Talk:New York State Route 100/GA1

GA Review
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 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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Manual of Style and spelling
as per automatic peer reviewer... End automatic peer Reviewer...
 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
 * Per Wikipedia:Context and Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, if January 15, 2006 appeared in the article, link it as January 15, 2006.[?]
 * As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.[?]
 * Spelling error Autombile Club of New York
 * What is a NYSDOT?
 * What is a frontage road; is there a wikilink for this terminology?
 * The road was made free in 1849 Can this sentence be re-worded - such as the funding for construction of...was no longer needed, the toll was removed, and travel along the route was without charge.  ...
 * What is a spur, is there a wikilink for this term as well?
 * Not all mileages stated have the corresponding kilometer conversion given, only some do.

Broad in Coverage

 * the beginning is at a fancy Cloverleaf interchange. Is there a record of when this infrastructure was constructed? citation 3
 * what is the Hartsburg Preserve at the intersection of NY 100 and W. Hartsdale Road? citation 3
 * In Somers what is the Angle fly preserve? citation 3
 * The Croton Turnpike was also called the Somerset Turnpike, but is not mentioned. citation 9
 * What is the economy? Are there tourists, farm trucks, transport trucks using this route?  How would the marble quarries at Sing Sing affect the highway and maintenance?    Would driving cattle to market on foot be along the route?  When the agriculture shifted to dairy, did dairy trucks affect highway traffic?   citation 9
 * the proposed Central Corridor Expressway was to become a six-lane highway. What is it now?  2 lane divided, 4 lane undivided, does it change along the route?  citation 15  The photo appears to be a 4 land undivided highway.  Does the highway have shoulders,... for the whole route, or partial?  Does the construction asphalt, cement, gravel change along the route?
 * It appears the main reason for the Westchester County Planning Department to implement a proposed Central Corridor Expressway was for summer traffic to and from northerly resort areas. Is tourism a major economic industry here, and the highest impact of traffic on the route? citation 15
 * What is the scenery, or view like along the route? All towns and cities, trees, farms, hills, mountains?

RE citations

 * The google book references for online book transcriptions are awesome, can the page numbers be given for the citations numbered 5, 8 and 7?

RE: Images
Photos taken in dim light should not be used.

Re Image:100-100A-100C near Sprain Brook.jpg, and Image:100-100AScarsdale.jpg the commons page suggests attribution required, so add photo credit of Mitchazenia.

Overall
On hold This is a nice piece of work, but it still has some shortcomings with respect to the good article criteria.

Please address these matters soon and then leave a note here showing how they have been resolved. After 48 hours the article should be reviewed again. If these issues are not addressed within 7 days, the article may be failed without further notice. Thank you for your work so far.

Good luck improving the article SriMesh | talk  04:31, 23 June 2008 (UTC)

Failed

 * There have been no comments nor updates to the article, and absolutely no feedback. Compared to Borman Expressway another good article which shows only engineering type content, this article shows only route content, and doesn't even say what kind of highway this route is, divided or undivided, truck route or gravel and the information is available.  There is still a spelling error, and not all measurements of mileage have kilometer conversion.  SriMesh |  talk  02:32, 27 July 2008 (UTC)