Talk:New Jersey Route 181/GA2

GA Reassessment
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There are significant prose problems in this article:


 * Right in the lead, three consecutive sentences begin with the same words.
 * this time with Route 15 southbound only, where it turns to the northeast and heads into deeper into Jefferson Township - what is it?
 * The route crosses over the lake a short distance - so it stops halfway across the lake?
 * Past Lake Hopatcong, the highway is primarily surrounded by dense woodlands and very little development. - redundancy
 * Residential homes
 * More repeated words.
 * makes a sudden spike - wrong word
 * to the east, north, and west - ! Why not the south?
 * Route 181 Southbound - should be lowercase S
 * without the highway turn - huh?
 * through the development of Sparta - too vague
 * and into the undeveloped woodlands
 * coming to a partial trumpet interchange - link?

Please go through and copyedit this as this was just from a cursory look. I will put this on hold for the standard 7 days. --Rschen7754 04:21, 2 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Lead fixed. Going through the RD tomorrow. Mitch 32 (The created world is but a small parenthesis in eternity.) 05:04, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Lead and RD completely rewritten. Mitch 32 (The created world is but a small parenthesis in eternity.) 16:27, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Okay, that's good enough for me. --Rschen7754 03:46, 3 June 2015 (UTC)