Talk:Neurovascular bundle

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Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 05:10, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments on Sentence Structure
Hi, I was just looking at your article, and I just thought that you may want to go through the article and change the wording of some of the sentences since some just need the correction of verb tense. Nigist1921 (talk) 15:53, 16 October 2015 (UTC)

risk of neurovascular bundles in surgeries
While reading the article, you may want to add information as to why their locations pose risks when surgeries are conducted. You may also want to link the terms used in the article to the actual wikipedia articles on these subjects. For example there is a wikipedia page on superficial peroneal nerve that you may want to link to the word in your article. Nigist1921 (talk) 15:53, 16 October 2015 (UTC)

BIOG 1250:Comment
My one suggestion I have is to expand on "Superficial and deep neurovascular bundle". As average reader on the topic, I was confused about the role of Subclavian Artery and the Brachial Plexus in the body, as an example. Also, how do superficial and deep neurovascular differ in "both composition and function"? Perhaps adding the location(s) of Subclavian Artery and the Brachial Plexus (if they have a centralized one) would help improve this article even more. Thanks for working on this article! CDOcean (talk) 19:40, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

Addional material, references
Additional Material: This article would benefit from further discussion of n/v bundle function structure, distribution, etc.

References: The one reference to "nerve-sparing surgery" supports only one POV. Additional material from other sources may help clarify the effectiveness and down-side of the procedure.

Jimmy Hers (talk) 00:04, 1 January 2020 (UTC)