Talk:Never Too Far/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 09:31, 5 February 2015 (UTC)


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 * For the producers in the info box, just surnames is okay because writers are written in full above.
 * Pop and R&B are unsourced and appear nowhere else in the article. So they either need to be sourced or removed.
 * There's a bit of a debate going on at the moment about the usage and application of the term singer-songwriter, so I think for the time being it would be best to write singer and songwriter.
 * I'd write that it is her first soundtrack in addition to her eighth studio album
 * in October 23 2001, → on October 23, 2001,
 * of Carey's previous single → of one of Carey's previous singles
 * "Nver Too Far" attracted → typo there
 * "Nver Too Far" attracted positive reviews from critics. → Need to say something they said to support this.
 * The single failed to make much impact on the US charts; however, it reached the top forty → The single did not make much impact on the U.S. charts; however, it did reach the top forty
 * Though having not promoted the single, Carey promoted → That doesn't make sense
 * through live performances. → Such as?
 * The song was written and produced by Carey and Jimmy Jam and Terry Lewis, and was released → Lots of "and" here
 * and was released as the second single → and it was released as the second single
 * Again, I'd write that it is her first soundtrack in addition to her eighth studio album
 * According to Chuck Taylor from Billboard Carey singing the lyrics with → This doesn't make sense, there needs to be a pause.
 * The block quote in the medley section doesn't need quotation marks because it's already indented as a block quote.
 * The chart table needs to have the Country column shaded so it's marked up properly.
 * Are there no release dates available that could go into a chart?
 * I don't think so.

On hold —  ₳aron  21:36, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
 * I think I've addressed all the issues. Alex talk page! 19:49, 7 March 2015 (UTC)