Talk:Never Too Far/Hero Medley/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk) 22:06, 8 July 2011 (UTC)


 * By the way, two of my favorite songs from Mariah Carey. I'll try my best with reviewing, however, if not satisfy with my review. I'll simply ask for a second opinion. Good luck, AJona1992 (talk) 22:06, 8 July 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm glad you enjoy them as much as me :) Sure, take your time!-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   22:20, 8 July 2011 (UTC)

Comments
"co-written and co-produced by the former and Walter Afanasieff" - why is "former" there?
 * Lead

"During this period, Carey older label" - missing a letter "Carey's"
 * Background and Recording

"having written the former with Jimmy Jam and Terry Lewis" - again, not sure why "former" is stated here?

Delink "Walter Afanasieff". Don't really need to link his name two times, we got the idea above this section.
 * There For Me

"In an interview with Fred Bronson, Carey described the her original feelings" - Do you want to remove "the" from this sentence?
 * Composition

"to be aired on December 21." - does this mean the special will be airing this year? If not then maybe stating "which aired on December 21 of that same year."
 * Live performances

I'm going to put the article for further development for seven days. Good luck, AJona1992 (talk) 22:27, 8 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Notes


 * Done all :)-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   01:03, 10 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your work on this article. It has now ✅. Cheers, AJona1992 (talk) 01:33, 10 July 2011 (UTC)