


 * two of the labels were redundant,
 * one wasn't a representational system,
 * two representational systems were missing, and
 * the words "remembered" and "constructed" (attached to the visual and audirory labels) weren't part of the standard descriptions of any of the five representational systems.

He really didn't need to sign up as a life ling adherent to the FoNLP in order to spot the differences between his assumptions and the evidence in front of his eyes. Did he?

In fact there was absolutely no need for Sharpley to be involved with NLP to avoid these or any of his other mistakes - he just had to read the original material and get an accurate understanding.

So, no matter how Drenth's comment has been repeated, I guess it is in fact totally irrelevant. Innit?

(By the way, what did Drenth write in 1999 that you were quoting from? According to the Wiki rules, references should include sufficient information for readers to check the source being referenced.  And I'm sure you wouldn't want to violate a rule.  Now would you?)

Snowded, just one more question before I take any further action: According to you (please do correct me if I'm wrong) only "reliable" information should be included on the NLP page, and the only people who can be reliable sources on the subject of "NLP" are those who have had their work in a peer reviewed journal.

Disregarding, for the moment, my response to Lam which proves what a nonsense that is - all I would like to know is were abouts in the Wikipedia rules I can find the one you are referring to.

Thank you. AndyzB (talk) 20:23, 25 May 2011 (UTC)
 * WP:RS is very clear. Your various commentaries on the material in peer reviewed journals, while interesting are your opinions and thus class as original research.  Feel free to check that out -- Snowded  TALK  17:24, 25 May 2011 (UTC)


 * The Drenth citation is given in full in the above discussions. Regarding the issue; a main complaint by critics to pseudo-science is the critics don’t know what practitioners are talking about and practitioners don’t know what they are talking about either. It goes partly to issue of false concepts and use of obscurantic language.  Lam Kin Keung (talk) 03:20, 26 May 2011 (UTC)

Interesting.

If you quote Norcross et al's surveys (2006, 2009) - which is quite obviously "original research", and equally obviously reports on collections of OPINIONS - that's apparently OK because the two surveys appeared in peer reviewed journals. Likewise it apparently matters not one jot that both surveys were carried out so incompetently, including calling for "expert" conclusions about two "NLP treatments" which don't exist.

If I offer detailed, ptoperly reference evidence that any of your evidence is at the very least deeply flawed, then according to you, this is "original research" and therefore inadmissable. In fact you have even removed an "external link" to the relevant FAQ on my website to ensure that people can view the counter evidence which, as you well know, utterly demolishes the erstwhile validity of everything you offer as evidence.

Of course I realise that you have been beating this drum for quite some years now, but your determination to misrepresent the facts (i.e. by presenting your evidence (which is genuine) as though it were unquestionably correct and undisputed (which it most certainly isn't)), seems *to me* to utterly undermine Wikipedia's claim to be a medium for at least reasonably accurate information.

Incidentally, I notice there has been mention of dealing with other NLP-related techniques such as anchoring and future pacing.

Since there is no critical peer reviewed material on these subjects, how are you going to address these subjects?

Will you then accept comments by NLPers? And will you acknowledge that peer reviewed research has heretofor addressed NOT NLP, but just three topics out of dozens of concepts and techniques?

AndyzB (talk) 20:36, 25 May 2011 (UTC)


 * You might like to read up on how to format your comments and try to address content issues rather than constantly attacking other editors who are simply following wikipedia policies. WP:RS is very clear, Norcross etc are OK because yes they appear in peer reviewed journals.  I've told you this before, but I will repeat, that is wikipedia policy if you don't like it then this article is not the place to change it.  Comments by NLPers or anyone else for that matter are original research.  If you have a source for that final claim (only addressed three topics) then we can include it.  You claim to have presented a detailed reputable of the various sources (its not my evidence, its the evidence from those sources), well the solution is very simply go and get it published then, subject to WP:WEIGHT its valid material.   -- Snowded  TALK  20:50, 25 May 2011 (UTC)

OK, snowded - two answers to your previous messages to me:

1. With regard to WP:RS - I have read this item and I would remind you that I have already mentioned that (a) my book on NLP was continuously in print, through 4 editions and 15 or more translations, over a period of over 14 years (January 1997) until a month or two ago. The book being published by the well-known published of business books, etc. Kogan Page, in a series under the auspices of the Sunday Times. And (b) that I had a lengthy rebuttal of Dr Michael Heap's three reviews of alleged research into NLP (1988, 1989, 2008) published under the title "Neuro-Linguistic Programming: Time for an Informed Review" in Heap's own yearly magazine "The Skeptical Intelligencer" (the magazine of the Association for Skeptical Enquiry), Vol. 11, 2008, pages 14-27. You can find Heap's comment on this article on his website, and a copy of the article on mine.

