Talk:New Harmony Toll Bridge/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Admrboltz (talk) 20:10, 30 January 2011 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * Article should use a combination of the current infobox and infobox bridge, see Benton City – Kiona Bridge for an example. - done (although infobox is not a GA criteria).
 * The way your noting pages in line is incorrect. I would suggest moving the NHRP reference to a "works cited" then cite page numbers inside ref tags. - done
 * "The bridge receives an average of $30,000 per month in tolls and has $22,000 per month in expenses." - wordy -fixed
 * "The bridge was placed on the National Register of Historic Places in 2007." - why? - expanded
 * Since you are using the NHRP app as a reference, no need to duplicate it in the External links section. - removed
 * Things that should be included:
 * this suggests that the bridge is needing to be totally replaced - says $2 million in work needed in 2001, and replacement eventually.
 * the NBI considers the bridge Structurally Deficient. - added
 * this indicates that they were proposing to de-toll the bridge. - I saw that one too, but the states did not want to pick up the maintenance responsibility in 2001, so it never happened.
 * The article could really use some images, either of the toll booth or the bridge its self.
 * I could not find any images on commons. All images on Flickr were copyrighted.

Thank you for your review. I have left comments under each item. Racepacket (talk)

I will now pass the article. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:57, 31 January 2011 (UTC)