Talk:New City, New Drama/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 17:49, 28 December 2013 (UTC)

As I promised you... :) Prism   △  17:49, 28 December 2013 (UTC)

Lead:
 * General overview
 * Checklinks: Please correct these links.
 * Dablinks: Not present.
 * Original research and other details: Not present; free images are properly used.
 * In depth
 * "In addition to being the pilot episode, it serves as the first installment of the first season." → I don't know why this is necessary.

1. Plot
 * I don't think these redundancies are needed, to be honest. Here, I'd reccomend keeping the last reference of the section and removing the two others from the remaining paragraphs.

A good article for sure, just check the things I pointed out. Prism  △  17:49, 28 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Final comments


 * Thank you for your review! I've addressed all the comments above. WikiRedactor (talk) 18:05, 28 December 2013 (UTC)