Talk:New Jersey Route 77/GA1

GA Review
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 * 1) RD - "Route 77 heads into a commercial area crosses into Upper Deerfield Township at milepost 2.34 at the intersection with Laurel Plaza Drive." - crossing? A bit too much parallelism - vary the sentence structures a little bit. You have "It meets County Route cc at yy.yy miles, County Route dd at zz.zz miles, and County Route ee at aa.aa miles".
 * 2) Remove citation in lead.
 * 3) Neutral, broad, stable, images good.

On hold I would try to mix the prose up a bit to make it more varied. Otherwise the article is good. --Rschen7754 (T C) 06:55, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
 * I have gone back and made the suggested changes. Dough4872 (talk) 15:26, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Passing. --Rschen7754 (T C) 16:26, 5 January 2009 (UTC)