Talk:New Jersey Route 159/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
 * 2) Fix redlink that should go to Fairfield Township, Essex County, New Jersey
 * 3) Change "uses the names" to "is called"
 * 4) In last sentence of lead, provide a wikilink to 1953 New Jersey state highway renumbering
 * 5) In first sentence of route description, change "of" to "with", wikilink County Route 506 (New Jersey), and change eastern terminus to western terminus, as this intersection is CR 506's western terminus
 * 6) "the Passaic" sounds colliqual
 * 7) "where it leaves Bloomfield Avenue and Route 506 to the north along Oak Road" sounds awkward, rephrase
 * 8) The first sentence in the second paragraph of the route description sounds redundant, eliminate information indicating road left Bloomfield Avenue
 * 9) Use " Bloomfield Avenue" instead of "Bloomfield"
 * 10) Change "on an at-grade intersection" to "at an at-grade intersection"
 * 11) The sentence "The Oak Road moniker ends at that intersection, at which it changes to Clinton Road, continuing Route 614's right-of-way." sounds awkward, rephrase
 * 12) "industrial residences"? sounds awkward
 * 13) Change the sentence "The right-of-way and moniker of Clinton Road continues as County Route 627" to "County Route 627 continues along Clinton Road past the eastern terminus of Route 159"
 * 14) In Route description, it might help if you can add mileposts for each intersection as indicated in the NJDOT straight-line diagram
 * 15) Remove "where 159's northern terminus occurs" from parentheses, place a comma after Fairfield, and use "Route 159" instead of "159"
 * 16) Again wikilink 1953 New Jersey state highway renumbering
 * 17) Add "occurred" after "when the 1953 renumbering of state highways"
 * 18) The history section looks a little short, is there any more information that can be added?
 * 19) Montville is in Morris County and not in Essex County

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 02:47, 2 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Done. We as a project stopped using mileposts in Route descriptions, we just let you get away with it. :) - Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 17:42, 2 March 2009 (UTC)