Talk:New Jersey Route 122/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: SounderBruce (talk · contribs) 01:43, 3 February 2022 (UTC)

Will review this in a bit.  Sounder Bruce  01:43, 3 February 2022 (UTC)

Lead

 * Distance is too exact for the lead, just round it up.
 * "The route is a former alignment of U.S. Route 22..." is a pretty short sentence and could be padded by stealing from the next sentence, which is too long.
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Route description

 * "Route 122" is repeated too often.
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 * "at the intersection" should be "at an intersection" (this is repeated again later)
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 * Explain why the county is maintaining a state highway.
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 * I'd be a bit worried if the highway "head[ed] through residential homes"
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 * "some trees", "a factory hidden on the Delaware", "through hills and factories" are not supported by a map citation and are filler.
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 * "way away" needs to be reworded.
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 * "paralleling and intersecting" is awkwardly phrased.
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 * "residential homes" and "residential district with homes surrounding the highway" are both redundant and pure filler.
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 * Link to concurrency (road).
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 * "along" is repeated far too often, especially in the concurrency sentence.
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 * Observations about residential and commercial districts need a secondary citation, as they can't be interpreted from Google Maps without going into OR territory.
 * "the highway becomes gradually less populated" is definitely OR.
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 * "interchanging" needs to be replaced.
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 * "designation terminates" can be simplified to "highway terminates".
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 * Shouldn't I-78 be mentioned, as the interchange is right next door?
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 * Mention where New Brunswick Avenue continues towards.
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 * Any traffic counts that can be added?
 * Maybe not.

History

 * "originates" should use past tense.
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 * "an alignment" should include "past"
 * "Phillipsburg-Easton Bridge" needs to use a proper ndash.
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 * "coming in" from where?
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 * A better citation for the 1926 establishment of US 22 is needed, as the national map does not have the proper level of detail.
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 * When was the bypass completed? This sentence is also not supported by the given source.
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 * If US 22 Alternate existed until 1993, why was the 1953 renumbering mentioned? This needs to be made more clear.
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 * Is there another citation to back up the 1993 establishment of Route 122?
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