Talk:New York Produce Exchange/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * Add alt text to every image being used.
 * Remove the comma after "on the block".
 * "at a cost of" "for" (less wordy)
 * "At the end of the end of" "At the end of"
 * "During 1880" "In 1880"
 * Remove the hyphen between "new-building".
 * Remove the hyphen between "animal-heads".
 * Remove the comma after "stairways were placed".
 * Add a hyphen between "stained glass".
 * "separately of each" - shouldn't "of" be "from"?
 * Remove the comma after "other respects".
 * "Salad Oil scandal" "salad oil scandal" (see article)
 * Wikilink The New York Times, Meyer Berger, and Edith Evans Asbury.

Progress

 * Thanks. I have resolved these issues now. Epicgenius (talk) 00:50, 10 July 2021 (UTC)