So, what is it that you want to claim is "not reliable" about Kogan Page, the Sunday Times, The Skeptical Intelligencer or Dr. Michael Heap?

2. You also said: "The B&G statement about intention would clearly be notable, but needs to be directly sourced." Sorry, I'm not sure which particular statement you are referring to. If you mean in relation to NLP not being therapy both Pucelik and Grinder made their comments in face-to-face conversations. Other people will have heard the comments, but nothing was written down. Would e-mails confirming the statements be of any use here? Bandler made his comment in a radio interview last November on s Radio 4 programme, it went like this:

"Bandler: “NLP is not a form of therapy, it’s not a self-help tool – I look at NLP as an evolutionary tool and that people who are really doing NLP as opposed to people who are just using it for self-help things are the people who are exploring how to improve the educational system, they’re coming up with ways to make the best of people better. I think the best thing NLP offers is how to optimise athletes, how to optimise artists, how to get business men to function more efficiently. It does a lot of what psychotherapy was supposed to because we don’t look at people as being broken but we look at them as people who could learn if given the right tools”.

This is on page 7 of the complete transcript @ http://www.carolesimmons.com/storage/The%20Power%20to%20Persuade%20The%20Story%20of%20NLP%20Radio%204%20Documentary%2029%20November%202010.pdf You'll see that the programme name and title are in the URL.

Or were you thinking of something else?

BTW, what editors have I "attacked" at all?

I question your behaviour because of point No. 1 above. There is clearly no absolute requirement that information can ONLY be included if the author(s) have contributed to "peer reviewed journals". The requirement is reliability, and again I invite you to point out which of Kogan Page, The Sunday Times, The Skeptical Inquirer and Dr Michael Heap you regard as unreliable. That isn't an attack. It's a requirement for you to play by the rules that you keep hammering on asbout. As to attacking "other editors", WHAT "other editors"?

AndyzB (talk) 10:04, 26 May 2011 (UTC)


 * WP:INDENT Andyz, it makes life easier.  As far as I can see you have strong opinions on the various academic commentators but you have not had those views published in a peer reviewed journal.  You have had comments published with responses in Skeptical Inquirer, which look to me (happy to be corrected) as a "right to reply' type entry rather than something subject to peer review.  In respect of your book;  does it contain specific reference to the pseudo-science or other issues contained in this article?   If there is something there lets have a look at it and it may be valid. The Radio 4 transcript is interesting in terms of reporting what Bradler thinks where that is relevant to the article.  A transcript on a NLP practitioners blog is probably not a RS, but a link to the original BBC interview would be.  Reading it through I'm not sure it adds much, but more than open to suggestions.  Otherwise the advise remains, please confine your comments to content issues -- Snowded  TALK  05:47, 27 May 2011 (UTC)

This is a perfect example of your failure to operate a NPOV policy, Snowded. You include the "top level" quotes - which have already acknowledge exist, but you refuse to include anything that qualifies the reliability of those quotes.

For example, in referring to the surveys by Norcross et al you say nothing about the fact that in both surveys they cite "NLP treatments" which DON'T EXIST. Is that NPOV? Can Norcross's articles still be regarded as "reliable" when they ask their "raters" to rate non-existent treatments, an organization that ceased to exist two decades ago, etc?

You ignore the point in WP:RS that peer reviewed work is not regarded as being automatically reliable, and that you have a duty as editor to check whether the sources you use are indeed reliable. You also ignore the very specific and crucial point that Norcross et al did NOT provide a description of what they meant by any of their "labels" so that it is absolutely impossible to tell - from the articles - exactly what it was that any of the respondents was actually rating (this applies to all of the treatments, not just those where NLP is mentioned). So even if there were "NLP treatments" which corresponded to the labels we still couldn't treat the results as being reliable. In fact, Mr Snowded, you seem to have failed to verify the reliability of ANY of the research you reference, clinging simply to "was it in a peer reviewd journal"? Then you try to justify your action by constant cross-referencing: Norcross said such and such about Singer, and Witkowski said such and such about Norcross et al, etc., etc. What you fail to consider is the fact that all this cross-referencing - which does indeed take place - is not a strength, it the fatal flaw in the research, because no-one is providing evidence for any of their claims other than someone else's opinion, who based their own claims on someone else's opinion, and so on.

