Talk:New Covenant Christian School (Lansing, Michigan)

Spirit Week
This section is confusingly written. The use of 'every day' and 'every week' to condition the same sentence is one source of confusion. Also the sentence appears to inform us that Spirit Week happens in the week before Spirit Week!?! I'm guessing the choice of the theme days for that year is in fact what happens in the week before Spirit Week, but as I have no actual knowledge of this school or its traditions I cannot improve this section myself with any confidence. MrDannyDoodah (talk) 17:41, 15 June 2013 (UTC)

Varsity Boy's Soccer
The paragraph about 2012-2013 doesn't appear to make complete sense, in particular the information given after 'nevertheless' does not appear to make a contradiction with the preceding information, leaving the reader pondering why 'nevertheless' has been used at all. I do however admit I have no knowledge whatsoever of Varsity Boy's Soccer in Michigan schools, and that therefore the reason for the 'nevertheless' may be obvious to Michigan varsity boys who do have knowledge of it. MrDannyDoodah (talk) 17:49, 15 June 2013 (UTC)