Talk:New Jewish Cemetery, Kraków

WP: Death assessment commentary
I assessed the article for WP: Death. A good article on the way to becoming an excellent article. Here are points for improvement: Good luck! Boneyard90 (talk) 12:09, 11 November 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Notable burials: There is a long list. I would advise paring it down a bit. If the individual doesn't have his own article, a short one-line definition that explains relevant notability is appropriate.
 * 2) Also, the "Notable Burials" section needs a reference.
 * 3) The Lead section needs to be expanded. It should be a short summary of the contents.
 * 4) I noticed one sentence mentions "Many monuments". This should be explained. How many is "many"? Are any or all of the monuments notable? It needs a reference and at least a short explanation. Are the monuments plaques or statues, are they privately donated, paid for by public donations, or by government funds, etc?