Now, I repeat my earlier points - whilst scholarly sources are possibly over-rated by the Wikipedia rules, it is clear that they are NOT the only basis for inclusion. They also allow for comments from people with established expertise. As for your comment about my article in Heap's magazine seems to me to throw your whole claim to be "following the rules" into serious doubt. If you think that: "You have had comments published with responses in Skeptical Inquirer" is an accurate description then I can only conclude that you have not read the article. Far from being a list of comments and responses it was a review of Heap's previous articles. This, together with shorter letters, is a standard form of published discussion in the kind of journals you place such a high value on. It was, in fact, the outcome of several months of e-mail discussion between Dr Heap and myself during which is was decided that we should each write our own current understanding of the very limited (in scope) material that Dr Heap had published in the 1980s. I would point out that although Dr Heap's magazine might not be peer reviewed, Dr Heap's reviews are (in my experience) amongst the most frequently cited references in the academic literature on "NLP", and his magazine most certainly qualifies as a reliable source in the sense that WP:RES uses the term.

By the way, if you read Witkowski's article you will find that he acknowledges that all 12 of the top universities in Poland include course time for "NLP". A growing number of UK universities are likewise going in that direction. Are you seriously suggesting that they are ALL wrong? Wikipedia users deserve a useful, NPOV article on this subject. Not the completely one-sided material that that is on offer at the moment. AndyzB (talk) 09:46, 28 May 2011 (UTC)


 * I tried to address some of the NPOV concerns. Perhaps some of the current research into NLP can be incorporated into the article to balance things out: see --122.108.140.210 (talk) 03:39, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

I'm glad to see that the deeply flawed "pseudoscience" section has been removed (or have I just caught the page before it is reverted back in?) Nevertheless, the "Academic Criticisms" section is still carrying the twin flags of bias and bigotry. Bias because only evidence which supports a negative point of view is included, with NO QUALIFICATIONS, and bigotry because I see no evidence that anyone who is allowed to contribute to the page has much idea what they are talking about.

Let me give some specific examples:

It has been claimed that only peer reviewed sources can be used, but since when has "Mother Jones' Magazine", "Anchor Point", or the Guardian newspaper been peer reviewed journals?

Bandler and Grinder are cited at least twice as saying that they can do thisd or that with NLP and hypnosis. Which is entirely true. What isn't made clear is which part of the combination is therapeutic. I do this myself, but the FoNLP elements are not therapeutic in themselves - they enhance the hypnotherapeutic technique. I don't know why this distinction is missing, but it shouldn't be.

Lum and Singer & Lalich are still included - but why? Neither of these sources were peer reviewed and Lum's entire criticism (all 7 words of it!) seems to have been based on the author's inability to understand that "Neuro-Linguistic Programming" and "neurolinguistics" might actually refer (as they do) to two very different fields of study.

see http://www.bradburyac.mistral.co.uk/singer.html and http://www.bradburyac.mistral.co.uk/lum.html

AndyzB (talk) 17:43, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

I removed the following text because it misrepresents the source. The source does not make any comparison between NLP and any other therapy. We do not know the error term and do not know the reason why Norcross did not discuss it in the paper. It just appears in the list of raw results. ... removed text: “Neuro-Linguistic Programming (NLP) for treatment of mental/behavioral disorders” was included in the study and was rated on average “3.87 (standard deviation 0.92)” a similar level of discredit as dolphin assisted therapy, equine therapy, psychosynthesis, scared straight programs, and emotional freedom technique (EFT)." If you want to include this sort of statement then find a reference to the list from a reputable EBP manual. --122.108.140.210 (talk) 00:10, 28 June 2011 (UTC)


 * 122.. You were here during the discussion. The quote comes from Witkowski (2010). The other therapies in the category are given so the reader has some idea of the meaning. Lam Kin Keung (talk) 05:50, 28 June 2011 (UTC)