Talk:Nevada-class battleship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:10, 9 December 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:10, 9 December 2019 (UTC)
 * - can we get this done this week? I'd like to put this to bed in 2019 and next week is slightly busier ;) Parsecboy (talk) 19:06, 16 December 2019 (UTC)
 * And right after I nagged you about this, I got hit with some kind of stomach bug that had me mostly bed ridden...that'll show me, eh? Parsecboy (talk) 15:25, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
 * More like perfect timing from your wife's POV!


 * One DAB to Pacific Fleet, external links OK
 * Fixed - where was the DAB bot when you need it?
 * There's still one in the early careers section. Since it's redundant to the one in the lede, you could just get rid of the link instead.
 * Done
 * Images appropriately licensed. The infobox photo looks washed out, can you fix that?
 * I'll see what I can do
 * Alright, I darkened it a bit - see how it looks now.
 * Better, but a bit too dark, IMO. Not a big deal.
 * Tried something else, see if that looks better.
 * Link foundered in the lede
 * Done
 * In the infobox link long ton, kW, standard; link and abbreviate nautical miles. Abbreviate indicated hp. Decide on either MW or kW. Round the draft to one significant digit everywhere.
 * Should be all done
 * Missed standard displacement
 * Got it now
 * Be consistent about capitalizing Standard-type or not.
 * Fixed
 * Since the deck "thicker" deck
 * Done
 * Why "return" to steam turbines?
 * The New Yorks were both VTE
 * I'd forgotten that
 * Comported?
 * What's wrong with that?
 * Archaic term in that usage, according to my dictionary
 * I dunno that it's archaic, but I swapped it out with "aligned" anyway
 * In design section, link long ton.
 * Done
 * Copy-paste error with California.
 * I don't think that was copy-paste, I think that was me forgetting what ships were in the class
 * Was Okie given TE engines for direct comparison with turbines?
 * I don't recall Friedman saying as much
 * Need to explain /45 nomenclature
 * Added the note
 * Link elevation, flying-off platform, director
 * Done
 * Try this link instead: Flying-off platforms
 * Probably better to just turn it into a redirect to that for future use
 * They had a 3 in unclear antecedent, "The ships"?
 * Done
 * uptakes to from
 * Fixed
 * a series of rolling changes "rolling"?
 * I suppose that's not correct in this context
 * cite tag in the mod section. If covered by Friedman, remove it.
 * Fixed
 * Link to the class article for North Dakota and explain why she was scrapped before completion
 * Done
 * At some point in 1941, she was fitted with an SC air search radar. Which ship?
 * Fixed
 * Delete the Decommissioned column, kinda misleading as Okie was unavailable long before '44.
 * True
 * standard type battleships were too slow add hyphen
 * Done
 * as they were by that time the oldest battleships in service with the US Navy Incorrect. The New Yorks were older
 * Doh
 * its homeport San Pedro, California to Missing commas
 * Fixed
 * Ampersand for Prange.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:43, 18 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Done
 * A few things still to work on.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:35, 21 December 2019 (UTC)