Talk:New Jersey Route 181/GA1

GA Review
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Comments: I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 18:48, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) New Jersey Route 181 should be Route 181 per WP:USSH. For reference, any of your future NJ GAN's need to follow this convention.
 * 2) From looking at the SLD it does not appear NJ 181 interchanges with NJ 15 several times.
 * 3) "malformed cloverleaf interchange"? What is that supposed to mean? I suggest that this phrase be reworded.
 * 4) Do not use "then" in describing progression of route in route description.
 * 5) The sentence "Residential homes begin to follow the highway around the point where Route 15, the roadway to the east begins to parallel perpendicularly to the north." sounds awkward.
 * 6) Replace "jut" with "turn".
 * 7) Throughout the route description, you begin many sentences with "After"? Can you limit the use of this?
 * 8) The entire route description is sourced from Yahoo Maps. The SLD can also be used as a source.
 * 9) Unbold "State Highway Route 6-A" in history.
 * 10) "when the routes in state of New Jersey were totally renumbered": remove "totally".
 * 11) The last sentence of the History is sourced from Alps' Roads, which is not a reliable source. A different source should be used here.
 * 12) Add the street name for CR 517 to the Major intersections table.


 * Done. Mitch 32(Want help? See here!) 20:34, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 00:29, 21 August 2009 (UTC)