Talk:New Boss/GA1

GA Review
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Excellent work on the article, Hunter! Here is some stuff you need to fix before I can pass the article:
 * Add the names of the actors after the characters in the plot section (except for Michael and Charles, since they are mentioned in the lead).
 * Done. —  Hunter  Kahn  ( contribs )  01:48, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
 * "regarding the dress code" – What does this mean?
 * Tried to clarify. Better now? —  Hunter  Kahn  ( contribs )  01:48, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
 * The third paragraph of the production section is trivia and should probably be removed.
 * Well, WP:TVMOS says regarding errors, "If there is a major mistake that is discussed by a reliable source it can become a part of the production section." This is obviously sourced and the sources are reliable. Also, I added a new source with the writer's response to it. Between all these things, I think this should stay in Production.
 * Ah, I didn't know that. It looks better now.
 * The Wikiquote box links to Golden Ticket (The Office).
 * Oops! Fixed. —  Hunter  Kahn  ( contribs )  01:48, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Websites such as IGN should not be in italics since they are not newspapers or magazines (I have taken care of this, though).
 * Thanks for taking care of that! —  Hunter  Kahn  ( contribs )  01:48, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

Good luck! :)  The Le ft orium  15:42, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Everything looks great so I will pass the article now. Congratulations on another GA! ;)  The Le ft orium  09:32, 7 April 2009 (UTC)