Talk:New Allegiances/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 04:19, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:19, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * "The episode was written by Neil Cross; with additional writing by Ben Richards; and directed by Colm McCarthy." the semicolons should be commas
 * "known for kidnapping intelligence officers and sell them to be tortured." selling
 * "is kidnapped by members of an Al-Qaeda cell while on his way home to see his wife and new born daughter." newborn should be 1 word
 * "Lucas feels determined to help following," a bit confused as to whats meant here

Just a few small issues; I'll put it on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:54, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I have sorted out those issues. Thanks for reviewing the article. -- Matthew RD 18:20, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
 * No problem. Everything looks good, so the article passes. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 02:44, 18 March 2011 (UTC)